Rishto ki Mahabharat, Neivika ff( part 4 update on page 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Wow please update next part soon

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Nice....DJ's line made me crack up , just one small request; Please do not make ANY CHARACTER address Yuvika as "Yuvi"smiley11 We've had enough of kartik's "Yuvi Yuvi " puran please don't make VIDUR AND NEIL of all people to address her as Yuvi 🙏

Chapter was soooo good and heartwarming, best chapter yet , waiting for the next chapter...


Thank you ❤️❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viana_White

It was a lovely chapter

So there is a history between sareens and mahajans

God pls don't use yuvi for yuvika we have had enough of it for lifetime it's so irritating

Pls tag me or PM me whenever you update pls

Thank you 😊


Haha suree ..thank you ❤️

Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhara


Thank you ❤️❤️

You're welcome smiley1

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 4 - Scars of past


Dhanraj opened his cupboard and took the dried rose

Dhanraj - I met him Vasu Sareen after 25yrs..His face reminds me of the insult, the loser tag, the betrayal done by my own brother ..I will never forget that.Dhanraj Mahajan will never forget that nor forgive you all..


Yuvika - kaun tha woh ? He knew dad, can get help me to resolve dad's scandel mystery which happened 20 years ago...i should ask mom about him


Bhoomi - aagayi ? Cholo I want to speak something every important with you

Yuvika - ha boliye

Bhoomi - I think Neil likes you


Yuvika - ofcourse maa..he definitely likes me ..why would he help me if he would hate me ?


Bhoomi -- hey bhagwan..Aaj kal ki bacche itna slow hai...i meant he loves you...pasand karta hai tumhe


Yuvika - mummy....Plz, he is my friend and I don't want to ruin our friendship due to all this


Bhoomi - but beta friendship is the best step for any relationship..


Yuvika - nahi mummy..i don't think so Neil likes me in that sense.. leave that . I want to ask you do you know anything abt Sareen's?


Bhoomi - Did u meet them ? Where ?


Yuvika - in meeting today ..do u know them ?


Bhoomi - Vasu Bhai saab was your dad's best friend and his wife devi was ur taai ji ' s younger sister...Your dadababu wanted Devi to be this house Bahu and Dhanraj wife but fate had other plans..


Yuvika - taai ji ? Kaha hai woh ab?


Bhoomi - yuvika, let it be Plz don't ask this with anyone...few things are better in past..


Garden in Neil's house


Neil - Today I will say my feelings to you miss Yuvika Mahajan..I hope you even you like me as much as I like you...Kam bhi chalega, Mera pyar humare liye kaafi hai..


Dj - hello brother!! Kya baat hai...i dint knew you are so romantic


Neil - dj ? Tum yaha


Dj - yea..tum kahi zyada nahi udd rahe ho..i mean aukaat ke anusaar itna bada sapna...ek Mahajan se pyar karne ka sapna?


Neil - it's none of your business..Stay away


Dj - ok..i will but did u say yuvika that you were a sadak chaap, jiska na baap na naam pata hai ya Ghar ja address...na khoon Naa khandaan , ya koi surname hai..Tum jaise sadak chaap ko Mahajana ka damad banna hai ? ?

Posted: 1 years ago
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Nice chapter......DJ is even more annoying than the usual ammountsmiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Bhoomi - I think Neil likes you

Yuvika - ofcourse maa..he definitely likes me ..why would he help me if he would hate me ?


THIS smiley37 smiley37

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Posted: 1 years ago
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It's so good man please continue it please

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