Humari Aduhari Kahani (A-D) Pa 2, Pg 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Humari Aduhari Kahani

All the characters are same from the show, but in my fan-fic Chinoo will make his entry along with his wife (Chachi's daughter and Kamma's mother….sorry don't remember her name)…so I hope you guys like it. And its continuation of today's episode – where Divya got shot instead of Amar…and the first scene is same dialog said by Sagar before dying.

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Chapter One – Humari Aduhari Kahani

Part One

Divya takes her last breathe in Amar's arm before closing her eyes; everyone gathered around Amar-Divya and crying for Divya, but all of a sudden Amar stops crying and wipes his tears off saying "this isn't the end of our love story" Sindoora is still having flashback of how she killed Vidya instead of Sagar.

Amar is also having same flashback, but they aren't cleared as Sindoora. Amar looked at Samrat with hatred in his eyes than get up saying "He will never forgive you Samrat Pratap Singh for killing his Vidya?" Soon as Amar says Vidya everyone looks at Amar with confusion, but Amar corrects himself by saying "Divya-ji" and also he adds on "this story isn't finish yet" Amar picks up the gun and aims at Samrat; than change the position and aims himself saying "if their love is pure than they will return again with a new beginning?" Amar was about to shoot himself when Divya opens her eyes remembering all those moment she sent with Sagar, but not that clear but she can hear the same Sagar over and over even saw her killers face clear enough to understand that Sindoora was the person, who shot her not Samrat.

Amar's father says – Divya Beta

Amar stops in mid-way and runs back to Divya, who was lying on the floor with blood, but her eyes are trying to say something, but "what" (he thought to himself).

<<Scene Shift to the hospital>>

Nurses and doctors are running here and there;

Amar just looked at Rajeev his father, but for some reason he didn't hate his father, but respects him for some reason. Rajeev comes and put his hand on Amar's shoulder and saying to himself "Beta, I know that you have many questions in why I switched you with Samrat? But I can't tell you anything right now but the day you learn that Sindoora was the person who killed you and Vidya than you will understand me for saving your life in a difficult situation because I knew that my son was going to be the end for Sindoora"

Amar looked at his father and tries to read his eyes that had many pain in losing his son. Amar wiped his tears by saying " I am not going to ask you – why you switched me when I was young, but I know that you had a good reason and for that I respect you Baba" Rajeev hugged his son with tears saying "I'm proud of you and I knew that one day I would find you Amar Beta"

Sindoora watched the entire scene with weird expression saying "her planned fail in creating misunderstanding between a father and son….instead they forgave each other with any hatred or nothing, but this truth stopped Amar from leaving them and I promise that Amar and Divya will never be come one." Sindoora leaves from that place saying she as to leave out of country within few days but she will stay here until Divya doesn't gain concision.

Amar just gave her a weird smile than leaves with Rajeev and Chandra comes from behind saying "what's her next move?"

<<Scene shift to Divya's room where doctor are trying their best in saving her>>

Nearly six hours pass by but there is no change in Divya's condition only god can save her. They delivered the news to Singh family, but Amar knows nothing will happen to his Divya-ji because he as faith in Shamboonath. Amar leaves from their with tears in his eyes; Mahua was going behind him but Rajeev stops her saying "let him be alone for few minutes to cool down"; Mahua agreed with Rajeev. Amar was going down the hall when he stops at a room and looks through the window feeling strange like someone is calling him. The moment Amar leaves…we get to see the person, who was in that room and its none other than Chinoo and his wife Shalu, who are laying their in coma and for the first time Chinoo, reacts in these many years when he saw Amar walking by. Even the nurse was surprise!

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I think i'll stop over here...but please let me know how I did and if you guys like it than i'll continue. I hope you guys liked it!

Apnki Krishna

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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic story keep it up plzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It's really nice...Great work 👏 👏
Continue soon...keep it up

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika

fantastic story keep it up plzz cont soon

I will if I get more than three replies...

Apeki Krsihna

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanlover

It's really nice...Great work 👏 👏
Continue soon...keep it up

Reena

Thank you Reena and i'll continue after I get one more reply

Apnki Krishna

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😲 thats very nice continue soon, i am waiting. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: afghangirl

😲 thats very nice continue soon, i am waiting. 👏



Thank you so much

Apnki Krishna

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Posted: 17 years ago
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AMAZING! STUPEDOUS! PLZ CONTINUE SOON. I LIKE THIS ... I MEAN I LOVE THIS... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....tht was TERRIFIC!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 lovely
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww that was beautifull ... u should continue.. if u can u should write again today plez

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