Maaneet OS - Elevator Encounters - Part 2 - COMPLETE - 26/3/24 - Pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sweet os. Nicely written. Maan loves annoying Geet but she can't escape his charm.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fabulous and Confident OS


Though Geet works for Maan , but she unlike

the other ladies in the office she does not do all the stuff they do

she stands up to Maan , then of course she is educated and uses her mind

which certainly attracts Maan

so both throwing challenges at each other and now Maan has accepted too


Thank you! Yes, Geet works for Maan and is quite different from all the other women in the office - she is determined, professional, knows her job and does it well. She stands up to him, and challenges him - how could Maan escape? 😁😁


Would you be interested to read a companion pc to this OS as a follow up on this after Maan accepts Geet's challenge?


Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Migraine

Sweet os. Nicely written. Maan loves annoying Geet but she can't escape his charm.


Thank you!

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Posted: 1 years ago
#14

Hello Mridzy! Welcome to the forum.

Thanks for sharing this OS!


Fabulous OS.... superbly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she cannot help but think about hot and dashing boss Mr MSK

aka Dhak Dhak and Mr. Dreamboat

he indeed commands presence

well she has come to know Maan him

of cos she is drawn to him

enjoyed their banter

however his cockiness does irritate her

so he reminded her who signs her paycheck

her reaction was justified

not surprised with the chemistry between them

wonder who will make the first move?

hmm Maan hates his female staff swooning over him

alas he knows Geet is different

and that's what attracts Maan to her

she defies and challenges him

but he is miffed that she is not affected by him

ahh if he only knew

love Maan drooling on Geet

yet again Maan taunted Geet

pleased that Maan is slowly and steadily falling for Geet

this battle of words is much more

admire how she responded

Gosh she challenged him.....

interesting

as expected he accepted...........


please continue

looking forward to more stories from you

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Mridzy


Thank you! Yes, Geet works for Maan and is quite different from all the other women in the office - she is determined, professional, knows her job and does it well. She stands up to him, and challenges him - how could Maan escape? 😁😁


Would you be interested to read a companion pc to this OS as a follow up on this after Maan accepts Geet's challenge?


Thanks for reading and commenting!


Yes please do a follow up OS or even an SS

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Posted: 1 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hello Mridzy! Welcome to the forum.

Thanks for sharing this OS!


Fabulous OS.... superbly written

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

she cannot help but think about hot and dashing boss Mr MSK

aka Dhak Dhak and Mr. Dreamboat

he indeed commands presence

well she has come to know Maan him

of cos she is drawn to him

enjoyed their banter

however his cockiness does irritate her

so he reminded her who signs her paycheck

her reaction was justified

not surprised with the chemistry between them

wonder who will make the first move?

hmm Maan hates his female staff swooning over him

alas he knows Geet is different

and that's what attracts Maan to her

she defies and challenges him

but he is miffed that she is not affected by him

ahh if he only knew

love Maan drooling on Geet

yet again Maan taunted Geet

pleased that Maan is slowly and steadily falling for Geet

this battle of words is much more

admire how she responded

Gosh she challenged him.....

interesting

as expected he accepted...........


please continue

looking forward to more stories from you


Aww thank you so much for leaving this detailed feedback - you picked up on everything I wanted to depict through this OS, so I consider that a major success for me. Thanks!


That was a shock na, Geet being bold and challenging Maan to take the next step?! 😁😁


I'll try to do a follow up OS to this one! :)


Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

superb os

the attraction between them was so obvious

maan accepted the challange

please write a concluding part

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: heycookie

superb os

the attraction between them was so obvious

maan accepted the challange

please write a concluding part


Thank you!! I'll try doing a follow up OS to this one soon!


Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004


Yes please do a follow up OS or even an SS


I'll try to do a follow up OS. Thanks.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Mridzy


Aww thank you so much for leaving this detailed feedback - you picked up on everything I wanted to depict through this OS, so I consider that a major success for me. Thanks!


That was a shock na, Geet being bold and challenging Maan to take the next step?! 😁😁


I'll try to do a follow up OS to this one! :)


Thank you for reading and commenting!


I no need to say thanks. smiley4

already waiting for the follow up OS

or make it an SS?

if not write an SS! smiley1

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