Sweet os. Nicely written. Maan loves annoying Geet but she can't escape his charm.
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Sweet os. Nicely written. Maan loves annoying Geet but she can't escape his charm.
Originally posted by: taahir004
Fabulous and Confident OS
Though Geet works for Maan , but she unlike
the other ladies in the office she does not do all the stuff they do
she stands up to Maan , then of course she is educated and uses her mind
which certainly attracts Maan
so both throwing challenges at each other and now Maan has accepted too
Thank you! Yes, Geet works for Maan and is quite different from all the other women in the office - she is determined, professional, knows her job and does it well. She stands up to him, and challenges him - how could Maan escape? 😁😁
Would you be interested to read a companion pc to this OS as a follow up on this after Maan accepts Geet's challenge?
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Originally posted by: Migraine
Sweet os. Nicely written. Maan loves annoying Geet but she can't escape his charm.
Thank you!
Hello Mridzy! Welcome to the forum.
Thanks for sharing this OS!
Fabulous OS.... superbly written
Geet's thoughts were reasonable
she cannot help but think about hot and dashing boss Mr MSK
aka Dhak Dhak and Mr. Dreamboat
he indeed commands presence
well she has come to know Maan him
of cos she is drawn to him
enjoyed their banter
however his cockiness does irritate her
so he reminded her who signs her paycheck
her reaction was justified
not surprised with the chemistry between them
wonder who will make the first move?
hmm Maan hates his female staff swooning over him
alas he knows Geet is different
and that's what attracts Maan to her
she defies and challenges him
but he is miffed that she is not affected by him
ahh if he only knew
love Maan drooling on Geet
yet again Maan taunted Geet
pleased that Maan is slowly and steadily falling for Geet
this battle of words is much more
admire how she responded
Gosh she challenged him.....
interesting
as expected he accepted...........
please continue
looking forward to more stories from you
Thank you! Yes, Geet works for Maan and is quite different from all the other women in the office - she is determined, professional, knows her job and does it well. She stands up to him, and challenges him - how could Maan escape? 😁😁
Would you be interested to read a companion pc to this OS as a follow up on this after Maan accepts Geet's challenge?
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Yes please do a follow up OS or even an SS
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hello Mridzy! Welcome to the forum.
Thanks for sharing this OS!
Fabulous OS.... superbly written
Geet's thoughts were reasonable
she cannot help but think about hot and dashing boss Mr MSK
aka Dhak Dhak and Mr. Dreamboat
he indeed commands presence
well she has come to know Maan him
of cos she is drawn to him
enjoyed their banter
however his cockiness does irritate her
so he reminded her who signs her paycheck
her reaction was justified
not surprised with the chemistry between them
wonder who will make the first move?
hmm Maan hates his female staff swooning over him
alas he knows Geet is different
and that's what attracts Maan to her
she defies and challenges him
but he is miffed that she is not affected by him
ahh if he only knew
love Maan drooling on Geet
yet again Maan taunted Geet
pleased that Maan is slowly and steadily falling for Geet
this battle of words is much more
admire how she responded
Gosh she challenged him.....
interesting
as expected he accepted...........
please continue
looking forward to more stories from you
Aww thank you so much for leaving this detailed feedback - you picked up on everything I wanted to depict through this OS, so I consider that a major success for me. Thanks!
That was a shock na, Geet being bold and challenging Maan to take the next step?! 😁😁
I'll try to do a follow up OS to this one! :)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
superb os
the attraction between them was so obvious
maan accepted the challange
please write a concluding part
Originally posted by: heycookie
superb os
the attraction between them was so obvious
maan accepted the challange
please write a concluding part
Thank you!! I'll try doing a follow up OS to this one soon!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I'll try to do a follow up OS. Thanks.
Aww thank you so much for leaving this detailed feedback - you picked up on everything I wanted to depict through this OS, so I consider that a major success for me. Thanks!
That was a shock na, Geet being bold and challenging Maan to take the next step?! 😁😁
I'll try to do a follow up OS to this one! :)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
I no need to say thanks. 
already waiting for the follow up OS
or make it an SS?
if not write an SS! 
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