Well, this story is pacing up nicely! 👏
Great job- Simi, T and Shibz.
Simi- you explained a little of the background for these three.
Abhay: Topper, Micro student and rich guy (son of a business tycoon), all around scumbag 😡
Veronica: Middle-class, orphan, raised by her maternal uncle, has a younger cousin Shweta, deeply in love with Abhay,
It’s the perfect set-up for Prince marries commoner.
(Did Abhay ditch his Micro degree and join his family business?) It made me angry that Veronica’s uncle had to pay for the wedding when Abhay’s parents are so rich. I already dislike them!
Then T, you explained the heartbreak part really well. The scum was cheating. And you also threw in that tidbit about him arguing with his parents so that’s a throwback to Parm’s set up about it all being planned. Well done! 👏
You also explained how Samarth had been deceiving her- by hiding his feelings from her while dating her cousin, Shweta .. not nice Samarth.
Shibz, the diary entries were a great idea. So now we have Samarth’s PoV & the reason for his heartbreak. Unrequited love.
Remains to be seen how his family was involved - whether in the whole Veronica-Abhay fiasco or something else we haven’t yet learned about. What’s the relationship between Abhay & Samarth- that’s yet to be explored too because so far all we have is that they are classmates.
It’s been a week since Nica left Abhay? And now she’s preggers so it could go any way. Plus Sam knew about Abhay’s cheating and he kept quiet? So another reason for Nica to feel deceived by him.
Now there’s also scope to explore Shweta and the other woman in Abhay’s life!
Bee, take it away! Eager to see where you’re going with this!
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