Rishto ki Mahabharat, Neivika ff( part 4 update on page 5) - Page 3

Agasthya : I loved this name for Neil

Neil's own Dwarka seems a beautiful paradise

Thanks for this lovely update

Seems like ur Neil is same as Krishna here.. Vidur is his foster father and Sareens r his real family

Interesting part

I m excited to see how Neil will get to know this and Yuvika will become Mrs Sareen

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

So Neil is Agasthya? Nice build up to the story....

Thank you 💞

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

So miss Mahajan is definitely gonna be Mrs. Sareen then 😁

Mrs. Agastya Sareen or Mrs. Neil Bharadwaj

Haha...wait & see 😍🫣

Originally posted by: Moonks

How come I saw this now only? Such a lovely and interesting story

You know they can show something like this is in show too cause Neil is definitely richer than these Mahajans

Thank you ❤️..same there they can make Neil character more stronger and complex

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Agasthya : I loved this name for Neil

Neil's own Dwarka seems a beautiful paradise

Thanks for this lovely update

Thank you..I am glad you liked it 💞

Originally posted by: RainOfDew

Seems like ur Neil is same as Krishna here.. Vidur is his foster father and Sareens r his real family

Interesting part

I m excited to see how Neil will get to know this and Yuvika will become Mrs Sareen

I am glad you liked it 😊❤️

Part 3 ....Fight with the past .

(Dada Babu, Yuvika, Dj, Dhanraj sitting in the room just then Vasu sareen enters with his son Shourya)

Vasu - kaise hai aap dada Babu ( bending to take his blessings)

Db - good to see u doing well Sareen..Kabhi Milne nahi aaye?

Vasu - apne kabhi bhulaya nahi

Dhanraj -- kyo ?? Wasn't it enough what u did last time that we invite you to ruin our lives and respect

Vasu - It's been 25yrs DM.. Forget it

Dhanraj - wounds don't heal even after 25yrs Sareen..u know it better

Yuvika - do u all know eachother ( mumers herself)

Vasu- Prem ki beti hai na?? Ofcourse same eyes.

Yuvika - Sir ..do u know my papa..

Vasu - kichad mein Kamal jaise the apke papa..Meet you all at the meeting..

Yuvika - dada Babu, that person seems he know all of us...isn't he our rival

Dada Babu - beta ...few things should be left in past ..

Dj - such a dramatic drama..u know what people we all should join a serial humari Ghar pe roz kuch na kuch drama hote rehte hai !!

In Vidur's house Niel is making tea

Vidur - kya baat hai bhai...bade kush lag rahe ho

Neil - nahi toh

Vidur - so when are u proposing yuvika

Neil - Pro....propose...kyaa???!!!!

Vidur -- kya hua Bhai? Propose only..As karthik yuvi alliance has officially ended , it's the right time to say ur feelings to yuvi...

Neil - but papa won't it be too soon..

Vidur -- aree beta ..pyar Kiya toh Darna kya

Neil - Thank you papa ( smiles and hug him)

Vidur - isme thank you kya?

Neil - not only for this ...for everything..for always being with me..muj jaise orphan ko..apna bana ne ke liye.

Vidur - how many times I have said to not use that word for urself...mein kya hu...baap hu na? Toh tum orphan kaise hua...do I love u less , would ur birth parents loved u more..

Neil -- naaah!! Noo chance..no one in this world can love me more than you.

Vidur - no more emotional go and propose her you fool..

Neil - may be you are right..

Neil pov

How shall I say her..wait let me organise a date ..what does she like? Every girls like chocolates, wine, diamonds but yuvi is different yaar..

Neil -- Soo miss Yuvika Maharajan, ur prince charming is comming to you ❤️

Nice....DJ's line made me crack up , just one small request; Please do not make ANY CHARACTER address Yuvika as "Yuvi" We've had enough of kartik's "Yuvi Yuvi " puran please don't make VIDUR AND NEIL of all people to address her as Yuvi 🙏

Chapter was soooo good and heartwarming, best chapter yet , waiting for the next chapter...

It was a lovely chapter

So there is a history between sareens and mahajans

God pls don't use yuvi for yuvika we have had enough of it for lifetime it's so irritating

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Thank you 😊