Vanshaj SS - The lost time - Page 4

DB is FAKING this illness right?

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Oh God!

From being sooo hilarious to the sudden shift in emotions

Plus the way you have kept EVERY character's Priorities intact

I am amazed is absolutely an understatement

I genuinely don't know how to appreciate this piece of WRITING Pete

You are AWESOME, You are AWESOME

Thank you

What was your favourite chapter? NeiVika or Rujay's chapter?

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

DB is FAKING this illness right?

I wanted to reveal that he was fsking his memory loss in the epilouge but decided not to do that

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Thank you

What was your favourite chapter? NeiVika or Rujay's chapter?

DB with DharGi

Absolutely most favourite

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

I wanted to reveal that he was fsking his memory loss in the epilouge but decided not to do that

Why NOT? You should

The way you have written it, that will make most sense

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

DB with DharGi

Absolutely most favourite

I was actually crying while writing that chapter so i had to go back and edit most of the typos

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

I was actually crying while writing that chapter so i had to go back and edit most of the typos

Awwww

Yeah actually in sanity he would've never done that Looking forward to how you take this ahead I have full faith in your writing and perception

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Awwww

Yeah actually in sanity he would've never done that Looking forward to how you take this ahead I have full faith in your writing and perception

But this SS has been completed

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

But this SS has been completed

Whaaaaat? Mujhe aisa feel kyun nehi Hua phir? I thought the final bit is still pending