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Part B

Chapter10

 ***Adult Content***

M- Kya kehna chahti ho tum?

He utters in a low yet deep voice.

G- emm…who…your sister…. might…no no-not might…she has romantic feelings for you.

M- What???

G- Calm down, Maan. You promised you will consider this with a cool mind. I saw something in her room…painted. It can be seen in black light. I don’t know she must have removed all that. But the point remains the same. She also threatened me if I say this to anyone. She also told me that she was responsible for the accident with Akhil & not Akhil. She lied to you because she wanted to punish Akhil for breaking up with her.

Maan is literally shaking in his position with jaw & fists clenched.

G- I don’t want you to choose between her and me. I just wanted to share this information with you, Maan. Aage tumhari choice hai. Ek samay tha jab mujhe bhi aisi information pata chali thi jisse meri zindagi jhoothi lagne lagi thi, par phir bhi maine tumpe bharosa kiya tha. Tumhara saath diya tha. Ab aisi hi situation tumhare saamne bhi hai. Main tumse kuch expect nahi kar rahi hoon. Par mujhe yahan se jaana hoga. Main yahan ab nahi reh sakti. Tum chaho toh mujhe rok sakte ho yaa mere saath chal sakte ho

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Geet abruptly leaves.

When Charu asks Maan, he just pensively replies that she has left.

Charu is very happy in her heart.

Maan is sad down & depressed. He is thinking about what Geet had said. He is thinking with a drink in his hand so that he can come up with facts to disprove Geet's theory. At this point he was almost day drinking.

Chaaru thinks this is my chance.

She asks a maid to mix something in his next alcohol bottle.

Chaaru gets ready with her makeup and best lacy dress and red lips. She takes her sweet time to get ready.

Maan had asked for the psychologist to come over for Charu’s psych analysis while pretending to be his friend so that Charu is not alarmed but he had agreed to come next day.

Maan looked quite intoxicated and very hot, Charu thought while getting ready and keeping an eye on the camera she had implanted on the yard adjoining his bedroom with his attached swimming pool.

Thankfully he was drinking there.

'Maan'

He hears his Geet's sweet voice call out his name.

He gets up and stumbles towards the voice.

Charu sees Maan stumble towards something in haste and finds that witch Geet standing in front of Maan

G eetholds Maan firmly to support him

M- u...u r...b..back...

He slurs.

She nods her eyes full of emotions.

G- I couldn't leave. I promised you we won't be apart now. I couldn't go.

Maan cups her face between his hands & seals her lips passionately with his

The kiss was a wild passionate one which explored her whole mouth while his one hand grabbed her hair & another was caressing her lower back moving onto her hips. He was pulling her more closer more tighter

He licks away her dried tears on her face while moving to her neck and burying his face into her neck. While his hands make way into her top caressing her bosoms under her shirt

Geet moans

G- But... you said we should wait till we get married…

M- F*ck it!

Charu reaches his room to implement her plan only to witness Geet's legs wrapped around him, Geet moaning and Maan's lips on her one breast and his hand caressing her other breast.

Charu runs back in panic and presses the emergency button. The button was for when she would be in grave danger being disabled using that would ring the alarm in the whole house and everyone would run to her aid.

Grandpa (Gramps) reaches and calls for Maan & Geet to appear.

They didn't want to show up, but grandpa was all panicky coz of Charu. Geet didn't know what else to do.

Geet makes both of them somewhat presentable to go them.

Gramps was asking Charu if she is okay while she was wiping her tears, when Geet appears along with Maan (who was not at all in presentable state)

Geet made sure he stood behind her.

He was still holding onto her waist.

Gramps glances to Maan

Gramps- Are you drunk?

M- I am high as the sky.

He slurs.

Gramps- Nice. It’s like reliving when you were in your 20s.

Charu frowns as Maan is nuzzling onto Geet's shoulder. His face dug onto her neck and holding onto her waist.

Gramp looks away.

Gramps- it seems you are fine, Charu.

C- I am not fine. I am having anxiety...I am feeling so anxious.

Grandpa notices as well that Charu is dressed inappropriately.

M-Yyup ..i feel anz...anziety..too...heart burns....burns into ashes...when..i..i dont see..zont see u...when i am away from you...babes...baby...

Grandpa also notices that behavior is not just being drunk. It’s something else.

 Maan kisses on Geet's cheek

Geet's heart melts…she caresses his cheek.

G- I love you.

He hugs her from behind.

M- I love u so much, honey boo.

Geet is now also not wary of PDA. She always kept grandpa's disapproval in mind, but Maan comes first for her then anyone else

Udhar Charu is thinking Maan was supposed to be like this with her after he consumed that stuff but bass ye Geet naa aati beech mein

But she couldn’t do anything as grandpa dismissed Maan & Geet and stayed with her in her room along with family doctor and the staff.

M- izz gramps askin uz to leave coz v r doing dirty things.

Geet can’t help a sly grin.

G-yes

M- ah!! U r smiling hun

He grins ear to ear and stumbles ahead to touch his forehead to hers

M- shall we do more dirty stuff then...huh?

Gramps- just leave now.

G- Let's go ...come.

Maan hears Gramps rude tone and staggers few steps towards the old man

M- waht...wah doez it matter to u...wha..i do wiz my wife...huh! I f*ckin love her n i am tired of everybody's nosiness.

He declares pointing to both grandpa & Charu

Geet pulls him away ki chalo chalo

As Geet tries to get out of the room with Maaan, she hears gramps say

Gramps- Take care of him.

She nods without looking.

Part - B10

Superbly Fantastic 

At one point I thought Charu will succeed with her dirty plan

thankfully Geet arrived on time.

surely Charu is now more jealous of Geet been with Maan

while whatever drug Charu has put into Maan's drink makes want

Geet even more.

at one point Maan just burst out his frustration on both Charu and his grandfather

however Geet handles Maan and his grandfather can see that Geet actually

takes good care of Maan .

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi.... how's your mom feeling?

She is better now. In between chemos. Thanks a lot for your concern dear