KMTMG EDT # 2 - Page 93

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Good point Chalo... temporarily Virat ko maaf kar diya. +1 points from where I had put him earlier.

Agree with the other thing too - could've been better though. Combo scene was nice as always.

Actually they are better when alone together where they slowly started understanding each other which is good for their relationship but when with family Virat is dumb so I will say he may take stand when she will be his family at present just a employee as per Ahujas.

Lovely and Bhavani side you have written perfectly really hope to see her new journey to be confident and independent. Many shows shown EMA but shown getting another partner in name of women empowerment which I really did not liked .why women always need man to be successful and independent she can do it alone if she has strong support of children and MIL.

I have a feeling on Makar Sankranti Babita will mostly expose Jayesh truth to Aaji . Since she feel Amruta spoiled her lohri so she will do something to spoil her Makar Sankranti.

Hope so but I do have doubts after Amruta warning Ishika (parallel with earlier warning to Rajiv). Actually Babita is more desperate than Ishika to let that be known to Aaji. If it happens, I would guess the twist will be Aaji already knows about it - likely reason that made her visit them.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Hope so but I do have doubts after Amruta warning Ishika (parallel with earlier warning to Rajiv). Actually Babita is more desperate than Ishika to let that be known to Aaji. If it happens, I would guess the twist will be Aaji already knows about it - likely reason that made her visit them.

I also feel so she knows about it and purpose of her coming here is that only. Ishika truth will be out soon otherwise no use of bringing such a strong character in between her sole purpose must be to make Bhavani confident and independent.

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Precap has the reason for the slap. If anyone cant see it, During aarti, Rajiv slips Nimrit's dupatta in a burning lamp. Ammu enters home and sees her dupatta buring, pours water on it. which Babita sees (of course).. and does the expected.

btw.. noticed Virat switched to referring to Amruta as 'aap' since yesterdays ep - dont think it was sarcasm too.

Yeh koi reason hai slap karne ki????? What the hell!

Originally posted by: Adiandsid

Well written.

One kind of a fun point: You mentioned 'But i am assuming his character is slowly evolving'... well... that better be the case, else i dont want Amruta in a 10 mile radius around him.

Dont know if you toned down around Babita - if you haven't, and these are your og thoughts, its fine. If you have, write the worst version and tone it down from there. See what comes out and choose the better one. [hope that makes sense].

[I wont write anything here, since it may colour what you write (if you had initially toned down). I have, however, noticed in the past that when it comes to villainous characters, negative comments are taken as a compliment that it is written and acted well. I do think its not - at least not written well.]

Have some thoughts about Bhavani that you triggered. but need more refinement and time. Will discuss later.

No suggestions except for the one in italics around Babita.

Actually not! I just don't know how to make it more relevant. Dekh lungi

New Montage in Zee 5 is kind of cute.

Will the precap scene prompt Amruta to quit, forgetting about the notice period? Hope so.

Also odd if Gautam's alliance goes to engagement. Hope he takes Ammu leaving the job as an excuse to break the alliance. I dont want it to go to an engagement just because it will create drama, when he has no intent of continuing with it. Say, Ammu quits the job, he is employed by Virat. fine - if they want to continue with the character of Gautam.

Was also odd that Ammu talked about her salary slip with the Sathe's. Its okay to delay the climax for drama sake but doing so in this way does question the integrity of the character - which is perhaps a side effect the writers didnt consider. Dont think the writers intended to do that.

Amruta's salary might be higher than Gautam's, so is her designation in her bank.

Aaji guess wanted to test possible ego hassles.