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Posted: 1 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: maddy124

Full of videv update.. 🄺🄺🄹🄹 Full of romance šŸ”„šŸ„µ That desperation to feel eachother.. šŸ„µšŸ”„šŸ”„ā¤ļø

This Chitra & Priya Goli mar deni ha meine in dono ko.. ache khase romance ki lanka lga di in dono.. šŸ¤¦ā€ā™€ļøšŸ¤¦ā€ā™€ļøšŸ¤¦ā€ā™€ļø

Loved the update.. its worth waiting.. šŸ„¹ā¤ļøā¤ļø Love Abhi & Vidhi's bond..

Ab ye lunch date thi Dev G kha chale gaye hain.. hope k sb kuch thek ho.. Can't wait for the next one... plz continue soon this time Shinika.. šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø


thank you maddy for waiting to read my story and liking it..

Dev G bahut personal kaam pe gaye hain🤪

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Posted: 1 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Monkish

Behen, yeh kya kar diya? Aakash aur Amba kyun nahi kara dete mangni.. amazing progress on the story and characterization.


Aamba bhai se mangni..smiley24 kiske pass hai ithna dham…bechara Aakash just a fly...🤣🤣🤣

thank you for liking the story.ā¤ļø

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Posted: 1 years ago
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First things first, Love your long updates🩷🩷

The way you are progressing with the story is amazing. The intensity, the desperation, the turmoil is written well. Chitra and Amba 😪😪 kya hi kahein inhe.

Please take your time and churn out another long update. Excited to read what happens next. ā¤ļøšŸ¤“

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Shinika Update plz... šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»

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Posted: 1 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: maddy124

Shinika Update plz... šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»šŸ™šŸ»


I will do soon maddy!! Half done but this chapter is very difficult to write . That’s why taking time to make it nice.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Please update sweetheart

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Update karo na yaar.. Dev g kahin jyada hi dur nikal gye kya.... Ki vapis hi nhi aa pa rahe.. Kab vo aayenge kab update aayega

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Plz Shinika update its been so many days..

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CHUPKE CHUPKE SE ; ViDev;Few Shots

Part 9:

Vidhi reached home but feels very low like something is not right.. Vidhi prayed to milapini mata to keep dev safe. She tried to reach him again but the calls were unanswered… Vidhi got more worried by this….

Bimla realised Vidhi worried and tried to talk to her. But Vidhi replies everything is fine and went to her room for sleep like that without dinner

Bimla got tensed but didn’t stopped her. Vidhi tried to sleep but couldn’t…

Dev entered inside the farm house .. he is just walking aimlessly and his hand is bleeding. He entered into the hall and his eyes got disturbed by the bright lighting. He just looked around as unable to understand anything.

Helper came and informed that the designers did the arrangements for lunch but you didn’t show up so they rearranged for dinner and went . The cloths, the food and all arrangements are done. Sir you also get ready fast as it’s going to be 9 and I will make arrangements for welcoming the guest.

Dev just shrugged his shoulders and left inside room with out giving any reaction. He entered the room and saw the gorgeous red Color pair of dresses . IMG_3521.jpegIMG_3522.jpeg

He gently touched the red silky layers of gown and closed his eyes to feel her . He felt some one is laughing at him like mocking for his stupid dreams….

he opened his blood shot eyes and took the beautiful red and black suit with bow in his hands. He just traced the lapels of coat and taking a deep breath he took that to the corner of the room and placed the hanger there. He saw the view with a faint smile. He felt his mind calm by seeing the distance between the dresses. He just rubbed his dry eyes unable to see the view for more time and went to shower.

Vidhi felt her heart start to thump in terror and she doesn’t know why she is feeling like this. She felt something dear to her is snatching away…

She checked her phone for nth time for the one message she is waiting for. Disappointed by the reality she dailed him hoping to get answer atleast now. She dailed again and again but there is no response.she prayed to milapini Devi to keep dev safe and dwelled into their memories…The first touch, the kiss and the peace she felt in his embrace … the desperation to meat him again and the despair she felt when she thought they won’t meet again… the unexpected meetings, her rejection of acceptance…her inner struggle to become bold and selfish for once…How his love, his care , his respect towards her melted her heart. She felt guilty for hiding things and a red hue crept up her cheeks as the balghar moments revolved around her mind . She dailed again and by not getting any response she left some messages hoping to see atleast this time…

Dev stood under the shower and closed his eyes letting the water flow through his trembling body.

Memories flooded him. All that she had meant to him and the last memory the time that he invited her for lunch date keeping it as a surprise.

Dev left from office and enquired about the arrangements ..He is driving towards the farm house and he got a call from Raj.

Raj: hey dev … ek ghante mein ghar pahunch jaunga.. tum bhi aajao yaar.. milte hai…

Dev: said ok to raj and changed his route…

Dev reached Raj’s home and went inside….

He about to call raj but stopped by seeing Ria there…He just greeted her and asked about Raj..

But Her features shifted to so impassive that the look she was giving dev was almost scornful….

Dev just asked Ria.. kya hua hai.. tum aise kyun dekh rahe ho mujhe…

Ria: I don’t know uncle… jabse mujhe pata chala ki aap our vidhi ki baare mein……

Dev: Ria.. pls… we can talk…

Ria: kya bath karenge uncle aap ha… kya bath karenge.. aapko yaad hai aapne uss din mujhse pucha tha ki do you trust me?.. our app ne dikhaya na kitne trust ki laayak hai aap… wow!!! Uncle wow!!! Usi din mujhe laga ki kuch tho sahi nahi hai.. fir bhi maine aap par trust Kia kyonki har baar papa ne aapko ithna uncha darja dia ki aap par main kya koi bhi saval na utha saken.. ithna izzat karte hai mere papa aapko.. our aapne meri hi reception mein meri hi dost ko galat nazron se dekha …. I am sorry uncle but I can’t digest this… you are my fathers friend and she is my friend…..

dev: Ria.. I can …

Ria: Vidhi ka tho main samajh sakta hu.. aaj tak kisi se pyar nahi mila hai usse.. isiliye aapki taraf kadam badhaya hoga.. par aap.. aap tho bade haina.. aapko sambhalke kadam lena chahiye tha na…aapko kabhi bhi aapki umra ki yaad nahi aaya..aapko kabhi bhi yeh nahi laga ki vo aapki beti ki umra ki ho sakti hai.. our aap galat soch rahe hai…

Kyon uncle.. kyon kia aapne aisa.. kya aapko sach mein lagta hai aap uski saari jarooratein pura kar sakte hai.. our aap puri jindagi vidhi ki sath de sakte hain…. Aap apni looks our ohada/ status dikhakar aap sach se mukar sakte hai .. par isse tho sach nahi badal jayega na ..sach sach hi rahega…. Aap uss guilt ke sath jee sakte hai jo aap ek din jaroor feel karne vale ho….kya aap ek aisa rishta nibha payenge jis mein aapko har mode mein sirf guilty feel Karna padenge …

Ye vidhi bhi kya sochke yeh sab kia hoga.. pehle hi unki jindagi mein kam mushkilein hai kya jo nayi mushkilen apni sar pe le rahe hai…why god.. why every time it’s only her? Why? Her shouts turned to whispers and trembled at the end.

Dev got anxious by listening her ask that did he remember his age while doing this.. he tried to defend when she said about age difference but he got frozen by her question about his ability to make Vidhi happy forever….

Dev shut his eyes by listening her last trembling whispers and unable to bear the reality a lone tear escaped from his eyes..

He left from there immediately while the words what Ria said is ringing in his ears.

He sat in car but he is feeling the immense pain in his heart which he can’t decipher. He is driving car but his thoughts are occupied by her memories… There was a time when this would have made his heart race, made a warm feeling creep through him realising what it all meant.

But now ..He pressed his lips against each other desperately trying to not scream. He felt miserable. He hated himself at the moment. He felt sick of everything… what he have done? He questioned himself? With anger , pain and guilt… The huge burden of guilt washed through him. He long forgotten the lunch date, proposal and for him the outer world seemed stopped/nothing. He roamed all day in the car as the contradictory thoughts roaming infront of his eyes like he is running away from them but they are racing against him..….As the thoughts are increasing he is driving with craze and loosing his senses…. Making him to hit the car to a tree resulting a bruised arm and his head hit to the driving wheel when he clutched his chest with one hand….

After few seconds.. Dev shook his head, coming to his senses and realising what he had done…

The big crowd about to gather but he clarified he is fine and left from there to prevent a hazardous media circus …. He drove straight to the farmhouse this time. Dev felt his own form giving up by the unbearable pain racing through him turned the nob and dragged his feet inside room. His phone flashed and beeped continuously but failed to gain his attention.He skimmed through the ward robe with out any emotion and felt scorned by the cloths loaded in it. He throwed all the cloths that’s in his reach making all the thing’s scattered in the room. His eyes caught a white oversized kurta set and if the situation is not this he would have laugh by seeing that by remembering his vicious mousi’s sarcastic comments along with this gift. But now he felt a urge to wear that to believe himself that he doesn’t deserve the dash of glam…He got dressed up and his eyes stopped at the beautiful red wine Color silky gown exactly how he dreamed Vidhi looking ravishing in that outfit that it just made for her.. only her.. A faint smile appeared on his pale face and he is going out of the room to divert his thoughts.. his phone lit up again and started vibrating noisily on the ground.

This time dev took the phone and got numb by the hundreds of calls and messages from Vidhi.. he felt the phone vibrate again in his hands resulting him to feel anxious and switched off the phone with trembling hands.

He went out of the room by stumbling and reached a big hall. Finally he noticed the gorgeously decorated area but he felt suffocated , he felt choked to breathe and ran out of the house . He wandered on the garden some time aimlessly and suddenly his eyes widened by seeing a beautifully decorated tent with the fairy lights and a flower bed infront of that… His feet rushed him to that way without his senses and as getting closure an image getting clear in his vision… As he reaching close the image turned to Vidhi waiting for him in that beautiful red gown sitting on the flower bed and she looked like a fairy who came to change his life with her magic spell.he felt she is inviting him to her arms . Dev reached her without thinking and kneeled infront of her and adored her glowing ethereal under the moonlight. He touched her gently being in trance but she vanished in the air leaving the stardust….

He wasn't kneeling anymore. Even his knees seemed unable to support him and he just crumbled to the ground like lifeless… dev felt his eyes clouded with the darkness and he started to feel like floating in air…A sudden gush of wind followed by a burst of rain bring him back to senses and dev grasping for small breaths…

The helper who alerted by the sudden rain came to check everything is in place found dev lay on the ground and drenching in rain. He ran to dev and helped him to reach the room.

Vidhi who is calling continuously becomes restless by dev ā€˜s phone going switch off

dragged her feet up the stairs. Vidhi clutched her chest with one hand and went to the chath/ terrace by stumbling on the steps…. She felt miserable by the thought of loosing him . An unknown fear engulfed all her senses. She felt her eyes becoming heavy and her heart beat becomes faster and struggling to take breath and her skin becomes pale by completely giving into the darkness that luring her….. she thudded to the ground curled her self and lay on the floor and closed her eyes…

Bimla whose sleep got disturbed by the sudden rain rushed to the terrace to remove cloths stumbled in between by something that gutted her kon ground and got shocked by recognising it as Vidhi…. Who is Unconscious and drenched in rain. she manages to take Vidhi to room without getting it revealed to Hp and tried to wake her up. Bimla changed her cloths and gave a hot sponge wipe to get her back to senses.

Dev got freshen up and tried to control his racing mind. He tried to think rationally but he is confused to decide anything. It’s almost the start of a new day and he decided to visit some place to cool off his disturbed mind….

Vidhi reached the office and rushed to Abhi to know about dev but got disappointed by his reply…

Abhi who observing the traumatised vidhi and felt bad that he can’t reveal her anything about the issue that caused by Chitra. He thinks dev is avoiding everyone because he is in his own struggle to accept and balance his feelings and his responsibility towards Chitra. He got to know Chitra’s warning and her demand of alliance between dev and Amba yesterday night from Satya but he couldn’t dared to share this with vidhi. That’s why he ignored vidhi’s calls voluntarily yesterday night. He is trying his best to know about dev whereabouts but he didn’t got not even one single clue upto now….. the time passed and Abhi’s phone beeped..

He took a deep sigh and smiled with relief. Dev sent a message stating that he went to Dubai for a sudden business trip for a week and he couldn’t able to inform before. Abhi ran to vidhi but controlled by seeing the employees questioning eyes.. he asked Vidhi to come to his cabin. Once they are inside cabin he held his shoulders and said good news.. Vidhi.. bhai ka pata chal gaya hai..

vidhi’s eyes twinkled and finally she breathed with relief. She saw the message on Abhi phone but she can’t able to accept that message. She lost in the thoughts that if dev send the message in real then he could have send her also right or otherwise he would have call her atleast once to inform after seeing her numerous messages and calls. She felt something is definitely wrong but she doesn’t want to scare Abhi.

Abhi: Vidhi .. ithna kya soch rahe ho? Bhai ke phone se message aaya na ithna sochne vala bath kya hai ismein?

Vidhi: I don’t know Abhi sir.. par pata nahi kyon yeh sab kuch bahut ajeeb lag raha hai mujhe. Aisa dev sir ko naa aise hi mujhe ignore karna .. kuch tho bada hua hai sir .. varna dev sir aisa kabhi nahi karenge jab tab khaskar usse pata hai ki aisa bina bataye chale jaane se main tension mein aa jaungi… and she looked still worried…

Abhi stood silent by understanding her reasoning but he is confused to reveal about Chitra’s zid and Dev’s habit of spending alone whenever like this happened before..

Vidhi: sir.. ghar mein aisa kuch hua kya jiski vajah se dev sir ko achanak yeh sab karna pad raha hai?

Abhi who lost in thoughts got back by Vidhi’s question

Abhi who becomes nervous by her question but controls and .. nahi Vidhi.. ghar mein tho sab theek hai said looking side ways and left to sit in his chair.

Vidhi’s doubt of these happenings have a connection with Chitra and Amba raised more. She just left the cabin without saying anything.

Abhi got relief but felt bad to hide that from Vidhi and he doesn’t know if Vidhi knows anything about Amba and dev . He is worried that how dev will react if he comes to know that Vidhi got to know about Amba and Dev’s matter. He got confused but felt sorry that he couldn’t able to reduce vidhi’s tension.

As time passes it’s almost office closing time and Vidhi came to Abhi’s cabin.

Sir .. kuch pata chala dev sir ki bare mein..

abhi: vidhi .. bhai ne message Kia na.. tum tension chod do he will call you once he is free.

Sir.. is there nothing that you are hiding from me? Vidhi asked looking straight.

Abhi gulped and stood silent.

Vidhi: sir.. pls batha dijiye .. is this all related to Chitra in anyway…

Abhi shocked by listening this and he asked her did you know about Chitra and Amba ji..

Vidhi nodded yes gloomily.

Abhi: I am sorry Vidhi .. I don’t know how bhai reacts when he knows I said this to you but I can’t see you like this and yes.. your suspicion is correct… and explained the drama Chitra staged 2 days back.

Vidhi tried to maintain a blank face without any reaction and bids bye to him. She about to leave Abhi called her..

Vidhi.. I guess bhai will be back in 2 days . Whenever Chitra behaves like this he will isolate himself like this. So pls don’t worry .. hope this time also it will happen like that…

Vidhi: I also hope sir.. but this time it seems different. I don’t know but I can feel something is not right . Sir please don’t stop . He pls try to locate him ASAP .He didn’t went anywhere. Yes he is in Indore only said shocking Abhi.

Abhi: vidhi.. tum ithni surety ke sath kaise kaha sakte ho?

Vidhi looked with grimace and left from there…

Dev reached a Natural care centre that he often visit . He met the organisers and discussed something. He changed his appearance a bit and went inside to help the patients.. He looked after some of the patients and felt occupied with work and managed to feel better.when it’s lunch time he sat in a bench near a check up room.

He closed his eyes for some time. He opened his eyes suddenly by listening a soothing voice that he experienced some times from morning…

He turned curiously to the voice to see the person who have that much soothing voice .

There he saw a lady approaching to the room .. A lively ever smiling woman, with a medium brown skin, with very wide attractive kohl eyes, and may be in her late 40’s. When he saw her in between his work he finds her always talkative and supportive to other patients. He thought may be she is also a volunteer like him..

She waited for some time there and after that she seated just beside him and smiled looking at him.

Dev who charmed by her service smiles back and whispered a Hi…

She forwarded her hand for shake and introduced her self Neelambari pratap Reddy..

You can call me Neela said with a radiant smile that reflected in her eyes.

Dev shaked the hand and said I am Dev..

Neela: Dev .. she waited for him to complete..

But dev says.. ya.. Dev .. awkwardly…

Dev: are you a volunteer here or a doctor..asked dev..,

She gave a surprised smile and said.. well many thanks for making me feel proud as a volunteer or doctor atleast for a minut but I am just a patient’s care taker..

Dev: oh.. so sorry.. I saw you help the people and assumed ..

She stopped him in between and said.. it’s ok..

My husband is a patient here and we joined here 6 months before .. so when ever I have time I used to do something that I can afford.. that’s all. Not a big thing..

Dev: I am sorry .. I don’t know about your husband.

Neela: No.. no.. don’t be sorry.. now he is perfectly all right and we are leaving tomorrow to our place. Oh I forgot to say we are South Indians and we came here for my husband’s treatment. I roamed many hospitals for his recovery from paralysis atleast from last 5 years but finally he recovered. This is one of the best natural care centre and my husband recovered in just 6 months…

A nurse brought an aged man like in his early 70’s in a wheel chair and stopped beside them.

The man spoke by shocking dev.. Neela now I am completely fine yaar .. there is no need to do these many tests .. pls spare me yaar.. his voice transited from loud commanding to a requesting whisper..

Neela: pratap.. you and your tantrums.. today is the last day and I want to be sure that you are perfectly fine before we leave.

Oh.. I forgot to introduce.. pratap.. he is dev..

and dev .. my husband pratap Reddy.

Pratap: hey dev….aap bhi biwi se jhagada kar ke treatment keliye aaya haina idhar ..Aapki biwi bhi aise hi apni isharon pe nachate hai aapko… asked followed by a laugh by getting a smack from his wife.

Dev smiled a bit and said.. No… No.. I am a guest volunteer and just come to spend some time whenever he is free …

Pratap: oh.. then you are so familiar to my sweetheart. She also does the same whenever she is free. Aapki biwi ko yeh credit jayega jo aapko in sab keliye bhejti hai .

Dev: smiles and said I like to spend time like this sir and fortunate or unfortunate I don’t have anyone like to stop me doing this.. as I am unmarried.

Nurse told it’s Partap’s turn for checkup and she took him inside room.

Neela saw the little bit discomfort in Dev’s eyes when she introduced her husband and becomes silent.

Silence prevailed some time and dev initiated the talk awkwardly..

Dev: aap our mr.pratap….he stops awkwardly..

Neela shakes her head and said.. He is my professor in my bachelors and bitten by the love bug I wandered around him for his one glance .. in start he is hesitant but finally by the end of year he gave in to my stubborn love. As usual We faced a major backlash from both the families and after a lot of struggle everything become fine and we end up marrying… A happy life.. happy family.. 2 kids and their marriages and their happy life with their loved ones and finally again ended up we both for each other.. A Happy Story.. she said beaming and a happy proud smile adorned her lips that twinkles in her eyes…

Dev listened everything and after seeing her smile wholeheartedly he turned sideways to hide his whirlpool of emotions.

Dev’s phone lit up again with noise in between of them on the chair breaking the akward silence..

He looked at phone and realising Vidhi calling him again he took the phone with a rush and cut the call to hide it from the world.. but Neela managed to read the caller Id ā€œmeri vidhiā€ unintentionally and a tease glinted in her eyes.

She waited for dev to share his worry . She don’t know why she is expecting him to share his worry with her she questioned herself.?

Dev turned to her after gaining some courage and asked.. panch saal .. panch saal apko khud ko bhulke ithna sab kuch sahna pada.. aapko kabhi yeh mushkil nahi laga?..

Neela gave her charming smile again and said.. jab main choti thi tho Pratap ne mujhe sambhala.. sab kuch sikhaya mujhe..... ab vo chote bache jaise ban gaye tho main usse sambhal raha hu.. yeh mushkil kaise ho sakte hai….

Dev just listened her answer but what took his attention is her unwavering confidence and courage…

She looked at him like encouraging…

Aapko ithni salon mein kabhi bhi koyi kami mehsoos nahi hua? Asked dev

She caught a grasp of his confusion to ask this and said with a poised look .. kamiyan.. bahut kamiyan the hamare zindagi mein.. par meri saare kamiyaan unki ek muskurahat se bhar jayenge tho usko kamiyan nahi kaha sakte hai na….

Dev looked down by understanding the underlying meaning of her answer.

Slowly getting the confidence back he said one last .. I am so sorry that if I make you feel I am intruding to your personal space and I don’t know why I am asking you all this but..

she rolled her eyes with a smile..

Jab apne yeh decision liya tha tab aap shayad ithna mature nahi ho sakte ho tho kya aapki shadishuda zindagi mein aisa ek pal bhi nahi aaya ki aap apni decision ko lekar regret feel Kare?… And he is waiting for her answer with bated breath.

She about to answer .. pratap walked to them from the room and said Neela chale .. ab BAs.. main isse jyada tumhe tang nahi kar sakta.. mujhe aise lag raha hai ki ham abhi ke abhi yaha se udke ghar chale jaayen and laughed…

Neela nodded and laughed wholeheartedly. She turned to dev and said nice meeting you Mr dev and I hope I won’t meet you alone next time in a teasing tone making dev laugh genuinely.

Pratap: Nice meeting you man!! You have been a good companion for my wife otherwise I never seen her talk with a stranger this much time.

Sorry man we are in a hurry bache kal aa rahe hai na hame ghar le jane keliye tho packing bhi karna hai . Bye.. Hope will meet again like my wife wished and winked at him.

Dev remembered Vidhi’s call and thought to message her. He typed the message that he will come to office tomorrow. He about to press send button past events flashed in his mind. He shaked his head and rubbed his temple in confusion. He untyped the message and sent a convincing message to Abhi. He sighed and went to the other patients and spent the remaining day with them. He reached the farm house at 9 pm and went for freshen up. Helper served dinner at his room but dev didn’t felt the appetite to eat. He went to the balcony and looked at moon. The visuals of smiling Vidhi played infront of his eyes.He came to bed and remembered the incidents of the day. He remembered Neela’s smiling face and a sense of pride that danced in her eyes when she is talking about her love. He just imagined him and Vidhi in them for a second and had wanted to hold out hope. But the next second he shaked his head and cursed himself to imagine them together.He doesn’t deserve her …he chanted that to believe himself again and again. He loved her endlessly. If his entire life went away in looking for her happiness he would happily give his life to that. but can’t see her destroying her life for an impossible and impractical relationship. He remembered Ria’s words and her concern towards Vidhi. He felt that every time he will flaunt to others that he is mature. How he didn’t prioritised the reality of his life and how he thought that he can give happiness to someone. How he forgot that he is not a teenager that the girls like Vidhi deserved. How he dared to hope love from Vidhi? How can he? Ria is absolutely right why he didn’t think about his age once before touching her he cursed himself. How he gave her the hope of happy ever after when he himself not had any right to hope? How he can wish to claim vidhi.. ? That too a girl like meri vidhi ? He doesn’t have a right to wish like that no.. not even for a second then why he did? What you have done dev? He screamed but it came as a painful whisper. Why you started to hope? Why? Why you didn’t realised that Vidhi deserved a fairy tale love story… why you forget that she deserved a prince but not a man like you who had nothing to offer. Why did he forget? Why?. Why?

Yes… yes.. I forgot dev. Whenever I am with Vidhi..I forget everything. I feel that the time stopped , the entire world stopped and just remember only vidhi and her love that surrounded him and urge him to drown in that. When I see into her eyes i dwell in her love filled eyes and feel that we are the only people existed in this world and how he want to claim her his .. all of her to himself.. only him alone…yes I do forget.. I do forget everything even he himself…. his heart screamed … But now Dev realised that he become stupid and over hill by opting the abilities like loss of memory that associated with old age…He laughed at the irony of his situation he became aged by mentally and physically but his heart is thumping just like a teenager and went to hope . He slowly stretched himself and laid on the bed . He closed his eyes and tried to not think about her as he has no right on any of things related to her . Not her.. not her thoughts.. not even in dreams… but his useless mind failed his resistance and dwell in her smiley visuals…. That day at cafe how she thanked him for changing her to the best version of herself and how she stealed an intimate moment when all the office members surrounded them with out any hesitation.Then the day when someone celebrating their birthday How her tiny hand slipped into his silently.... he can never forget the warmth of her palm and the right she showed on him by laying her head on his arm and the trust she had on him and the courage she had like how she never tried to get back her hand until they reached her assigned desk…. But I am not worth of any of that you showed on me Vidhi… mein tumhara jeevan sathi banne ka layak nahi hu… vidhi.. yeh samaaj , yeh log kabhi hame ek sath accept hi nahi kar paayenge.. koun parents mere jaise adedh umra ki Aadmi ko apni phul jaisi bachi ka hath dena chahte hai?…..koi bhi nahi vidhi….logon se , apni families se samaaj se ladte ladte tumhara zindagi khatam ho jayegi….our main aisa kabhi hone nahi dunga vidhi.. mujhe ache se samajh aa gaya hai vidhi ki mein tumhari umra ki ladki ko jo jo khushi chahiye hota hai vo sab nahi de paunga.. shayad tum mere khushi mein tumhari khushi doondh ke khush ho jaogi… par sachai yeh hai ki mein tumhe koi khushi nahi de paunga vidhi…… I am sorry Vidhi.. tumhari jindagi mein aane keliye our tumhe ithna takleef dene keliye… main samajh sakta hu vidhi…tum kis halat mein hua hoga ab..

kithna pareshan hua hoga mere liye tumhari koi bhi call ko uthane ka himmat nahi hai mujh mein… our tumhari koi message ka jawab bhi nahi hai iss vakt mere pass vidhi….par yehi sahi hai vidhi mera tumse dur rahana hi behatar hai tumhare liye… tumhari khushi keliye…. And his eyes didn’t afford to stop pouring the pain he is trying hard to lock inside his heart….


To be continued…

SHINIKA

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