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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tia-life

Trailer for the next part 👍🏼


" 5 years later "

Announcement happening in Vallabhgarh , " Maharaj ne aadesh diya h ki , Rajkumari Tarapriya ko mritydand diya jaega .


One Villager : Kya din aa gaya h , Rajkumari ji ko mritydand mil raha h .


Other villager : Haa! Bhai , pehle kya rutba , kya shaan thi , par ab 2 varsho mein maharaj ke alawa kisi ne unhe nahi dekha .


Third villager : Bhaiya ! maine to suna h ki unhone 2 varsh se unhone kisi ke samaksh ek shabd nahi bola .


First villager: Lekin maine to suna tha ki ve , mansik roop se aswasth h , ve dusro se nahi parantu swayam se baat krte hue suna gaya h .


Second villager: Bhaiyo ,ab satya kya h kisi ko nahi maloom .Pata nahi vaastav mein vo kis stithi mein hogi.

A dark lane opens in a room , which is big but looks like some jail . There is a a Radhakrishn statue made of soil . Someone is sleeping on the floor . A ray of sunlight falls on the face .

The person is Rajkumari Tarapriya .


What happened in these 5 years , and why Tara is in this condition , aur Dhruv vo kaha h .



Abeyy ye kya twist lekr aa gyi chutki ,
Itna cliffhanger, 🤔
jldi update krdena behena plz ...
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Posted: 2 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Trailer for the next part 👍🏼


" 5 years later "

Announcement happening in Vallabhgarh , " Maharaj ne aadesh diya h ki , Rajkumari Tarapriya ko mritydand diya jaega .


One Villager : Kya din aa gaya h , Rajkumari ji ko mritydand mil raha h .


Other villager : Haa! Bhai , pehle kya rutba , kya shaan thi , par ab 2 varsho mein maharaj ke alawa kisi ne unhe nahi dekha .


Third villager : Bhaiya ! maine to suna h ki unhone 2 varsh se unhone kisi ke samaksh ek shabd nahi bola .


First villager: Lekin maine to suna tha ki ve , mansik roop se aswasth h , ve dusro se nahi parantu swayam se baat krte hue suna gaya h .


Second villager: Bhaiyo ,ab satya kya h kisi ko nahi maloom .Pata nahi vaastav mein vo kis stithi mein hogi.

A dark lane opens in a room , which is big but looks like some jail . There is a a Radhakrishn statue made of soil . Someone is sleeping on the floor . A ray of sunlight falls on the face .

The person is Rajkumari Tarapriya .


What happened in these 5 years , and why Tara is in this condition , aur Dhruv vo kaha h .

Ma aaj soch hi rahi thi ki tumhari story ka update aa jaya par tumne to shock de diya😱😭

Heart attack dena ka irada ha kya tumara....🙄

Ab please jaldi update dena nhi to ma yahi sochti rahugiki tara ko kya huwa aur dhruv kaha ha🙄

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Sorry , for the long wait, couldn't get time to update . But finally here is the chapter . Grammatical mistakes ko please ignore kar dena .😛

Chapter-6

Tara is sleeping, on rays falling on her she puts her hand in front of her. Then someone kisses on her cheeks.

Tara: Suprabhat, Chikitsak Dhruv . Chalo utho subah ho gayi h na !


Dhruv is seen , in a small room with minimal furniture. He is on the charpai . When a sunray falls on him . He turns his back , when he hears something and open his eyes a little sees Tara standing there and saying ' Suprabhat Chikitsak Dhruv, ab uth jao subah ho gayi h , aur kitna soyoge .

Dhruv : (rubbing his eyes ) Jaise tum mujhe sone deti ho . Har subah mujhe avaaj deke uthane aa jati ho ,aankhe humesha tumhe dekhkr hi khulti h .

Tara : To vo to hum karenge hi , tum itna mahtvapurna karya krte ho deri se uthoge to kaise kaam chalega ab jao , jaakr taiyaar hoiye .

Dhruv goes near and kisses her on her cheeks . Tara dissappears and he realises that it was his imagination.

Dhruv : Tum na hokar bhi mere pass ho , ab bus aise hi mere saath rehna humesha .

He goes to get ready .


In Saxena house.

Jai (on call ) : Thik h , to tu vaha jaa raha h , ok main chachi ko bata dunga , chal main rakhta hu , apna dhyan rakhna .

He cuts the call.And comes in the hall.

Jai : Chachi , Dhruv ka phone aaya tha , bol raha tha ki vo use emergency ke liye Rudraprayag jaana padega , isliye agar vo phone na uthaye to chinta mat kariyega .

Susheela: Hum chinta kahe na kare , aur usne hume phone kyu nahi kiya , tujhse kahe sandesh bhijwa raha h aur ye Rudraprayag achanak se kyu , vo to dehradun mein tha na ?


Lalita : Ari ,behen sawal hi puchhti rahegi kya ,use bolne to de ,Jai bol !

Jai : Chachi , usne aapko phone kara tha aapka phone lag nahin raha tha isliye usne mujhe phone lagaya. Aur vo Dehradun se Rudraprayag isliye h kyunki per landslide aaya hai ,aur vaha doctors ki jarurat hai, chala gaya waha par .

Sushila : Ye kuchh nahi batata hume , abhi Uttrakhand mein h , pichhle mahine Jammu mein tha , humari bilkul chinta hi nahi karta ye 😔

Ayesha: Chachi, aisa kyu bol rahi ho , batata to h aapko sab kuchh .

Sushi- kya batata h ,abhi 6 mahine pehle , jab vo Sikkim mein tha uska haath fracture ho gaya tha, usne hume bataya , jaan ka jokhim hota h. 3 saal ho gaye hum se mil ne bhi nahi aaya h

Taiji : Haa, maante h , Parr kaam bhi to punya kamane vala h na , ab dusron ki jaan bachane se jyada punya ka kaam kiya ho sakta h , use Kuchh nahin hoga ham uske liye Itni prarthna Jo karte Hain .

Aur tum Sahi keh rahi ho, bohot samay ho gaya ,kal vaise bhi Khatti aur Dharmendra vapas aa rahe , to Dhruv ko bhi is bar humse milne aana hi padega.


In past 5 years , many things has changed . Dhruv does not live in Agra . He has become a charity doctor and has trained for rescue Missions .He wanders around the country. In those backward areas where , the medical facilities are still below standard , due to poverty or because of their tough surrounding. But he still goes for medical conferences , and do important surgeries . Sends money earned to his family and some for charity , leaving a small amount for himself . He changes city in almost every month or early as required. While traveling with a single bagpack .( In short banda gareebo jaise hi rehta h , jaise writers use dekhane ki planning kr rahe the , apni saari kamai parivaar or samaj seva mein laga deta h , aur khud pr ek phuti Kodi faltu nahi kharchta ) .


Same day , at night in Rudraprayag .

The rescue Mission was successful. Dhruv was resting in his room , when there was a knock on the door .


A girl : Dhruv ji , paas wale gaon mein ke bhura kaksa ki tabiyat kharab h . Unhen ilaaj ki jarurat h , aap chalenge .

Dhruv : Kya ? chalo , chalte h . Ek second mein apna bag lelu chalu .

( Is story mein Dhruv apni Bhagpackwati Ko nahin chhodega😜 )


After treating the patient, he was returning back when suddenly he saw a man lying on the road . He had a shallow cut on his head and was lightly bleeding . In the dark , he was not able to see his face very clearly but he looked like somewhat like him . But he ignored it and clean its sound and done some bandage . When the unconscious man , woke up, he looked shockingly towards Dhruv.

Dhruv: aap chinta mat kariye , main Ek Doctor Hu aur aapka ilaaj kara hai , aap bilkul theek hai , vaise aap ko yah chot kaise lagi thi.

The man: tumne Meri Jaan bachai uske liye shukriya, meri taraf se yah le lo.

And he gave a shiny golden key to him .

Dhruv: Par iska Main Kya karunga , aap ise wapas le lijiye yah Aapka hai.

The man : Ise apne pass sambhal kar rakho , yah tumhare aane Wale Samay mein bahut kam aane wala hai, yah tumhari Kahani Mein Ek aham bhumika nibhaega , ise Dhyan se rakhna....

Dhruv was shock to listen this and was carefully observing the key: Parr...

He look towards the man but he had disappeared . He took the key and put it in his bag.

[Content of Dhruv's bag

-3 shirts , 2 T-shirt ,3 Trousers,1 Jodi dhoti-kurta , Tara ke saath wala family photo , Tara aur Sushi ki single photo ,mor pankh , his important medical supplies, and emergency kit needed during any natural crisis .Aur ab vo key bhi .

- Ye necessary nahi tha , but baad mein aap logo ko aisa na lage ki Dhruv ke paas ab bhi Doraemon ka pocket h isliye bata diya😉 😂]


In 17th century,

Bhaiji with Anusuya: Mahaveer ! 3 din baad Tara ko mrityudand diya jaega , hume kuchh karna padega , hum ye hote hue nahi dekh sakte .


Mahaveer: Hum jante Hain Anusuya aur ham Aisa bilkul nahin hone denge per , Hamare hath bhi bandhe hue Hai ham chahte hue sabke samksh Kuchh bhi nahin kar sakte .


Anusuya: Maharaj! Ki tabiyat bhi bilkul thik nahi h , unka rog itna badh chuka h ki vo ab hil- dul bhi nahi paa rahe dhang se, aur aise samay mein maharani ji ke alawa koi nahi h , unki seva ke liye .

Mahaveer: Pita Shri ki haalat ko lekar hum bhi chintit h , parantu iss dasha ke liye ve swayam bhi jimmedar hai. Yadi uss din ve humari baat sun lete to ye sab nahi hota .


Flashback.

Tara left the venue .


Senapati- Maharaj! Rajkumari ji ne ye kya kiya , ye humara aur aapke vachan ka apmaan h . Ek chandravanshi Raja ka vachan bhang ho gaya .

Dumbraj : Senapati ji hamen kshma kijiega ki ham Apne Vachan ko nibhaanaa sake, parantu ham Apne purvajon ka naam dhumil nahin hone denge . Hum aapko aapke apmaan ke badle , Ek ichcha Dan dete Hain , aur Vachan dete Hain ki isko ham avashya pura karenge aur aaj hi karenge ?


Chirkut ne moke par choka maara aur apne liye , ichhadaan mein Tara ki saza maangi . Ek aisi saza aur itni deep planning , ki aaj Vallabhgarh ke Maharaj vo Chirkut hai 😤


Chirkut: Maharaj ,hum aapse Rajkumari ji ke liye dand nishchit karne ki anumati mangte ,aur ye aasha rakhte ki isme koi bhi aapatti nahi jatayega .


Mahaveer : Par Maharaj ? Ye to aapka aur nyaypranali ka adhikaar h , aap Samrat Singh ki mang puri nahi kr sakte .

Dumbraj: Mahaveer aapki bahan ne Samrat Singh ka jo apman kiya hai uski bharpai karne ke liye ham Samrat Singh ko yah Adhikar denge , Yahi hamara kshatriya Dharm hai.

( Har jagah faltu dialogues hi maarta h ye )


Now time for Tara's punishment.

Chirkut: Hum Rajkumari Tarapriya ko yeh dand dete h , ki ab se unse Rajkumari hone ka auda chhina jaata h , aaj ke baad ve ek samanya nagrik hongi , aur unhe apne pariwar se milne ki anumati nahi hogi .

Kshma kijiega! Maharaj hum jaante h , ki aap ko bohot dukh hoga ye jaankar parntu yuvraj aur Maharani ji ne bhi inke prem mein inka saath diya h , inhi ki shay ke kaaran hi unhone aisa ghor paap Kiya h .


Maharaj looks towards MV and MJ questioningly. They nod their head in agreement.

Dumbraj: Itna bada Vishwas Ghat , Senapati ji yah dand ekdam uchit hai , ine Sab ne Rajkumari ki sahayata ki , aur ab inka dand yahi h ki ye unse ab nahi mil payenge. Aur mile to unhe bhi dand diya jaega. Yeh humara aadesh h .


The punishment was given , MJ, MV and Anu had tearfully bid farewell to Tara ,where king was watching from a distance.

Maharaj( In his mind ) : Taru kaash aapne hamen pehle bataya hota to Shayad hamein aapko yah dand Na Dena padta . Ham nahin jante ki tab ham Kya karte, parantu apni putri se dur hone ki pida To nahin Sahni padati .😭

( Pyaar to krta h Dumbraj apni beti se , thoda I mean haa bohot bada dumb h lekin beti ki yaad to aayegi )


Tara had shifted to Sukanya's house . She did not wanted to be a burden on her but sukku didn't listen anything and said her Dhruv bhaiya wanted her to take care of Tara . And this way Tara agrees to stay there .

Then she started treating the villagers, initially the people hesitated , as she was the first lady Dr. And also a exiled princess . Some of them even opposed her but she was determined and continued her practice . But gradually everything begin to normalise . Tara as a doctor was treating the villagers with great care and dedication , with Sukanya as her aid 😌😌.

Mahaveer was also fulfilling his duties as the crown prince . Anusuya and he married after one year .


Time slowly passed . But after two years , at mid night, there was a knock on Tara's door . She thought some patient has come . But when she opened the door , a man hugged her tightly.

The person was Mahaveer .Tara stood still for a sec and tightened the hug .

Mahaveer : Taru ! Aap thik to h na , kuchh hua to nahi aapko ?

Tara : Bhaiji ! Hume kya hoga , hum ek dam thik h Parr , aap yaha kya kar rahe yadi aap hum se mile to aapko dand diya jaega . Aap yaha kyu aaye ?

Mahaveer: Humare guptcharo ne hume suchna di ki Samrat Singh ke saniko ne aap par hamla kiya , isliye hum jitni shigrah ho sake chale aaye!

Tara: Kya ? parantu hum par to koi hamla nahi hua , hume ye koi shadyantra lagta h ,aap shigrah prasthaan kriye , isse pehle ki aapko koi yaha dekhle .

And there comes Chirkut and Dumbraj from the front door .

Chirkut: dekhiae Maharaj ! Yuvraj Apne behan ke moh Mein Aakar , Raj aagya ka ullanghan kar rahe hain . Aur Aisa inhone pahli bar nahin kiya ye apki aankhon Mein dhul jhonk kar ye apradh karte aa rahe hain .

MV: Maharaj ! yah asatya hai humne Aisa Kuchh nahin Kiya vah hamen Aaj ..

Dumbraj: Kya aaj ? aaj to aapne Rajagya ka ullanghan kara hai , aap Yuvraj ho kar Apne Raj Dharm ka nirvah nahin kar pa rahe , parantu hum aisa nahi karenge Taru ke saath aapko bhi dand diya jaega .


And Senapati ji ne apni chikni chupdi baton Mein Hamare murkh dumbraj ko fansa liya , aur Apni patni ke sath ki tarah damraj ne apne donon bachhon ko nazarband hone ki saza suna di and Senapati ko maharaj bana diya .🤦


Flashback ends.


21st century, Rudraprayag.

Dhruv's room .

Dhruv : Ye chaabi kya h , aur iska meri kahani mein kya role ?

Imaginary Tara: Ab iski kya bhumika h , ye to hum nahi jaante par yadi ye tumhe Mila h ,to koi to vishesh kaaran hoga iska .

Dhruv : ab tum keh rahi ho to maan leta hu , vaise bhi iska Design h bada unique ,par pata nahi kyu dekha dekha lag raha h .

Tara : Are ab kitna jagoge , so jao ,kal uthna nahi h , Good night .

Dhruv : Achcha , achcha thik h so Raha hu , good night .

And then Tara covers his eyes with her hand and vanishes . Leaving Dhruv peacefully sleeping.


Again , in 17th century.

Tara : 3 din baad , hume mrityudand mil jaega , Dhruv . Par hume iss baat ko Santosh h ,ki hum jeevan bhar tumhare banke rahe , aur kanha ji ! se yahi prarthna karte h , ki tum sadev sakushal raho .


On the other side ,

Mahaveer is determined, that he will not let her sister die . And he is waiting for the next day to execute his plan .


P.S . Batana bhul gayi par , Dharmu aur khatti ka byah ho chuka h 3 saal pehle ,to DharTi is official in my story.😜

And Tara ko mrityudand dand kis Khushi mein diya jaa raha h , vo milega aapko next part mein , par ek baat bata du ki mrityudand mein chomu ka ittu sa bhi haath nahi h 😂

Edited by Tia-life - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#54

😡that Senapati 😡

Can u write some punishment for him ?

And I would love if Chomu give him Double punishment 😊


Oh my Poor DT 😭

But their Dream ❤️

Plz reunite them SOON ..


BTW who is that man 🤨

Looks like That key will help him 😉

I'm feeling really bad for Dhruv Tara & Mahaveer even Anusya 😭


🤗🤗 thank you so much for tag ❤️ and although I read every chapter but extremely sorry I forget to reply 🤗

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Originally posted by: Tia-life

Sorry , for the long wait, couldn't get time to update . But finally here is the chapter . Grammatical mistakes ko please ignore kar dena .😛

Chapter-6

Tara is sleeping, on rays falling on her she puts her hand in front of her. Then someone kisses on her cheeks.

Tara: Suprabhat, Chikitsak Dhruv . Chalo utho subah ho gayi h na !


Dhruv is seen , in a small room with minimal furniture. He is on the charpai . When a sunray falls on him . He turns his back , when he hears something and open his eyes a little sees Tara standing there and saying ' Suprabhat Chikitsak Dhruv, ab uth jao subah ho gayi h , aur kitna soyoge .

Dhruv : (rubbing his eyes ) Jaise tum mujhe sone deti ho . Har subah mujhe avaaj deke uthane aa jati ho ,aankhe humesha tumhe dekhkr hi khulti h .

Tara : To vo to hum karenge hi , tum itna mahtvapurna karya krte ho deri se uthoge to kaise kaam chalega ab jao , jaakr taiyaar hoiye .

Dhruv goes near and kisses her on her cheeks . Tara dissappears and he realises that it was his imagination.

Dhruv : Tum na hokar bhi mere pass ho , ab bus aise hi mere saath rehna humesha .

He goes to get ready .


In Saxena house.

Jai (on call ) : Thik h , to tu vaha jaa raha h , ok main chachi ko bata dunga , chal main rakhta hu , apna dhyan rakhna .

He cuts the call.And comes in the hall.

Jai : Chachi , Dhruv ka phone aaya tha , bol raha tha ki vo use emergency ke liye Rudraprayag jaana padega , isliye agar vo phone na uthaye to chinta mat kariyega .

Susheela: Hum chinta kahe na kare , aur usne hume phone kyu nahi kiya , tujhse kahe sandesh bhijwa raha h aur ye Rudraprayag achanak se kyu , vo to dehradun mein tha na ?


Lalita : Ari ,behen sawal hi puchhti rahegi kya ,use bolne to de ,Jai bol !

Jai : Chachi , usne aapko phone kara tha aapka phone lag nahin raha tha isliye usne mujhe phone lagaya. Aur vo Dehradun se Rudraprayag isliye h kyunki per landslide aaya hai ,aur vaha doctors ki jarurat hai, chala gaya waha par .

Sushila : Ye kuchh nahi batata hume , abhi Uttrakhand mein h , pichhle mahine Jammu mein tha , humari bilkul chinta hi nahi karta ye 😔

Ayesha: Chachi, aisa kyu bol rahi ho , batata to h aapko sab kuchh .

Sushi- kya batata h ,abhi 6 mahine pehle , jab vo Sikkim mein tha uska haath fracture ho gaya tha, usne hume bataya , jaan ka jokhim hota h. 3 saal ho gaye hum se mil ne bhi nahi aaya h

Taiji : Haa, maante h , Parr kaam bhi to punya kamane vala h na , ab dusron ki jaan bachane se jyada punya ka kaam kiya ho sakta h , use Kuchh nahin hoga ham uske liye Itni prarthna Jo karte Hain .

Aur tum Sahi keh rahi ho, bohot samay ho gaya ,kal vaise bhi Khatti aur Dharmendra vapas aa rahe , to Dhruv ko bhi is bar humse milne aana hi padega.


In past 5 years , many things has changed . Dhruv does not live in Agra . He has become a charity doctor and has trained for rescue Missions .He wanders around the country. In those backward areas where , the medical facilities are still below standard , due to poverty or because of their tough surrounding. But he still goes for medical conferences , and do important surgeries . Sends money earned to his family and some for charity , leaving a small amount for himself . He changes city in almost every month or early as required. While traveling with a single bagpack .( In short banda gareebo jaise hi rehta h , jaise writers use dekhane ki planning kr rahe the , apni saari kamai parivaar or samaj seva mein laga deta h , aur khud pr ek phuti Kodi faltu nahi kharchta ) .


Same day , at night in Rudraprayag .

The rescue Mission was successful. Dhruv was resting in his room , when there was a knock on the door .


A girl : Dhruv ji , paas wale gaon mein ke bhura kaksa ki tabiyat kharab h . Unhen ilaaj ki jarurat h , aap chalenge .

Dhruv : Kya ? chalo , chalte h . Ek second mein apna bag lelu chalu .

( Is story mein Dhruv apni Bhagpackwati Ko nahin chhodega😜 )


After treating the patient, he was returning back when suddenly he saw a man lying on the road . He had a shallow cut on his head and was lightly bleeding . In the dark , he was not able to see his face very clearly but he looked like somewhat like him . But he ignored it and clean its sound and done some bandage . When the unconscious man , woke up, he looked shockingly towards Dhruv.

Dhruv: aap chinta mat kariye , main Ek Doctor Hu aur aapka ilaaj kara hai , aap bilkul theek hai , vaise aap ko yah chot kaise lagi thi.

The man: tumne Meri Jaan bachai uske liye shukriya, meri taraf se yah le lo.

And he gave a shiny golden key to him .

Dhruv: Par iska Main Kya karunga , aap ise wapas le lijiye yah Aapka hai.

The man : Ise apne pass sambhal kar rakho , yah tumhare aane Wale Samay mein bahut kam aane wala hai, yah tumhari Kahani Mein Ek aham bhumika nibhaega , ise Dhyan se rakhna....

Dhruv was shock to listen this and was carefully observing the key: Parr...

He look towards the man but he had disappeared . He took the key and put it in his bag.

[Content of Dhruv's bag

-3 shirts , 2 T-shirt ,3 Trousers,1 Jodi dhoti-kurta , Tara ke saath wala family photo , Tara aur Sushi ki single photo ,mor pankh , his important medical supplies, and emergency kit needed during any natural crisis .Aur ab vo key bhi .

- Ye necessary nahi tha , but baad mein aap logo ko aisa na lage ki Dhruv ke paas ab bhi Doraemon ka pocket h isliye bata diya😉 😂]


In 17th century,

Bhaiji with Anusuya: Mahaveer ! 3 din baad Tara ko mrityudand diya jaega , hume kuchh karna padega , hum ye hote hue nahi dekh sakte .


Mahaveer: Hum jante Hain Anusuya aur ham Aisa bilkul nahin hone denge per , Hamare hath bhi bandhe hue Hai ham chahte hue sabke samksh Kuchh bhi nahin kar sakte .


Anusuya: Maharaj! Ki tabiyat bhi bilkul thik nahi h , unka rog itna badh chuka h ki vo ab hil- dul bhi nahi paa rahe dhang se, aur aise samay mein maharani ji ke alawa koi nahi h , unki seva ke liye .

Mahaveer: Pita Shri ki haalat ko lekar hum bhi chintit h , parantu iss dasha ke liye ve swayam bhi jimmedar hai. Yadi uss din ve humari baat sun lete to ye sab nahi hota .


Flashback.

Tara left the venue .


Senapati- Maharaj! Rajkumari ji ne ye kya kiya , ye humara aur aapke vachan ka apmaan h . Ek chandravanshi Raja ka vachan bhang ho gaya .

Dumbraj : Senapati ji hamen kshma kijiega ki ham Apne Vachan ko nibhaanaa sake, parantu ham Apne purvajon ka naam dhumil nahin hone denge . Hum aapko aapke apmaan ke badle , Ek ichcha Dan dete Hain , aur Vachan dete Hain ki isko ham avashya pura karenge aur aaj hi karenge ?


Chirkut ne moke par choka maara aur apne liye , ichhadaan mein Tara ki saza maangi . Ek aisi saza aur itni deep planning , ki aaj Vallabhgarh ke Maharaj vo Chirkut hai 😤


Chirkut: Maharaj ,hum aapse Rajkumari ji ke liye dand nishchit karne ki anumati mangte ,aur ye aasha rakhte ki isme koi bhi aapatti nahi jatayega .


Mahaveer : Par Maharaj ? Ye to aapka aur nyaypranali ka adhikaar h , aap Samrat Singh ki mang puri nahi kr sakte .

Dumbraj: Mahaveer aapki bahan ne Samrat Singh ka jo apman kiya hai uski bharpai karne ke liye ham Samrat Singh ko yah Adhikar denge , Yahi hamara kshatriya Dharm hai.

( Har jagah faltu dialogues hi maarta h ye )


Now time for Tara's punishment.

Chirkut: Hum Rajkumari Tarapriya ko yeh dand dete h , ki ab se unse Rajkumari hone ka auda chhina jaata h , aaj ke baad ve ek samanya nagrik hongi , aur unhe apne pariwar se milne ki anumati nahi hogi .

Kshma kijiega! Maharaj hum jaante h , ki aap ko bohot dukh hoga ye jaankar parntu yuvraj aur Maharani ji ne bhi inke prem mein inka saath diya h , inhi ki shay ke kaaran hi unhone aisa ghor paap Kiya h .


Maharaj looks towards MV and MJ questioningly. They nod their head in agreement.

Dumbraj: Itna bada Vishwas Ghat , Senapati ji yah dand ekdam uchit hai , ine Sab ne Rajkumari ki sahayata ki , aur ab inka dand yahi h ki ye unse ab nahi mil payenge. Aur mile to unhe bhi dand diya jaega. Yeh humara aadesh h .


The punishment was given , MJ, MV and Anu had tearfully bid farewell to Tara ,where king was watching from a distance.

Maharaj( In his mind ) : Taru kaash aapne hamen pehle bataya hota to Shayad hamein aapko yah dand Na Dena padta . Ham nahin jante ki tab ham Kya karte, parantu apni putri se dur hone ki pida To nahin Sahni padati .😭

( Pyaar to krta h Dumbraj apni beti se , thoda I mean haa bohot bada dumb h lekin beti ki yaad to aayegi )


Tara had shifted to Sukanya's house . She did not wanted to be a burden on her but sukku didn't listen anything and said her Dhruv bhaiya wanted her to take care of Tara . And this way Tara agrees to stay there .

Then she started treating the villagers, initially the people hesitated , as she was the first lady Dr. And also a exiled princess . Some of them even opposed her but she was determined and continued her practice . But gradually everything begin to normalise . Tara as a doctor was treating the villagers with great care and dedication , with Sukanya as her aid 😌😌.

Mahaveer was also fulfilling his duties as the crown prince . Anusuya and he married after one year .


Time slowly passed . But after two years , at mid night, there was a knock on Tara's door . She thought some patient has come . But when she opened the door , a man hugged her tightly.

The person was Mahaveer .Tara stood still for a sec and tightened the hug .

Mahaveer : Taru ! Aap thik to h na , kuchh hua to nahi aapko ?

Tara : Bhaiji ! Hume kya hoga , hum ek dam thik h Parr , aap yaha kya kar rahe yadi aap hum se mile to aapko dand diya jaega . Aap yaha kyu aaye ?

Mahaveer: Humare guptcharo ne hume suchna di ki Samrat Singh ke saniko ne aap par hamla kiya , isliye hum jitni shigrah ho sake chale aaye!

Tara: Kya ? parantu hum par to koi hamla nahi hua , hume ye koi shadyantra lagta h ,aap shigrah prasthaan kriye , isse pehle ki aapko koi yaha dekhle .

And there comes Chirkut and Dumbraj from the front door .

Chirkut: dekhiae Maharaj ! Yuvraj Apne behan ke moh Mein Aakar , Raj aagya ka ullanghan kar rahe hain . Aur Aisa inhone pahli bar nahin kiya ye apki aankhon Mein dhul jhonk kar ye apradh karte aa rahe hain .

MV: Maharaj ! yah asatya hai humne Aisa Kuchh nahin Kiya vah hamen Aaj ..

Dumbraj: Kya aaj ? aaj to aapne Rajagya ka ullanghan kara hai , aap Yuvraj ho kar Apne Raj Dharm ka nirvah nahin kar pa rahe , parantu hum aisa nahi karenge Taru ke saath aapko bhi dand diya jaega .


And Senapati ji ne apni chikni chupdi baton Mein Hamare murkh dumbraj ko fansa liya , aur Apni patni ke sath ki tarah damraj ne apne donon bachhon ko nazarband hone ki saza suna di and Senapati ko maharaj bana diya .🤦


Flashback ends.


21st century, Rudraprayag.

Dhruv's room .

Dhruv : Ye chaabi kya h , aur iska meri kahani mein kya role ?

Imaginary Tara: Ab iski kya bhumika h , ye to hum nahi jaante par yadi ye tumhe Mila h ,to koi to vishesh kaaran hoga iska .

Dhruv : ab tum keh rahi ho to maan leta hu , vaise bhi iska Design h bada unique ,par pata nahi kyu dekha dekha lag raha h .

Tara : Are ab kitna jagoge , so jao ,kal uthna nahi h , Good night .

Dhruv : Achcha , achcha thik h so Raha hu , good night .

And then Tara covers his eyes with her hand and vanishes . Leaving Dhruv peacefully sleeping.


Again , in 17th century.

Tara : 3 din baad , hume mrityudand mil jaega , Dhruv . Par hume iss baat ko Santosh h ,ki hum jeevan bhar tumhare banke rahe , aur kanha ji ! se yahi prarthna karte h , ki tum sadev sakushal raho .


On the other side ,

Mahaveer is determined, that he will not let her sister die . And he is waiting for the next day to execute his plan .


P.S . Batana bhul gayi par , Dharmu aur khatti ka byah ho chuka h 3 saal pehle ,to DharTi is official in my story.😜

And Tara ko mrityudand dand kis Khushi mein diya jaa raha h , vo milega aapko next part mein , par ek baat bata du ki mrityudand mein chomu ka ittu sa bhi haath nahi h 😂

finally tumne update kiya nhi to ma tumse gussa ho jati😌 bechari tara uski sirf yahi galat ha ki uska pita shree ka pass dimag naam ki cheeze nhi ha..... Aur ya machchar mera man to kar raha tha ki iska liya mortin la aau....😡

Humara dhruv bechara kitna badal gaya ha 😢

Please next part jaldi post karna aur humara dhruv tara ko jaldi milana...

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Originally posted by: CutieShona20

finally tumne update kiya nhi to ma tumse gussa ho jati😌 bechari tara uski sirf yahi galat ha ki uska pita shree ka pass dimag naam ki cheeze nhi ha..... Aur ya machchar mera man to kar raha tha ki iska liya mortin la aau....😡

Humara dhruv bechara kitna badal gaya ha 😢

Please next part jaldi post karna aur humara dhruv tara ko jaldi milana...

Can u make a index in first page of your story with page no. so that it's easy to read a part
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Chalo shukar aa Bibi ne update Kita 🤣 hun mai pehla.ehnu char vaar pdhke comment kardi aa 😆

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Makers Dhruv ko bhikhari nahi dikha paye jyada din is liye tune officially use garib bana diya 🤣

Role reversal Tara in prison (ye show me hota to mai nritya karti ) but tumhari story ki Tara badi achhi hai is liye dil toots😭

As usual bracket comments are best 🤣🤣

In past 5 years , many things has changed . Dhruv does not live in Agra . He has become a charity doctor and has trained for rescue Missions .He wanders around the country. In those backward areas where , the medical facilities are still below standard , due to poverty or because of their tough surrounding.

Simple living high thinking 👏

Tara ko jyada torture mat karna plz

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Chutkiiiiiii👏👏

DharTii👍🏼 Kahi to official hue ,

Alright , Chirkut 😡
Iska jb sach saamne aaye na to plzz chutkii iski punishment me tel me dubaa ne waali punishment rkhna ,
Ye deserve krta hai sachme😳

Ohhh my Dhruv boi🤗... Humesha ki trh help kr rha hai sbki❤️,
Interesting Cliffhanger , the key 🤪

Imaginary Tara ,❤️
Meto soch rhi thi 2sec k liye ye sachme yhaa aa gyi hogi , aur dono apna vyaavaahik jeevan jee rhe honge ..😆❤️
Koi naa tu milaa degi dono ko jldi se isiliye no tension 👍🏼

Chomu is alwayzzz chomu , kbhi nhi sudhr ne waala

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Very Nice GIF - Very Nice GIFs


I like it so much so far! You've given us quite the story!

Look forward to the update!

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