MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 24 - Pg 88 Nov 16 - Page 45

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Chapter 7

Intriguing update… remarkably written

now Maan and Geet recall their past and first encounter

Past…

so that’s how they me

of cos Geet knew who he was

she was indeed happy seeing “her Maan” in front of her eyes

well seeing his pics, Geet started building dreams and having desires

as expected Geet trusted her Maan

she firmly refused to believe anything against him

she clearly believed that Maan knew about her

liked that Maan was captivated by her hazel eyes

great that Maan was concerned about her

Geet’s reaction was reasonable

good that he gave her privacy

as expected Maan was oblivious of the orthodox village thinking and let Geet sleep on his bare shoulder

Gosh the villagers saw them like that

loved that Maan was possessive of Geet

hate these villagers thinking

Geet was really scared

Maan’s confusion was anticipated

at least Geet tried to explain to Brij

glad that Maan stopped Brij from hitting Geet

Maan’s anger was understandable

oh no they wanted to kill Maan and Geet

pleased that Maan managed free Geet from Brij and hold Brij at sword point

Geet was overwhelmed

alas Geet was re captured

admire that Maan wanted to save Geet

not surprised that they were adamant that Maan marry Geet

Maan’s response was justified

he had valid points

ahh Geet’s family were adamant

finally Geet revealed that he is Maan

Present

reality is slowly sinking in

can understand that Geet wanted to leave

but Chetan refused

Maan was just happy seeing his Geet in front of him

Maan’s thoughts well portrayed

Geet was naturally shocked and dealing with seeing Maan

one thing for certain is that she loves Maan immensely

wonderful that Maan addressed her as Mrs Khurana

nice that Maan complimented Geet

surely a first for Geet

loved that Maan is determined not to let Geet leave this time

he has to heal her every pain with love and happiness

will he get to know about Advay?

update soon

Wonderful update dear

Maan and geet remember their past when they are first time meet

Maan shocked to see geet

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Watting for update

Nice update. Both Maan and Geet reminded about their past of how they first met. Geet already knew about her alliance fixed with Maan but he seems to be Unawane. Both are caught in a situation where the villagers are demanding their marriage. In the present situation Both are unable to say anything. They see her ad and Maan is very happy with it.

The most awaited moment! Maan lost himself in it, I wonder how will it go forward; he has a lot of shocker waiting

Amazing update…finally they are face to face …let’s see what’s destiny in store for them …second shocker yet to come for maan

Hey Anu,

Thanks for the DM..

'Misty' makes me miss updating TCL (God I love the whole track of that Fiction, but the moment I sit to start typing it am clueless with the chapters..)

Okay... Coming back to 'The Burnt'

That flashback of the village scene reminded me of initial Hoshiarpur episodes of GHSP, damn those CVs in GHSP. Kaash woh log Geet aur Maan ko akele pakad lete aur unnki shaadi kara lete toh humein Dev se chhutkara mil gaya hota... But seems like what the CVs couldn't achieve there we are head strongly making it happen in our fictions... I am loving this...

Geet already knew he is her 'honewala woh' and if he had even asked her to drop that patiala pants she wouldn't have shied away to do so, hai na..?? These cousins actually added all the tadka to her obsession.. Kudos to her cousins..

That 'Mrs. Khurana' was on purpose right..

"She was in front of him, it was all that mattered." I feel sad for Maan. He just has pure feelings for her in his heart. He is too much occupied with his penance to even consider how their meeting will change future course. Then getting to know about Advay that'll be another punch in his gut. But I actually want him to suffer for some time, maybe think that Geet had a relationship with some other man and the kid belongs to some other man... Mazza aayega!!

Okay without waiting for what, when, how and all the questions he has already captivated her and took possession of her with that touch of his. So will Geet confront him?? Or will she get carried away like her younger self did..?? I'm excited to see how Geet confronts him..

Beautifully written Anu...

Cia..

Thanks for password

Awesome update

Finally they met again

Both remember about their first meeting

Most awaited update. Very nicely described, with Maan and Geet very first meet. Eagerly waiting how it will move forward from here onwards.

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Chapter 7. Finally Maan found Geet as Misty. Both are shocked. Back to Past shows their first meeting. Maan didn't know it's Geet. Geet knew Sameera's link up with him but she is so naive and believed Maan only belongs to her hm. Geet's cousins are cutely teasing her.

Maaneet stuck in rain and the villager find them together. So that's inappropriate according to the village standard. Looks like Brij slapped Geet. Ironically Maan was annoyed and questioned about education and stuff when he ends up doing worse in past. Anyway they say Geet is engaged etc. Geet reveals it's Maan her fiance only.

She got even more mesmerized with Maan for taking a stand for her. In present Maan addresses Geet as Mrs Khurana. Waiting for next

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