Love, Unrequited Thread Three [New Chps - Pg 1,5, 9] - Page 9

Originally posted by: coderlady

It was always Kirti who was unlucky with the animals. This time it was Nishit.

The way I see it, this time both were lucky 😉

GN - You have written the last few chapters in present tense. Was that deliberate?

Originally posted by: cheers2all

GN - You have written the last few chapters in present tense. Was that deliberate?

I first wrote it in past tense but felt the emotions were coming through better when expressed in present tense, hence. 😃

Originally posted by: cheers2all

Today is Ekadashi btw...just saying 😆

Fate!! What better day to post this chapter. 😆

Gauri, how I love you for making such connections!❤️

Originally posted by: Meerkat

Fate!! What better day to post this chapter. 😆

Gauri, how I love you for making such connections!❤️

What better day indeed!! I thought you had timed it accordingly 😆

Ermmm...when can we expect the next chapter? 😁🌞

GN, thank you for the wonderful chapter.

One cannot help but feel sorry for Kirti. So much on her plate and she is trying extra hard to balance so many people/aspects of her life.

I wish Karuna becomes a little more easy towards everyday events and gives Kirti a little respite.

Hardiik wants to help Kirti? Does he want some kind of friendship with her or more?

In all this, her heart aches for someone to love her unconditionally or just embrace her to lessen her struggles. But then I also felt bad when she Nishit is better off without her, considering the baggage she is carrying.

This update reminded me of the dialogue from the movie "Om Shanti Om"

"Itni shiddat se tumko paane ki koshish ki hain, ki har zarre ne tumse milane ki saaziz ki hain".

So when both Nishit and Kirti are hesitating and when no other humans are able to help them, destiny takes the help of insects, amphibians, reptiles and mammals to make them meet. 😀

Thanks to the ant/bug in the ear. The ice got broken. She expressed what she felt and Nishit finally stopped fighting himself, her, their hurt, etc etc and kissed her.

GN, I hope we have romance in store next for them. And there is so much they need to talk too.

Now can't wait for the next chapter. 😍

Originally posted by: cheers2all

What better day indeed!! I thought you had timed it accordingly 😆

Ermmm...when can we expect the next chapter? 😁🌞

I will try to make it soon. 😀

Originally posted by: canapoem

GN, thank you for the wonderful chapter.

One cannot help but feel sorry for Kirti. So much on her plate and she is trying extra hard to balance so many people/aspects of her life.

I wish Karuna becomes a little more easy towards everyday events and gives Kirti a little respite.

Hardiik wants to help Kirti? Does he want some kind of friendship with her or more?

In all this, her heart aches for someone to love her unconditionally or just embrace her to lessen her struggles. But then I also felt bad when she Nishit is better off without her, considering the baggage she is carrying.

This update reminded me of the dialogue from the movie "Om Shanti Om"

"Itni shiddat se tumko paane ki koshish ki hain, ki har zarre ne tumse milane ki saaziz ki hain".

So when both Nishit and Kirti are hesitating and when no other humans are able to help them, destiny takes the help of insects, amphibians, reptiles and mammals to make them meet. 😀

Thanks to the ant/bug in the ear. The ice got broken. She expressed what she felt and Nishit finally stopped fighting himself, her, their hurt, etc etc and kissed her.

GN, I hope we have romance in store next for them. And there is so much they need to talk too.

Now can't wait for the next chapter. 😍

This gave me a good laugh. 🤣🤣 Thank you canapoem!

The song she sang is so apt for the relationship the two have shared.

Loved the band/singer

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

The song she sang is so apt for the relationship the two have shared.

Loved the band/singer

It is, isn't it? The first time I heard the female part, I knew I was going to use it for Kirti.

Thank you for listening to it and so glad you liked it.