Entwined - A #RuNak SS - 03/04/24 UPDATE: PART 6- Page 7 - Page 8

Originally posted by: __VIHU

You're an orphan, the daughter of a maid. All you need to exist is food, shelter and clothes which the Boses give you - you don't need anything else"

My God… This line made me tear up. You’re always so on point with your dialogues. I missed previous chapter despite checking the thread for update. I adore your story so much… every interaction between “Sir ji” and jhanak seems so fulfilling. The part where Jhanak realises that Boses already treat her worse whatever she does then why not accept lil kindness from the guy who so selflessly proffers his hand everytime she’s down… bulls-eye.

Everytime I visit the forum I look forward to an update from you. I often read your analysis and thoughts in discussion thread and think that you’ve more understanding of Ani’s and Jhanak’s feelings than the writer themselves.

Hope you’re doing well Mridzy… Keep the awesome updates coming

hiiii! I've missed your comments on this story!

Thanks Vihu! to be honest I didn't know where I was going with this part as it was completely different to what I had in mind and I just let the flow take control as I wrote! 😁 To know that you loved it is amazing!! :)

Do read the other parts when you get time - I can link it if that helps

Is there anything I can do to improve? Did you think delving into Jhanak's feelings were sudden for this part? Let me know!

Originally posted by: Mridzy

hiiii! I've missed your comments on this story!

Thanks Vihu! to be honest I didn't know where I was going with this part as it was completely different to what I had in mind and I just let the flow take control as I wrote! 😁 To know that you loved it is amazing!! :)

Do read the other parts when you get time - I can link it if that helps

Is there anything I can do to improve? Did you think delving into Jhanak's feelings were sudden for this part? Let me know!

Wow - you have captured Jhanak’s mind precisely..

I loved how you wrote..She merely exists here.. not living and Ani knows he is not doing enough.

Every time he had tried to help her, she had pushed him away with this intention, convinced that she was only causing him trouble.

And yet, despite her best efforts to keep her distance, she found herself drawn to him.

This beautifully explains the wall of insults she has built to push him away.. and how today’s indication of her love is not impromptu stemming out of the impending separation, but something she has felt all along💕💕

Keep writing

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Nothing felt forced or sudden, everything was in perfect harmony.And I’ve mentioned it before that your take on Anirudhha made me adore him even more and you writing with jhanak pov was cherry on top. Loved it. Of course I’m planning on re reading the entire story.. you’re tooooo good.

Thank you Vihu - I said this when I started this story, I enjoy writing men who are nice, sweet and believe in doing the right thing! :)

This Ani is NOT going to be the jackass he sometimes is in the show!

Originally posted by: Aadia

Wow - you have captured Jhanak’s mind precisely..

I loved how you wrote..She merely exists here.. not living and Ani knows he is not doing enough.

Every time he had tried to help her, she had pushed him away with this intention, convinced that she was only causing him trouble.

And yet, despite her best efforts to keep her distance, she found herself drawn to him.

This beautifully explains the wall of insults she has built to push him away.. and how today’s indication of her love is not impromptu stemming out of the impending separation, but something she has felt all along💕💕

Keep writing

Thank you!!! I want to keep writing this one and hopefully complete this story. :)

Wow, just binge-read all the chapters in one go! So glad I stumbled upon this gem. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: PeachyPisces

Wow, just binge-read all the chapters in one go! So glad I stumbled upon this gem. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank youuu!!! I am so glad you liked this.

Thanks for reading and commenting. Will try to post the next chapter soon

Mridzy.. I am back on Runak reading and writing.. 2 chapters due here.. will read and comment

Originally posted by: tellyme

Mridzy.. I am back on Runak reading and writing.. 2 chapters due here.. will read and comment

Thank you Anu! Waiting!

Chapter 4

Lovely.. full on Runak.. his tending and her na na.. the mind talks were wonderful..

Sorry for delay in reading