KMTMG EDT # 5 - Page 49

Hey Y'all, how you doing?

Since I Saw last precap, something came in my mind (which won't happen but thought I'll share).

Since it is all crap yeh hai mera bagwass wala twist: Jayshika ki shaadi mein Anu aur Virat ke zabardasti shaadi to fail Mother Matlabi plan. Jayshika ke shaadi rokh ne ke liye kya Virat aur Amruta utaenge ek Bada Kadam? Voilà! 😅

Itna non Logic and no head and tail story diya yeh wala bakhi hai🙄 Seriously, is it too much to expect a good story from ITV writers?

Originally posted by: vivkriti

They even did not shown recent Virat confrontation with his mother over keeping Roka secret and passing blame on him infront of Chitnis family. He cannot take his mother such a big blunder casually. They always shows everyone weak infront Babita giving her full control over the house thats why she turned into monster.

Think they are keeping his confrontation for later... which is really bad. What she did was betrayal in a way. This was a good place where he could've at least voiced his disagreement. Let her justify her actions / blame him / agree with him... and continue doing the thing she planned for the next day.

They are likely to bring the confrontation in such a way that it is triggered by something that Abhiraj does - again, making Abhiraj's intervention not really necessary... what Babita does by herself was enough.

A related point is whatever anger he will end up having with Babita will be shown for 5 mins ... unlike the ~ 2 eps he took for getting his sadistic pleasure around what Aaji said.

Meanwhile, they are unaware that keeping Virat silent and not even voicing a 'small' disagreement makes him look lame.

PS: Abhiraj's actions look like: There are some gifts wrapped and ready to be gifted... Only thing he does is removes the name of whoever is presenting it and keeps the gift where the receiver sees it. And to do this they needed 2 new characters!

Originally posted by: vivkriti

How tearing legal paper is a crime and court stamp comes after both party sign the paper . Do they feel audience are fool that not to know about such silly things. Also joining teared paper that too such important papers how can be considered valid they are just making mockery of law.

Ammu and Bhavani scene was good hope she stays strong in future and make her proud. First time liked Coolie and Ammu scene too as you said it was decent. Also loved Ammu giving back to Babita and Mistress. As we assumed Mistress and Abhiraj one team now against Coolie and Ammu.

Could've shown the court stamp (fake of course).... May be that shows the system to be corrupt - well... not a new thing to show isn't it? - but at least doesn't show the lead dumb. Ammu meanwhile can make a note of it - next time burn the papers. or keep the torn up part with her and dispose it off herself.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

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A related point is whatever anger he will end up having with Babita will be shown for 5 mins ... unlike the ~ 2 eps he took for getting his sadistic pleasure around what Aaji said.

Meanwhile, they are unaware that keeping Virat silent and not even voicing a 'small' disagreement makes him look lame.

PS: Abhiraj's actions look like: There are some gifts wrapped and ready to be gifted... Only thing he does is removes the name of whoever is presenting it and keeps the gift where the receiver sees it. And to do this they needed 2 new characters!

That's what I absolutely loathe the most. Where the negative characters will be roasted, those scenes are packed up and disposed off within 5-10 minutes.. but where there is likelihood of the female lead and her family getting humiliated, it will be dragged over 2 episodes. But there is nothing we can do except protest and gloat when the trp goes down.

I am damn sure the fact that Jayesh made the flat papers in the name of his mistress also may be blown up in a huge issue somewhere in the future.

Trp 1.0 (-0.1)

Did better than I expected.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Trp 1.0 (-0.1)

Did better than I expected.

But it's a steady fall of -0.2 from 1.3. If I were the Cv, I definitely would be alarmed.

My story writing isn't upto the mark, screenplay and dialogues are regressive except for the odd scene here and there.. (today Blabber will ask regarding Amruta whether she can be put in jail for tearing court docs) , lead couple ka bhar bhar ke scenes ke baad bhi ratings are falling, FL and her family ke humiliation ke baad bhi ratings are falling...

Definite cause for alarm.🔔🔔🔔

Originally posted by: flutterby

But it's a steady fall of -0.2 from 1.3. If I were the Cv, I definitely would be alarmed.

My story writing isn't upto the mark, screenplay and dialogues are regressive except for the odd scene here and there.. (today Blabber will ask regarding Amruta whether she can be put in jail for tearing court docs) , lead couple ka bhar bhar ke scenes ke baad bhi ratings are falling, FL and her family ke humiliation ke baad bhi ratings are falling...

Definite cause for alarm.🔔🔔🔔

Yeah. I'd be worried about the drop from 1.3 to 1.1 before the IPL started.. but probably relieved it didn't go to 0.9 when it did. But may be 'kya farak padta hai?' is the most genuine dialogue they ever wrote.

Balance in screenplay is a big issue on the show front for me. Bhavani humiliation - yes that should happen for the story to move on (not being sarcastic... I see the importance of it), but not for the whole episode. Rajeev had to be dealt with and brought back too... since you need him for later. Currently things should've moved on to the engagement... fine.. but also should've had a small confrontation b/w Virat - Babita... despite which she will go ahead with all pomp. Now since they will work together on a new project... get them out of the terrace too.. Is it necessary that the leads be fighting anymore - with the presence of all the negatives around?

some scenes which they missed out on - Dildaar-Amruta after the deal is signed, same with Virat-Babita along with their confrontation later.

btw, also learning that for a few days at least they are not regular about timing on TV.

Originally posted by: flutterby

But it's a steady fall of -0.2 from 1.3. If I were the Cv, I definitely would be alarmed.

My story writing isn't upto the mark, screenplay and dialogues are regressive except for the odd scene here and there.. (today Blabber will ask regarding Amruta whether she can be put in jail for tearing court docs) , lead couple ka bhar bhar ke scenes ke baad bhi ratings are falling, FL and her family ke humiliation ke baad bhi ratings are falling...

Definite cause for alarm.🔔🔔🔔

Abhi kahan todha aur niche ajaye...Phir bhi, they will blame IPL this time (the best viewers wale joh Amvira Amvira sing karte hai)

But on a serious note, they should be alarmed and read some of us who are guiding them to improve, man!

Lack of Virat-Babita confrontation is a big blunder. It is as though Virat, his dad and rest are used to Babita interfering in others lives routinely and they just go about it as if it their internal domestic family matter related to some servants working there. Ishika/Jayesh need to be brought to senses or TRPs will drop further be it IPL or not. It is better Rajiv/Nimrit get focused asap and at least we get to see one redeemed character after that, Nimrit.

Lots of bts and videos showing the Ahuja clan enjoying and dancing is also adding to viewers' frustration.

I feel like rewinding and getting back all the KMTMG ZRA awards except Sriti's popular actress award, since the rest are baseless.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

...Balance in screenplay is a big issue on the show front for me. Bhavani humiliation...

Yep, balance nahin hai. Humiliation is not a problem, but it should be logical. Amruta wala was def not required because of her "strong" character layers. The fact they made her silent, helpless and all, didn't work for me because she can put down the whole A Clan.

Bhavani was required to stand up for herself and stop being a problem. Your man cheated on you, just tell, na! After all, he doesn't care so why protect him? For the sake of children who don't even care, come on, move on! Do you, Darling! What is she waiting for? I know purane kayal wali hai but there is something called improvement. She should motivate herself to study or whatever can help her be a better version of herself...Lakin hum kya expect kar sakte hai CVs se