CHUPKE CHUPKE SE; ViDev; FS updated part 14 on page 19 - Page 3

shinika, yr

iska next part update kar pls...

Started reading this but beech mein hi work aayi will finish reading this tonight and wait for my review dear Shinika....🤗🤗

Finally managed to read both chapters in one go. Shuruwat kahan se karun ?? I am still in that dream world where you bought ViDev before me. How Vidhi was portrayed here that's really good and natural which I felt... Despite of bought up in a restricted background she is the real fighter here and I am glad that you showcased that side of Vidhi rather than showing her as naive. Being innocent and being naive both are different according to me. Without losing the innocence of Vidhi to portray her as a fighter is little challenging but you clarified since she pursued MBA by the growth of age she also may be became little a bit bold . Now our Dev who is almost similar to the way just like we find in show here and how he was lost in her had shown so beautiful. I loved that overcoat scene to the core. Their conversation were so graceful to read. How he felt sad on knowing the struggles of Vidhi had shown so realistic and never expected the suicide of Seema ,it was heart breaking to read..Seems HP is so much egoistic and orthodox here and Vidhi had to suffer a lot...The vision you gave in terrace seeing Vidhi in moon light was absolutely beautiful and I was literally imagining Dev and Vidhi there ,wish we could get these kind of things in show. Dev the growing anxiety in him according to his age it's definitely not easy to portray those feelings and you have penned them flawless with your writing skills. I absolutely loved how he was recalling in thoughts of Vidhi and with the reference of Peer baaba made me to feel very nostalgic remembering the Khaogali episode where he said them about yeh ladki acchi waali tufan laayegi aww 🥰🥰 thank you for adding that one here. To engage in something when you just can't get over from the thoughts of special one is actually highly impossible and Dev is trying to do that one here. But being workaholic doesn't keeps him out of from those growing feelings and Abhi was trying to cheer up him. I loved both parts very much Shinika..And sorry for reading this damn late

Read both the parts.. beautiful writing❤️.. the sexual tension was awesome.. love at first sight for the two of them and Dev being all love-sick was a delight. Please do continue❤️

CHUPKE CHUPKE SE; ViDev ;Few shots

Part 3:

A couple of days passed and dev is on his routine early morning jog.He felt something different in the air. The positive vibe the freshness he is feeling is something different today he thought. In Past couple of days he didn’t tried to control his feelings instead he invited them to takeover himself completely. He realised that it’s stupidity to focus on something that he can’t control so he let the feelings consume him organically . He struggled a lot in beginning but felt very happy and eventually everything came back to normal.He left to home with a relaxed fresh smile and Abhi and Satya felt happy to see him like this.

Dev got ready to go to office. He is feeling overjoyed and he don’t know what’s happening to him. He felt very happy and at peace after many days and thought to visit the kids in balghar.He bought some chocolates and toys for the kids.He about to enter balghar he felt a cool breeze hit him and stood there by feeling her fragrance. He was in the trance of her thoughts and came back to sense by the shouting of kids.

Superman bhaiya…

All kids shouted and surrounded him. Dev greeted the kids and distributed the things he got for them. All went to open the gifts except Ruhi.

Dev raises eyebrows to question her. She giggled and called him near. He bent infront of her .

Ruhi: superman aaj bhi aapne bahut late Kia.

Dev looked confused…

Ruhi: aaj bhi pari didi ne aapse pehle aayi our hame bahut saare sweets bhi dia . Phir ek baar aap pari didi se haar gaye and she is jumping while clapping hands.

Balghar warden came and stopped Ruhi.

Dev: it’s ok Rupa ji … bache hai..

Ruhi… very bad … mujhe laga aap super man ki team mein hai….. ha.. main firse haar gaya hu.. akhir aapki yeh pari didi koun hai… har baar mujhse aage rahati hai vo…

Warden: bahut pyari ladki hai dev ji… apna identify nahi bataya usne . Panch saal se hamare balghar ki bachon ka madad kar rahi hai vo. Bachon ko stories sunana, drawing sikhana, bachon ko competitions ke liye tayar karna .. unhe padhana sab mein madad Kia hai . Par kabhi apne baare mein kuch nahi bataya..

Dev listened patiently and asked warden to convey his thanks to her.

Warden left…

Dev: ab batao Ruhi.. kaha hai aapki didi ab bhi yaha hai vo ?

Ruhi: nahi superman.. vo bas nikal gayi our aap andar aaya …

Dev: par maine tho kisi ko bahar jate huye nahi dekha.

Ruhi: vo didi tho back gate se jato hai .. usko rocky se bahut dar lagti hai isiliye…

aap batao superman aaj aap bahut khush hai na..

He nodded…

Ruhi: tho ab aap bhi rone vale hai kya…

Vo kya hai ki didi ne batayi aaj uska bahut bada din hai our vo bahut kush hai. Par thodi der baad vaha akele bahut roya didi ne… pointed towards a tree. And she became sad.

Dev: Ruhi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. I am very happy and I am not going to cry..shayad aapki didi ka ankh mein kuch chala gaya hoga.

Ruhi: didi ne bhi bilkul yahi bataya. You two are same same bhaiya… and she ran from there.

He still can feel her fragrance in the air but he don’t know whether she can be Vidhi or not?

After some time he laughed for his foolish ness to find her everywhere he go.

He went to the temple beside balghar and one of his mother’s favourite place. Milapini mata ki mandir..He accepted his feelings whole heartedly infront of mata and got ready to embrace whatever mata chooses for him but he don’t want to become a hurdle in vidhi’s life and prayed for her happiness. he know her life will be at peace without him said sadly. If that is destiny then also he is happy with everything that keeps her happy.He prayed mata that don't make their paths meet again.

He prayed milapini mata one last time and asked her to show the right path. With that he left to office in a perplexed state.

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Vidhi reached the location shared by her father and went inside. She greeted the receptionist and waiting for her turn.she has the detailes in her letter but she is least interested in that. She remembered the morning events.

Hp: Bimla, Vidhi yaha aao .

Vidhi tumhe pata haina aakash . Vo 6 mahine baad India aa raha hai our vo yaha aate hi main tum dono ka shaadi karaunga. Yeh dekh tumhare liye sagai ka anguthi bheja hai usne our vo chahta hai tum yeh 6 mahine kisi company mein job karo. Iski vajah se Dubai jane ke baad Akash ko koi problem nahi hoga.sach kahein tho main nahi chahta hu ki tum kahi our Jake kaam karo par vo Aakash yehi jid pakad ke baitha hai. Ek our baar main usse pareshan nahi karna chahta tha. Tumhari didi ne jo Kia uske baad bhi Aakash tumse shadi ke liye tayar hai. Isiliye mujhe uski baath manna padega. Tum kaam kar sakte ho … par Aakash ne yeh jo kuch companies ka list bheja hai bas uss companies main hi tumhe kaam karna hai our maine job ke liye apply bhi Kia hai. Aaj ek company ka interview hai 11 baje. Tumhe location bhejunga our tumhe vo interview karke seedha ghar aana hai.

Hp gave a dangerous look to Vidhi and Bimla before going out.

Bimla cried for the fate of her daughter and her helplessness to not able to stop hp.

Vidhi stood there staring into the void for sometime and went to get ready. She about to leave Hp entered home and warned Vidhi..

Agar koi gadbad hua tho main tujhe kuch nahi karunga par uss ladke ko main duniya ke saamne aisa barbaad karunga ki muh chupane ki jagah bhi nahi bachega.

Vidhi stood still and became pale like there is no single drop of blood in her.

Ms. Vidhi.. ms. Vidhi… she vaguely heard her name and came to senses. She quickly went inside the room and done with interview. She got selected for the next round and waiting for her turn.

Dev reached office and saw everyone is doing their work peacefully. He went to his room and checked the msg board. Abhi left a message to join him in milti purpose hall. Dev sighed and went to meet Abhi.

Dev entered the room and saw Vidhi sitting on a chair and rubbing her nails and talking to herself. A smile crept up on his face and expecting her to come near him and scold him for late. He know this is also an illusion that nowadays he is seeing everywhere.while he is adoring her she turned and glanced dev. She got rooted and dwell in his eyes. He is expecting her to come and tease but she looks shocked. Dev couldn’t understand what’s happening and about to go to her Abhi entered the room and called ms. Vidhi…

He turned to dev and Said bhai aap agaye … she is Vidhi Sharma our pehle round mein yeh bhut acha Kia hai Our ab 2 nd round aap ko lena hai… Dev confused and asked kya? 2 nd round? Kiss ..ka… I mean kounsa second round ke baare mein bol rahe ho? . He is surprised to see Vidhi there for real and confused about what Abhi is talking.

Abhi: bhai aaj kal aap kaam ko lekar bahut stress ho rahe haina our aap overtime bhi kar rahe the. Isiliye maine aap ka kaam kam karne ke liye PA ko hire karne ko socha.

I am so sorry ms Vidhi Sharma. Yeh hai aapke hone vale boss mr. devvrat Raichand said to a shocked Vidhi. No need to be tensed he is a cool boss.

Bhai… interview start Kare said while observing them both.

Vidhi composed herself after the revelation of Dev’s state continued with interview. She is least bothered about interview but she has to do for curtesy.

Abhi become suspicious after seeing dev being silent and vidhi’s hesitation in interview. She is very confidant in the previous round and he find something definitely odd with her.

Dev don’t know what to do after seeing her really infront of him and he remembered the time he yearned for her. he saw the perfect sight for his sore eyes, his eyes were sore from all sleepless nights he had for the past whole week. He felt his heart skip a few beats There was no words to describe how she looked and he felt himself tense at the attraction, his hormones running wild like never before, wondered how well she had looked this good even in this situation. Dragging his eyes of her, he remembered that they weren't alone in the hall, If only they could be alone, gods knows how much he wanted to grab and ask her about her this condition. He felt he is the one who spent sleepless nights but seeing her baggaged eyes and dark circles, her pale face who lost all glow he realised she also tormented like him. She also yearned for him. This shadowed his doubt of her regretting the kiss. His heart is once again squishing with excitement and fear and he again started to hope. The tension started to build in his lower stomach.To control his feelings dev tapped his fingers on the table for some time and some time he kept his hands in his pockets to hide embarrassment and some times he is wiping his face and neck by looking in odd directions and he is restless by thinking about long interview.

Vidhi observing him with corner of eyes surprised to find him cute while not trying to stare her and his attempts to ignore her.she felt sad about his state of messed hairs ,the swollen reddish eyes ,his tensed face and by remembering Abhi’s words of Dev’s suffering.

Abhi is shocked by seeing them both behave weird and thought that he never expected that his bhai will behave like this One-Day because of a girl. He saw dev growing restless and his suspicion become strong.

Abhi: ms Vidhi… ms Vidhi…

Vidhi jerked and said sorry sir I just lost… I am sorry.

Abhi called bhai little loudly to gain Dev’s attention and said I am done and she is going to be yours I mean your PA so you take over this to fill in your requirements and I will prepare for the offer letter .he left from there before observing them for his indirect comment.

Both sat silent without seeing each other. Dev couldn’t pretend any more so started to stare her shamelessly. He is waiting in the thought of her to look at him at least for a second then no power in this world can able to stop him to make her his.

Vidhi all this time didn't dare look up to see how dev staring her, she couldn't get herself to, she knew his captivating eyes are unbearable for her to resist and all her hard worked for control would be lost in just a glance. She kept repeating her well memorised mantra to herself, that there was no point in wanting something she couldn't have and this, them, could never happen, there was no future for them, they weren't meant to be together. Her heart kept begging for just a moment but she couldn't allow herself to have that. She could feel his presence, the charged atmosphere around and their proximity that was driving her crazy .she fisted her dress and trying to control her self knowing that she is failing miserably .She needed to get away from him she thought.

I am sorry sir. I didn’t know that this is raichand group of companies. If I know this before I wouldn’t have come here. I am really sorry but I can’t work here said with her head bent but with a determined tone.

Dev got shocked by her decision. More than shocked he is hurt. He can literally see his newly formed hopes crumbling mercilessly infront of him. He couldn’t bear the hurt but composed a bit and said

It’s ok ms Vidhi … I respect your decision but I just need an answer if you only wish to … otherwise you are free to …

Vidhi couldn’t move an inch by listening his quivering voice.

He understood her silence and continued ..

Did this decision has any relation with that night.

She couldn’t hold her self to not look up to him by feeling the despair in his voice. She felt her eyes moisten and her heart squeeze by seeing the pain in his eyes.

Dev who is waiting for her to react felt encouraged by her reaction. He felt hurt by her moist glance and stood with an unknown madness. She felt him approaching her got up from the chair and turned to go. Dev who blocked her on time and stood infront of her. She walked back but stoped by the table and fear of falling she held the table tightly.

Dev just kept his hands beside her on the table and stood close carefully to not touch her.

She bent her eyes by the proximity and his fragrance making her go dizzy. Dev got hurt more by this act and Did you regret what we shared whishpered painfully near her lips and closed his eyes by fearing her reaction.

Vidhi got taken back by his plea and looked up at him, to see his closed eyes as pain and discomfort showed on his face and his staggered breathing as if waiting for her reply with bated breath. Vidhi being silent dev said with pain I know you don’t want to do a mistake but… it’s … it’s…he couldn’t complete…Her heart broke by seeing him like that and involuntarily her hand held his cheek and stroked there with her thumb pad to stop him struggling with his thoughts. Dev felt the sukoon that he yearning from many days. His eyes moistened by her touch and opened to see her love pouring through her eyes.

Vidhi touched her forehead with him and whispered…Mistake…. But it’s the best thing that ever I did in my life … to follow my heart she said innocently looking into his eyes with honesty. Dev forgot all his insecurities and lost in her innocent eyes after her honest confession. He wrapped his hands around her waist and pulled her closer. Vidhi lost in the tension of proximity and could feel the butterflies dancing inside her tummy. When he pulled her.. her lips slightly brushed his and he totally lost his control.her eyes constantly shifting its gaze from his lips to eyes.breath heaved in and out constantly , both of their heart beat synchronised and beaten too fast. Dev took the lead this time and captured her lips very gently at first and then make it fierce by entering into her mouth and licking, sucking and exploring every corner. She grabbed his hair to pull his face more close and looking into each other's eyes they saw the lust, the desire, the hunger they had for each other. Their lips are moving in sink and Dev cupped her face and plunged deep into her mouth once again to send tremors in their bodies. Vidhi tried to take over him but he is not allowing her to take chance and made her smitten by his deep sucks. kissing her is never enough for him and felt to kiss her for eternity.After feeling her gasp to breath dev slowly reduced the intensity and touching her lips time to time by giving her chance to take small breaths.he didn’t want to leave her lips and begged the time to stop .He felt nostalgic to feel again her soft heavenly touch of lips and tears escaped from his eyes.both got from the ecstasy and left each other’s lips. Unable to bear the distance Dev touched her forehead with his nose being closed his eyes. Vidhi saw Dev’s tears and tried to wipe. When she is wiping she got baffled by the tiny sparkle on her finger and detached herself from him.

He about grab her hand that laid on his cheek he felt her dismay by looking into her eyes. She walked back with fear and her fathers words are revolving in her mind. But she determined that this time she don’t want to become a coward. She faced the dejected dev with confidence and said I will never ever regret what we shared but we are not supposed to meet like this again and again.trust me I don’t have any other choice rather maintaining distance with you. I am very sorry for everything and left from there before correcting her self….

To be continued….

SHINIKA

This was so intense,Shinika.

Thank you for the tag. Will read later today! ❤️💞

That was so amazing & intense.. ❤️❤️

Just loved every bit of it..

Continue soon this time plz Shinika 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Shinika!!!! Please continue!!! You are stopping the story at the wrong moment.

Simply beautiful and so very captivating.❤️ Amazing nostalgic feeling, now that show has gone down the drain. You explain Dev's emotions so intensely.

👏 Kudos, Shinika