MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 24 - Pg 88 Nov 16 - Page 44

Wonderful update Anu ❤️

Just loved it 🤗

The FB was quite well penned but it left me with a frustration as the way villagers were targeting Maan & Geet me annoyed me to the core

It was accident that they were trapped in the Hut but finally Geet realised that it was Maan her fiance & finally she was extremely happy & thrilled to see this surprise 😀

But weather wasn't getting better & finally Geet,g Maan has to be there for the night & next morning entire village made it a big fuss. .. though Maan dealt with it well but he too was unaware of his alliance with Geet

Present Geet tried to escape but his friend didn't let her go as Maan was present there in the party & now after seeing Geet he won't let her go easily

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

So beautiful 😍 past meeting

Once Maan not think

How can any girl change in front of unknown man

And geet just falling again and again in love with him

Why Maan not know about childhood alliance

Just waiting

How in present geet going react now

Liked when he encircled hand around her waist

Awesome update

First meeting was dreamy for geet ... She was all in to maan all her life n after 20 thanks to her friends she is dreaming about maan n knows him ... well ignoring all bad (sameera 😡) simple girl lost in her own world ... Love the way u wrote it 👏👏👏

Maan was there for work n destiny made them meet ... Maan geet in same room ... Geet was so lost in maan thinking all in dreamy way ... Her caring would be .... Not knowing maan don't know about her existences 😥 i hv mixed feelings for that... Love it as it's their first meet... but not liking it if I think about current situation n how maan touchred geet

Maan fought for geet ... Geet the naive girl fall once more for maan ... Love the way u wrote geets feelings for maan 👌

Villagers r mean 😡😡😡 maan was shocked with all that happenings

geet with difficulty mention to darji that he is maan

Present... Maan geet both shocked ... Maan impress with new geet but more happy to see her in front of him ... Geet lost state alaram chetan but he forced geet to stay ... Maan adress Mrs K was shocking ... For geet n for me too 😍 as I thought he will not say anything

All watched AD maan close to geet appreciate her 😍

Love the update 👌 thanks for update 🤗

Loved the update.... Maan and geet are shocked to see each other... As you have revealed some back story about them, i am sure geet had a very painful past, neither her own family supported her nor the man whom she loved... Now she is happy at least with her son... Geet is in a shock state seeing maan in front of her... Waiting for the next part...

Awesome 👍 maan and Geet past story was good, that how they met. Waiting for next update. Even Advay meet with maan

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Nice update..

Commented on blog..

Misty is finally in front of Maan.. & they r so shocked as expected. They both remember their first meeting.. it was equally dramatic! So much happened in just one meet… Maan being in her plot, getting into a hut, she coming at same time.. Maan as usual is so cold and seeing her like a nobody, yet he was chivalrous throughout. He wasn’t a douche .. They both slept together with Geet wearing his shirt and her family is creating a ruckus! Except Geet noone knows he is Maan. Irrespective of that those goons were ready to marry her off to him! It ended with Geet telling them that he is Maan. And Maan didn’t know!!! Will he get married due to this pressure & remain without this knowledge of who Geet actually is?!
And the present glimpse at the end, Geet is trying to escape but I think Chetan got pissed off with her absent mindedness.. he warned he to stay. But it got interesting where Maan was not polite or humble with her like I expected, he was infact calling her Mrs Khurana, putting his hand on her waist… didn’t he a few days back talk to himself on how he just wanted to see her and would try not touching her.. he gave up so soon to the temptation.. He has to pursue her and be apologetic… and here he is teasing her with all the insults he did to her..

loved the update.. but felt like oh got ended so quickly.. may be bcoz their meeting scenes were not that much & update had more of the past .. It was almost like feeling ok past later let me know what happens now & wt he does … Pls update sooner I’m so eager

Lovely update

Waiting for next update... ...

Awesome update .

so finally Maan and mishty met and as expected both were shocked , they remembered their first meeting .Both came out from past and the ad was launched . Maan praised geet and this time he will not leave his geet alone .

Wasn’t that the short update 😟

waiting for next update

Oh yes. Finally face to face

Look at Maan — so totally happy to see her that he has forgotten himself and wants to not loose her. Holding her by the waist and calling her Mrs Khurana

geet is too shocked to react. How can Maan hold her like that without her consent. Hope he doesn’t go back to his old self. He needs to work himself back to gaining her trust back

He has no idea about her current status. He had told himself he will be happy just to see her and if she is happy he will be happy

Waiting to see how things go now

past — so we now know how they met. Ofcourae Maan has no idea about her. But she knew about him Everything. He was grouchy and rude but did help her

so is that how they got married?