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Except AC convo mala aaj cha epi nahi aavdla but I'm excited for tomorrow's epi

I think kusum la mhatarine bolaval asel sajun marriage baddal vicharpus karayla

Originally posted by: md410

I have not watched it yet and might not watch. It is obvious Priya gonna lie.

I so knew it that chaitanya would not confess to Arjun that he told sakshi about contract.
He still has no sympathy from me. Another thing after knowing how sakshi is, he is still asking and believing her about not telling contract anyone.

@bold- goes to show that Chai is maha murkh.

And has learned nothing from life experience.

Originally posted by: NerdyMukta

@bold- goes to show that Chai is maha murkh.

And has learned nothing from life experience.

Yep

That’s why I keep calling him dumb and stupid. No wonder he is still assistant and not able to establish his own practice

Originally posted by: Utkarsha999

Except AC convo mala aaj cha epi nahi aavdla but I'm excited for tomorrow's epi

I think kusum la mhatarine bolaval asel sajun marriage baddal vicharpus karayla

AC convo shivay....mala आई ने प्रिया la sapshel ignore केलं ते आवडलं!! प्रिया has high confidence of getting married with Arjun....and thinks bad for his mother...mhane tujhe haal करेन 😡

आजी एक हलक्या कानाची आहे....प्रिया जे सांगेल ते खरंच वाटतं तिला..... स्वतः cha नातू कोणाच्या ही सांगण्यावरून वागत नाही...एवढं तिच्या लक्षात येऊ नये🤷🤷

कुसुम अर्जुन सोबत दिसली आहे....so may be he has called her...and is shaking hands with her to find out सायली chya मनातलं!!

उद्या फुल्ल ड्रामा episode असणार👍

Originally posted by: Vanni03

कुसुम अर्जुन सोबत दिसली आहे....so may be he has called her...and is shaking hands with her to find out सायली chya मनातलं!!

As zal tr majja yeil kharch pn kusum tai Arjun la help karel🤔

Originally posted by: Utkarsha999

Except AC convo mala aaj cha epi nahi aavdla but I'm excited for tomorrow's epi

I think kusum la mhatarine bolaval asel sajun marriage baddal vicharpus karayla

Oh come on agdich epi n aavdanya sarkh kay hot tyat 🙄

Originally posted by: Vanni03

AC convo shivay....mala आई ने प्रिया la sapshel ignore केलं ते आवडलं!! प्रिया has high confidence of getting married with Arjun....and thinks bad for his mother...mhane tujhe haal करेन 😡

आजी एक हलक्या कानाची आहे....प्रिया जे सांगेल ते खरंच वाटतं तिला..... स्वतः cha नातू कोणाच्या ही सांगण्यावरून वागत नाही...एवढं तिच्या लक्षात येऊ नये🤷🤷

कुसुम अर्जुन सोबत दिसली आहे....so may be he has called her...and is shaking hands with her to find out सायली chya मनातलं!!

उद्या फुल्ल ड्रामा episode असणार👍

Mhatari kiti bawlat aahe hicha natu hich ekat nahi mg eka stranger muli chya trap madhe kasa phasel yevad kalu naye sadh sathi budhhi nathi mhantat te hech asel

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Oh come on agdich epi n aavdanya sarkh kay hot tyat 🙄

Ag chaitu ne upset kel mala aaj Arjun shi khar bolla nahi to

Originally posted by: Utkarsha999

Except AC convo mala aaj cha epi nahi aavdla but I'm excited for tomorrow's epi

I think kusum la mhatarine bolaval asel sajun marriage baddal vicharpus karayla

The amount of investigation they do on Sayli, on each of her step, I wish they did it the same for Priya(Tanvi), when Sayli acts like Pratima and Priya fails , they would have found Tanvi ( and for all you may know Pratima also). I hope Kusum recognizes the photo on one of her visit , and say she is "Kavitha Tai"

I noticed your fan fiction book, and I am delighted that one more author is creating fan fiction about Marathi TV.

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/4072

My suggestions:

1. All capital letters make the reader feel shouted at. Not beginning sentences with a capital letter would look like you wrote in a hurry. So, it's a good idea to follow conventions of capitalization and make the reader feel welcome.

2. You wrote that Nagraj thought only one girl was born, so he gave Anvi to a stranger couple. Reading this, my first impression was that you changed your story's premise while telling the reader about it: Nagraj was unaware that Tanvi had a twin ... no, Nagraj separated Anvi and Tanvi. In most separated-at-birth stories, even if the parents are unaware that they had twins, the baby-stealer knows, and that is consistent with twins in real life being born an average of 15 minutes apart and placed together. It's my mistake that I didn't understand your premise, but you can avoid bad impressions like mine. There's no need to explain who separated Anvi from Tanvi, right in the summary itself. Keep it as a surprise, so that there is some suspense. Instead, your summary could tease the reader with a clue: Ashwin wonders why Tanvi looks exactly like his ex-girlfriend Rhea, or Tanvi's birthday always included prayers for her long-lost twin Anvi.

3. Your summary should give the reader a sense of the characters' personalities, ambitions, formative experiences, and feelings. Telling me who is whose sibling/child, where they fell in love, and that Rhea "married someone else" (name? personality? dead or alive now?) doesn't make me care about the characters. You can look at any of my fan fictions and tell me if the summary makes you want to read the first chapter.

4. Remember that anyone can read your fan fiction, even I who haven't watched the show and have no idea who all these names are. From an internet search, I gathered that Ashwin is a canonical character and the Tamil original's heroine has an identical twin named Jessica. However, that doesn't help me to guess which characters will be in your story and how they will treat each other. Your summary should tell us something about Ashwin's/Rhea's relationships with each other, siblings, parents, Nagraj ... whoever is in your story.

5. I am commenting here because I can't comment in your fan fiction book until you post a chapter. Do you have the beginning of your story written? Just start writing and let it take shape, and share it when you are ready. Good luck!