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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: latecomer

Since I read this part the song dooba dooba sits on my tongue ... those day...

I really enjoyed reading it indeed it uplifted my mood...but what does she wrote? Hmm

Hope to find answer in next part.

How have you been GN?

Hey! Long time no see.

I have been busy, Latecomer. What about you? All well?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Finally, he thawed! Or should I say melted?

Was it Buta or the louu ka keeda in Nishit's ear that played Cupid? Well, the specifics don't matter as much as the fact that, after a considerable amount of time, they finally succumbed to their feelings 😆


Just when Kirti was on the verge of giving up on "them," Nishit resurfaced, whispering, "the bug is still there...buzzing." It was both exasperating and heart-rending to witness Nishit wanting Kirti to stay away from him, yet secretly desiring her presence. Despite his mixed signals, Kirti chose to stay because she understood his unspoken words, having developed that ability over time. Today, Kirti's words of apology and comfort struck a chord because they were not only sincere but also stemmed from her personal experiences. It's one thing to empathize with someone's situation, but it's another to actually feel it. Her confession must have mirrored his own, bringing a sense of relief as Nishit realized he wasn't alone in the attraction and confusion.


The two have accepted & acknowledged each others feelings at last! There is 18 years of catching up to do and then there's also their social status situation. I am curious to know about many things that happened in the past, particularly what transpired on that fateful Diwali night, which served as the primary catalyst for their fallout.


Loved reading this chapter GN! 🤗Haven't listened to the song yet, will do in a bit.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Today is Ekadashi btw...just saying 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Didnt see tgat one coming... Did that really happen?

Just when she had decided to give up.

It happens in life right? Just when you think. Bas, ab aur nahin. Life gives you the gift, the reward for your waiting...


Seems like finally they are on the same page. Warna ek ki haan aur doosre ke naa hoti thi. I think they both were done fighting for each and with each other.

The moment they both surrendered, their feelings and their love won..

Yayyy some happy times finally

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Posted: 2 years ago
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And I knew the ants are going to come handy one day 😛

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ants and then Buta. The two give the right nudge again, to that add her honest monologue and refusal to leave..he finally relents😁

Organic indeed and I loved how the chapter was written, GN.

The little things..her acceptance that she is tired of her responsibilities or did she really ever have a childhood. It does get to people the girl does need a break.

The bit on Hardiik where she is able to gauge that he wants more and she is tired of men using her.

Buta the matchmaker,oh yes..but a bug in Nishit's ear😁 . It can only happen to these two. Love his tug of war..of wanting her both to stay and leave.

If a person is aware and sensitive one would understand if there is a crisis in another's life and its aftermath. Glad that she addresses that with Nishit,the upheaval in his professional life and its affect on him.


She is straight forward and honest about her attraction towards him. Simply loved that you had her sing while he played the guitar.

Thank you loved how this was penned.

When is the next one GN😁

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Posted: 2 years ago
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She never did get to be a child. Had to grew up too quickly. She doesn't want Radha to have the same fate and will make sure that it doesn't happen.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It was always Kirti who was unlucky with the animals. This time it was Nishit. Buta, the bug, the song, all did their part to bring these two stubborn souls together. Kirti did not hold back this time. She put it all out there. He had to finally give in.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Kirti is seeing something in Hardiik's eyes. Does he have a crush on her or he just wants a friend? His association with Ahilya prevents her from opening up to him.

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