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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21

So beautiful 😍 past meeting

Once Maan not think

How can any girl change in front of unknown man

And geet just falling again and again in love with him

Why Maan not know about childhood alliance

Just waiting

How in present geet going react now

Liked when he encircled hand around her waist

Thanks dear smiley31

His father did not tell him - this has been explained in previous chapter

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: maanshi

Awesome update

First meeting was dreamy for geet ... She was all in to maan all her life n after 20 thanks to her friends she is dreaming about maan n knows him ... well ignoring all bad (sameera 😡) simple girl lost in her own world ... Love the way u wrote it 👏👏👏

Maan was there for work n destiny made them meet ... Maan geet in same room ... Geet was so lost in maan thinking all in dreamy way ... Her caring would be .... Not knowing maan don't know about her existences 😥 i hv mixed feelings for that... Love it as it's their first meet... but not liking it if I think about current situation n how maan touchred geet

Maan fought for geet ... Geet the naive girl fall once more for maan ... Love the way u wrote geets feelings for maan 👌

Villagers r mean 😡😡😡 maan was shocked with all that happenings

geet with difficulty mention to darji that he is maan

Present... Maan geet both shocked ... Maan impress with new geet but more happy to see her in front of him ... Geet lost state alaram chetan but he forced geet to stay ... Maan adress Mrs K was shocking ... For geet n for me too 😍 as I thought he will not say anything

All watched AD maan close to geet appreciate her 😍

Love the update 👌 thanks for update 🤗

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments.smiley31

Maan is in trance and cloud 9 to have found her. At present he does not know what to do and what not to do.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Misty is finally in front of Maan.. & they r so shocked as expected. They both remember their first meeting.. it was equally dramatic! So much happened in just one meet… Maan being in her plot, getting into a hut, she coming at same time.. Maan as usual is so cold and seeing her like a nobody, yet he was chivalrous throughout. He wasn’t a douche .. They both slept together with Geet wearing his shirt and her family is creating a ruckus! Except Geet noone knows he is Maan. Irrespective of that those goons were ready to marry her off to him! It ended with Geet telling them that he is Maan. And Maan didn’t know!!! Will he get married due to this pressure & remain without this knowledge of who Geet actually is?!
And the present glimpse at the end, Geet is trying to escape but I think Chetan got pissed off with her absent mindedness.. he warned he to stay. But it got interesting where Maan was not polite or humble with her like I expected, he was infact calling her Mrs Khurana, putting his hand on her waist… didn’t he a few days back talk to himself on how he just wanted to see her and would try not touching her.. he gave up so soon to the temptation.. He has to pursue her and be apologetic… and here he is teasing her smiley15 with all the insults he did to her..

loved the update.. but felt like oh got ended so quickly.. may be bcoz their meeting scenes were not that much & update had more of the past .. It was almost like feeling ok past later let me know what happens now & wt he does … Pls update sooner I’m so eager

Thanks Sudha so much for always coming up with meaty analysis.

@bold1 - Villagers pressure cannot force Maan to marry a girl. That would not make him this rude with her after marriage


@bold - he is in trance and cloud 9 to have found her. It will take him few moment to come into reality.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Amazing update.

So finally maan n geet meet n Remember their 1dt meet of life.

Then also maan was cold to everybody n but he saved geet as an humanitarian basis.

Geet kwns that he is maan n told her darji also.

How maan is going to react when he comes to kwn advay is his child.

How geet is going to react when she comes to advay meets maan as a stranger.

Hope they will b together soon.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet-Cia

Hey Anu,

Thanks for the DM..

'Misty' makes me miss updating TCL (God I love the whole track of that Fiction, but the moment I sit to start typing it am clueless with the chapters..)smiley26

Okay... Coming back to 'The Burnt' smiley4

That flashback of the village scene reminded me of initial Hoshiarpur episodes of GHSP, damn those CVs in GHSP. Kaash woh log Geet aur Maan ko akele pakad lete aur unnki shaadi kara lete toh humein Dev se chhutkara mil gaya hota...smiley4 But seems like what the CVs couldn't achieve there we are head strongly making it happen in our fictions... I am loving this...smiley42

Geet already knew he is her 'honewala woh' and if he had even asked her to drop that patiala pants she wouldn't have shied away to do so, hai na..??smiley43 These cousins actually added all the tadka to her obsession.. Kudos to her cousins..smiley32

That 'Mrs. Khurana' was on purpose right..smiley36

"She was in front of him, it was all that mattered." I feel sad for Maan. He just has pure feelings for her in his heart. He is too much occupied with his penance to even consider how their meeting will change future course. Then getting to know about Advay that'll be another punch in his gut. But I actually want him to suffer for some time, maybe think that Geet had a relationship with some other man and the kid belongs to some other man... Mazza aayega!!smiley15

Okay without waiting for what, when, how and all the questions he has already captivated her and took possession of her with that touch of his. So will Geet confront him?? Or will she get carried away like her younger self did..?? I'm excited to see how Geet confronts him..smiley4


Beautifully written Anu...


Cia..


Hi CIa...I wanted to tell you in your thread itself. I can understand your feelings about TCL as same happened to me with Saathiya. I wish you could update it as I did love that storyline and presentation.smiley31


Regarding 'Misty' - yes it was the name given to Geet by Maan in OG show, with so much love. It holds a special meaning. What else could we choose for her another identity.

@Purple - Can't say that but yes, she was so much in love with him and already surrendered herself to him, that the nights that Maan now consider as a torture he gave her ; for Geet it held different meaning.

@Blue - You got it right.. He is too occupied to know what's going on and how he is behaving.


Thanks for your wonderful comment. Enjoyed every bit of it.smiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago

Beautiful update

Loved it

Maan s shocked to see geet as misty both are thinking over the past of first meeting ..

How geet remembered him as Maan and how Maan s taking care of her .. how village people are treating both maaneet

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They asked Maan to marry geet ..

Geet s trying to excuse herself but Chetan s not leaving geet alone ..

Maan s so happy to meet geet ..

Continue soon

Waiting

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Posted: 1 years ago

They just meet... Maan is shocked... Remembering flashback how they meet n get into marriage.. If he wasn't ready for marriage he had no right hurt her.. Now he is repenting but of no use because whom he hurt isn't there with him.. They meet will they choose to talk or maan will try hard tfor her forgiveness or what will happen when he will know he has a son too.. Unknown to them formed bond... Last scene seems like maan will do anything to get her let's see how

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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 8

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Everyone was lost in Screening of Ad when Misty felt a burning feel of slender fingers in her waist, sending ten thousand voltage current through her.

“Great work” his husky voice overtook her whole identity. She was not in condition to even say “Thank you”.

Maan himself was not in his sense.. she, near him after ages, after losing all hope. His sense was not working, only that he could not let her go, no way this time

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The lights brightened and Maan slipped off his hand from her waist. Mentally scolding himself for once again, like always losing himself in her proximity. No, It’s not about him, it's only about her, he reminded himself.

Everyone clapped

“How did you like the screening Mr Khurana” appeared Chetan from nowhere

Maan looked at Misty “Brilliant..” He then looked at Chetan

“I would like to talk to brain behind it”

“Then she is right next to you..” Chetan turned to Mishty and extended his arms to her and with all excitement

“Mistttyyyyy Khuranaaaa”

Chetan had smile and pride for Misty as he directed her to Mr. Khurana.

Misty, completely confused, did not have the guts to look at Maan. She looked at Chetan in shock which Chetan ignored in his excitement taking it as her usual act

“Misty, here is Mr. Khurana, all yours” excited Chetan said and left

“All yours Mrs. Khurana” Maan repeated to her as Chetan left. He was submitting himself completely to her, ‘in real’. Though it sounded like a tease to Geet

Misty’s voice as if disappeared and her body went numb. It was beyond her imagination that this deep calm voice of his was talking to her

Misty’s lowered eyes and could not see the excitement on Maan’s face. She was there, right in front of him. Of course in an entirely different avatar, he could not even one percent imagine her in this avatar. But that was all secondary, she was right in front of him, was the thing that mattered.

“Bahar chalen? It’s too crowded here.” He asked ever so politely. Misty was confused, if it was him talking to her. First, he is asking her. No he only orders her and then this politeness. She had imagined meeting him in so many ways but every imagination led to his burning angry eyes. This was beyond her imagination. Then it hit her. They were at a business party. He had his class and he would never make a scene at a party. His extreme mannerless acts were reserved for her in private or in front of family. In public she was no one to him.

Misty kept looking on the floor, while Maan’s eyes could not leave her face. She looked even more beautiful. Elegant touch of makeup enhanced her raw beauty. She was wearing a black shimmery gown, with slit till knee on one side. The small opening on both sides on the waist, gave view of her beautiful petite waist. The gown was held with a strap on one shoulder and the other shoulder was bare. It was way beyond his imagination, his Geet could ever dress this modern. She owns a company in London and she is brilliant in her work. He never knew this side of her could ever exist. Miles away from his imagination of her.

Well he never tried knowing her. He had made his assumptions and did all to prove his assumptions true.

Maan’s hand slightly went on her waist to lead her out. Misty’s heartbeat stopped, sensing the sudden feeling of his burning fingers on the bare part of her waist and she jumped in reaction. Maan immediately withdrew his hand

“Let’s go out” he started walking and she followed him. For a long time, he kept walking and she, by his side. Misty’s brian has freezed and heartbeat moving at jet speed, sensing him beside her. They were now on the far end on the decorated lawn

“Take a seat” he signaled towards the bench. Misty without a word followed his instruction and settled there. He sat beside her

“Kaisee ho Geet?” he asked in an extremely soft tone. Misty closed her eyes. Hearing Geet for herself after so many years. No one in her contact now knew she had any other name or identity than Misty.

She had killed Geet to become Misty.

“Kuch toh bolo” Misty was trying to speak but words were as if stuck inside her throat “J… ji.. Ji I am fine” She felt she will faint with his closeness

“Kitna dhoondha maine tumhe.. Everywhere with all possible identity”

She said nothing. Didn’t know how to react. He had been looking for her, but why? He never wanted her in his life then why had he been looking for her? Did he have the idea that she ran away with his baby in her belly? No.. no… no one knew about it.

Maan looked up in the sky, absorbing her silence. Her not welcoming this meeting was so obvious. What has he ever done to expect excitement in her eyes? But he looked up to thank his almighty for at last giving him the glimpse of her.

It was getting hard for Maan to keep distance. He moved his hand and took her palm in his. Misty felt a jolt with her hand in his capture. Was it fear or the feel of his touch after so many years?

“I know you found your peace after leaving me.” He admitted

What could she say? How can she be in peace staying away from him, keeping him away from his child, for her own fear. He would have snatched her baby from her, so she snatched his baby from him. How was she any better? How is she not sinful? How can she be at peace by separating father and son. Making her own child leading his life not knowing his own father. How can she say, she have been mechanically leaving just to provide best for their son and only be human to give him her motherly love

But as the thought of Advay came, fear engulfed her

He looked at her to realize she was at last near him

“I have just been breathing to find you” She narrowed her eyes.

“Kyun” came from her. Why did he need to find her? Her ‘kyun’ pained him. ohh, he deserved it. She has thrown him out of her heart.

“To tell you that you and your trust in your love, won. I had lost the battle long back” Misty did not understand what he was talking about. Why was he even talking normally to her?

Relief ran through Misty as she saw Merul and Chetan coming towards them. Maan turned to the direction of her eyes.

“Mr. Khurana, please come for dinner. Our chef has prepared delicacies as per your taste”

Maan got up “hmmm… let’s go in” he turned to Misty who had not once looked at him after the first eyelock which had shocked her

Misty still did not have the guts to look at him. Her heart was dying to see him, absorb his handsome face but the fear installed was even bigger, not letting her make eye contact with him

“Chetan, I am getting late. If you can excuse me I will take leave”

Chetan looked at his watch “Ohh yes” he turned to Maan

“Mr. Khurana, Merul will lead you to dinner. Misty has family commitments, she will need to leave”

Misty closed her eyes in frustration. Why have Chetan to speak about family commitments

“Family commitments?” The immediate question was obvious from Maan. He looked at Misty

“No, I just do not stay late to parties” Misty gave a stern look to Chetan, which did not go unnoticed by Maan.

“If you don’t mind, Mr. Khurana, I will drop Misty.”

“No Chetan, you stay here. Our clients are here. I will drive back home”

“I will drop her. You are not driving alone in this dark night” both Misty and Chetan looked surprised by Mr. Khurana’s authoritative declaration.

“I mean Mr. Puri, I delayed her, so I take responsibility to drop” he managed

“No Mr. khurana. You blessed this party by your presence is a matter of pride for us. You took interest in talking with our creative head. All these are matters of pride for us. Right, Misty?”

Misty gave faint smile and nodded to Chetan “I will drive back”

“I am dropping you,” Maan declared. Both could not deny him for their own reasons. Misty did not have courage, Chetan could not argue with Mr. khurana.

“Your dinner sir?” asked Chetan wanting to impress the head of his biggest client in all ways. Maan laughed. “Thanks for the wonderful arrangements Mr. Puri. I will, sometimes in future, arrange to have dinner with you”

Chetan thanked him for his generosity and left Misty with him

“Your car keys” he forwarded his hand. She took out the key from her purse and handed it to him. Denying him was an out of the question act for her.

Maan called his driver, Jatin “Meet me in parking lot with my bodyguards”

“I.. I will drive back” she said in a low voice, trying in vain to convince him once again. Maan heard but ignored. No way he is going to let her do things alone, not anymore. This is one chance and he will dedicate it to her service.

In the parking lot, Maan gave her key to his bodyguard “Take her car and follow me”

“Sir!!” They took the order

Geet could not imagine his behavior. The next surprise was - him opening the car door for her. She looked at him. No, this cannot even be her dream. Did he really open the car door for her? He is not angry about her disappearing without informing. Why is he being so good to her?

Maan signaled her to the passenger seat. Misty kept looking at him and then settled in. Maan went around the car and took the driver’s seat. Again a new thing - She had never seen him driving this way. He always took the back seat with the driver in front except when he had to go camping and he took his robust Jeep with him.

Maan asked her to feed her address on the map. Misty’s hand shook as she took his phone from his hand. She was actually giving him her house address.

But did she not know? If she ever meets him and he wishes to know about her whereabouts she could not just run away. The only doubt she had was will he even want to know her whereabouts unless he knows about his son. But here, he was giving her the lift and he is driving her to her home.

The drive was filled with uneasy silence. Both had been lost in their thoughts and absorbing the change, how and why. At last Maan broke the silence

“I was endlessly looking for you Geet but I had never expected to be this surprised”

“Surprised?” she questioned in her mind. Ohh yes, he definitely did not like her new getup, style and independently coming up in public like this. Her making her career, she was not sure if he even approved of that. Well, she never aimed to be an independent, career oriented professional. But the need to provide the best facilities and luxury as much as she could to Advay, had landed her into what she was today. Advay deserved luxury and utmost facilities by his birth but she had snatched it from her baby in her selfish fear, so she took it on herself to provide as much she could to Advay.

Maan waited patiently for her to speak but Misty was lost in her own thoughts. So he continued

“First thing, I never expected to find you in London” She looked at him with no expression on her face as she was still lost on why was he talking this normally to her. But he took it as his chance to pass a soft smile to her.

He kept on driving and the silence again lingered. Maan tried again

“You are so talented, I never knew you could be this capable, by the way you kept so down to earth behavior. I mean yes, it was stupid to have judged you without knowing you”

He surprised her by mouthing himself as stupid. No, he cannot be this to her and why would he be? He was never happy with her and then she disappeared without his permission. Knowing him she knows his ego must have hit hard. Is this his way to get things out of her and then show her the real place.

But in all this, his warm way of talking, his killer smile on his extremely handsome face were creating waves on her shameless heart which had no self respect when he was the person of concern.

Sitting beside him, Misty did not even have the guts to type something on her phone. What if he feels immediately offended and shows his held up anger. Back then she was used to it as a daily activity but now even the thought of facing the same sends shivers through her body.

Maan didn’t mind her staying quiet. Again after a while he continued

“And see how this universe works. You are the creative head of the first Ad campaign of KE in Europe and the project that I created keeping only you in mind - Geetanjali Dream” Misty’s surprise was not stopping. His each set of words were confusing and surprising her.

Maan knew the first thing he needed to do was say sorry. But Sorry would be extremely light weight for his sins and will devalue the amount of wrong that he has done to her. He may sound shameless and he was okay for her to think low of him. Anyways, what else was he, a very low human being. But he will ask forgiveness by his acts and give her confidence to announce any punishment for him.

The map led them to her house. Maan stopped the car looking at her decent house. It was not anywhere to their Mansion in India or Manor here but was a decent size in the suburb of London - Brixton. The house was in the middle of the plot which gave it some backyard and front lawn.

“Thank-You” Misty said, getting down.

“Can I invite myself to your house? Ek coffee bas” he asked shamelessly, knowing very well she is not at all interested in him or his visit. But Maan wanted to give her closure from him if she had not completely moved on. He does not need to be included anyways in her life. But he can return her happiness if she is not happy in any way. If she is lonely and struggling, get it resolved. Do anything to make her life wonderful. If she is happy, very happy, he will silently move out of her life. No, it was not about him, not at all.

Misty, looked at him for a while and then nodded, inviting him. What else could she do? The danger lay ahead but she did not have in her to say no to him.




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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely part 😀😀 can't wait to read further....

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Posted: 1 years ago

Thanks you for the update Anusmiley1.


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