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Just got obsessed with this song, after hearing the Sanum version, so, when got the chance I penned down this ....



Ye Raatein Ye Mausam…




Maan Singh Khurana, our hero is back at his favorite place….


Maan has come on hiking… you know he likes his solitude more than anything else…


Maan loves to hangout with himself amidst his beloved mountain tops…


The riverside camping has something that enchants Maan and brings him back again and again….


Maan has come here often after he had discovered this place a few years back…


The camping goods are always ready in his Jeep and he sets out unknowingly as and when he wishes…


No one knows where he is when he comes here…


He cuts off his earthly bonds whenever he comes here…


Maan looks at the beautiful Sunset at the horizon, it’s unbelievably beautiful, with the whole river water bleeding red twinning with his siblings Sun and Sky…


Its so fascinating, Maan loves to get lost in such moments…


Yet there is something else that has been captivating Maan’s mind these days…


Maan is lost in those thoughts not able to enjoy the Nature’s drama unfolding right in front of his eyes….


The silence of the evening is killed by the sizzling sounds of the cold breeze coming from the woods…


Maan wanders the woods to get the materials for the camp fire…


Maan and the chirping waters of the gushing river ahead are a perfect match in such a beautiful evening…


But Maan is not interested in his long time company this time…


Maan just wants to go back as soon as possible before it’s too late…


When Maan returns the moon is there to welcome him…


It’s a serene moonlight night… The moon shines brighter on these lands than the concrete jungles where it’s cool ethereal rays are overshadowed by the unnatural lights, that the foolish mankind is so proud of, they think that they have conquered nature!!


Maan looks at the beautiful star studded Sky, Nature’s never ending canvas, magically painted with different hues every passing hour…


The actual secret is that the picture each one sees is unique, it’s a reflection of one’s own imagination…


You end up watching what you want to see….


Its like a dream that comes when one is still awake….


Maan follows the”Single” clouds usually, they are the little kings of the Sky, majestically roaming as per their will and wish without any worries.. just like our MSK..


but now he is rather drawn to the “Couples” ….


Even they seem to be happy… emerging from different directions, coming together at a certain point, merging into one and taking the same direction from there after…


Maybe that’s life, haina?


Maan is turning philosophical.. is this the right time for that Maan?


Maan doesn’t have the answers…


Maan is all set to get the fire going…


“Ye Raatein Ye Mausam


Nadi ka kinara Ye Chanchal Hawa”


Its not Maan’s mind voice that is humming…


It’s the Carvaan …


Maan turns and his eyes follow the direction of the music…


Maan Singh Khurana is not here alone this time, he has got company, real company…


Its Geet Handa, aka Geet Maan Singh Khurana…


There are a number of unanswered questions in Maan’s mind right now , “Does Maan have any rights to be her husband?”


“What does this wedding mean to her?”


“Is this wedding decision by MSK a mistake?”


Geet has nothing to do with this wedding….


Its all MSK’s doing, he forced it on Geet….


You can force someone and tie the knot, but what happens after that is only in their hands….


Maneet’s wedding is neither a love marriage nor an arranged one…


At Maan Singh Khurana’s engagement…


Maan wanted to meet his bride before getting engaged..


They have not yet met in person… and have spoken only a few words… it’s a pacca arranged marriage decided by Dadima herself…


Maan has zero expectations from his would be, but anyone wants to be their partner’s favorite, haina?


Maan is not an exception in that matter …


Maan goes to the bride’s room and knocks…


The girl comes and opens the door…


She has covered her face with her pallu… sanskari ladhki?


Maan: are you happy?


Girl: I am


Maan is happy…


Maan: Do you like me?


That girl opens her pallu to look at Maan…


Girl: I don’t know, by the way who are you?


Maan is shocked to see someone else in the place of his bride…


Maan turns into the Angry Singh Khurana…


Maan: who are YOU?


The girl tries to leave sending trouble….


Maan catches hold of her and stops her…


That girl struggles to get off his hold…. But he is too strong for her…


Girl: let me go, Dhust Danav, I’m not the bride, leave me


Maan: I know, where is she?


Girl: she’s gone


Maan: how did that happen?


Girl: I sent her with her lover, she doesn’t want to marry you


Maan: how dare you? what do you think of yourself? You think you did something heroic? This is stupidity, you fools


Girl: how dare you call me that? You are only a fool for trying to marry someone who doesn’t like you


Maan: you think you can play with MSK and his family’s honor and reputation?


Girl: it’s not my fault


Maan: you thought you could cancel this engagement? Who are you to stop MSK’s engagement? No one messes with MSK, MSK won’t stop his engagement for a stupid girl


Girl: what?


Maan covers her face and takes her with him…


Girl: let me go


Maan takes her to the stage…


That girl takes off her pallu and uncovers her face…


Everyone is shocked to see her… it’s not the bride to be, it’s some other girl…


Dadi: Maan


Maan: Annie, rings


Dadi: Maan bete


Maan: Dadi, this is your bahu


Maan pulls her hand and puts the ring on her finger..


That girl panics…


Maan looks at Annie…


Annie gives the ring to the girl..


Annie: it’s your turn babhi


That girl is not ready to humiliate herself in front of everyone, she wants to get out of this madness someway or the other…


She decides to leave with dignity….


The rings were exchanged in no time..


That girl left immediately…


Dadi later found out that the girl is Geet Handa, a friend of the original bride…


The wedding was fixed after talking to the Handas…


The Handas are also from Hoshiarpur, Dadi’s hometown..


Dadi knows Darji and Dadi convinces the Handas that Dadi will make her bahu, Geet, the Queen of the Khurana khandan after marriage…


Maan went on a business trip right after the engagement…


All the while the bride and groom never talked to each other…


The wedding took place as per schedule…


Geet neither said yes nor did she say no, she kept her mouth shut all the time…


She was determined like she was on a suitable mission, like “you think I will jump off the cliff alone, I am taking you along, you fool”


Geet’s silence scared the hell out of Maan…


Maan thought that the girl who wanted her friend to get a life of her choice would never marry against her wish.


Maan was expecting her elope on the wedding day ..


Even that was fine for Maan, he knew that he had made a mistake… the guilt was eating him, that way Maan would have been relieved…


Maan was shocked to see Geet at the Mandap…


This time Maan was forced to do the rituals against his wish…


But Geet Handa has decided to punish Maan Singh Khurana instead, she married him for that… haina?


Geet has actually impressed Maan with her acts, first by helping a friend get her love…


Maan strongly believes that one writes his own destiny but people wrongly blame others…


Geet too believes that anyone should decide their own destiny and not others..


That’s why she helped her friend choose her life…


Again Geet revealed herself without fear before the engagement, she got engaged as Geet Handa and not any mystery girl in disguise… Geet is fearless and resists injustice…


One thing that Maan doesn’t understand is, why didn’t she walk off the engagement?


The girl who was so courageous to point out MSK’s mistake should have stopped him too, but she didn’t , why?


Maan married Geet because there is something about her that keeps pulling him towards her, and her beauty is irresistible…


Maan kept thinking about how Geet took off her pallu and curiously looked at Maan at their infamous first meeting…


She took Maan’s question, “Do you like me?” seriously and wanted to answer genuinely…


And after looking at Maan, the way she innocently asked Maan who he was…


She had zero intention to harm anyone, specially Maan, she was there to help her friend….


Unfortunately Maan was at the wrong place at the wrong time, or maybe Geet was at the right place at the right time….


She indeed is a drama queen, within those few minutes, Geet’s face exploded with emotions, the panic, the confusion, the helplessness, the frustration, the anger and finally that fearlessness…


How could Maan forget the way she left staring at Maan? It was as if she warned him that he can’t get away with what he has done, and that she will make him pay for it….


Those fifteen days Maan was only thinking about Geet…


Thinking about all the possibilities behind her silence using his logical head, but he could never come to a conclusion…


The most probable possibility that Maan thought would happen was, a missing bride at MSK’s wedding, and this time without any second option…


But Maan’s hypothesis crashed hard…


The bride came and married Maan Singh Khurana…


And at the wedding Geet had a plastic face with no emotions at all, that was some Oscar winning act…


Why did Geet marry him? That’s still an unsolved mystery for Maan…..


After the wedding…


Maan was left alone with Geet…


Maan had a number of questions in mind….


Maan: I want to talk to you


Geet: even I want to talk


Maan: so, let’s go somewhere, come with me


Maan pauses as he doesn’t know if he had the right to ask her to go with him just like that….


He looks at her doubtfully….


Geet: let’s go, you never leave me with any options, do you?


That’s kind of rude, the engagement was a blunder, but she had the choice to stop the wedding… haina?


During their journey Maan wanted to ask her about many things, but Geet was either sleeping or having her headphones on all the time…


Let him suffer more, haina?


Here they are…. They are yet to talk….


The stage is set… Maan has lit the fire…


Geet has turned on the music…


Geet comes towards Maan and sits besides him as Maan keeps watching Geet…


Maan moves to give her space… she is still a stranger to him….


Maan is struggling to understand this “Mystical Mohini” who happens to be his Mrs somehow…


Yes, she is no less than the Pari, Mohini, who seduced heavenly Rishis…


Maan’s Pari is not in a seductive mood, that’s not necessary, MSK is already seduced…


Maan’s eyes have already started to send their messages…


They never get tired looking at Geet, they were watching Geet the whole day when she was sleeping in the Jeep…


Finally she speaks….


Geet: so you happy now? But it’s not fair to punish an innocent like this Mr. Khurana


Punish who? Ulta, Maan has suffered the punishment himself, haina?


Maan: are you happy?


She must be, she has succeeded in her mission to torture Maan Singh Khurana, only she could do that….


Even Maan had the choice to call off this dramatic wedding, but he couldn’t …


Maan was waiting for Geet to call the shots, it’s like Maan already gave Geet the right to decide his destiny… But why, he doesn’t know…


Geet: kind of


Maan: matlab?


Geet: I like men who give tough competition, while I was happy to admire from outside, you are the one who actually dared to pull me into the ring


Maan: I too believe in equal competition


Geet is as par Maan in that…


Geet: how could you believe that I will marry you?


Maan: I never did, I thought you would run away on the wedding eve


Geet laughs…


Geet: so I gave you sleepless nights, I won the first round


Maan keeps looking at Geet …


Maan: why didn’t you?


Geet: you regret it?


Maan: why would I? I took a chance and I think I am lucky


Geet: that’s interesting


Maan: now what?


Geet: it’s your game, you should know better


Maan: why did you marry me?


Geet: thank God you asked this question at least now


Geet laughs…


Maan can’t take his eyes off her, she looks more beautiful…


Geet: I love challenges, you offered me one and I had to take it, challenges make life more interesting, haina?


Maan is astonished…. What a character!!!


Geet is definitely going to make Maan’s life more colorful…


Geet: now it’s your turn, why me?


Maan: I don’t know


Geet: I love it, we will find out together


Maan: but I wouldn’t have done it if it were some other girl


Geet: should I take it as a compliment?


Maan: off course, you know you are beautiful


Geet: that I am


Maan: I mean, not just beautiful, beautiful enough to confuse Maan Singh Khurana into committing mistake after mistake


Maan moves closer….


Now he knows that Geet too is in the same boat, ready to explore this new adventure…


Geet tries to ignore by trying to get the warmth of the fire..


But this man is ready to offer her the warmth that she needs right away, she knows that she will melt in that fire…


There is a moment of awkward silence…


Geet is already feeling the changes that this man has induced…


Geet gets up and starts to walk along the shore…


Maan closely follows her…


The music goes on….


“Ye Raatein Ye Mausam..


Nadi ka kinara Ye Chanchal Hawa “


Geet: this is my favourite song, and look where you have brought me, I think I am at the right place


Maan gets closer….


“Kaha do dillon ne…


Ke milkar kabhi hum…


Na honge juda”


Maan then catches hold of her and pulls her into a hug…


Maan: you are in the right hands Geet


Geet turns towards Maan and looks into his eyes…


Geet: I know


Maneet eyelock….


“Ye bahon mein bahein…


Behaki nigahen…


Lo aane laga hai….


Zindagi ka maza”


Maneet mahiiiii….

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The other one written for the contest....



Ye Dil hai Mushkil….


Maan Singh Khurana is the boss of Khurana Constructions…


Maan is very professional and has dedicated his life to work…


Maan doesn’t believe in relationships because according to Maan, human beings fake emotions thinking that they are fooling others not knowing that they are the victims of their own acts…


Maan’s only bonding is with his Dadima….


Dadi wishes that Maan finds love and ends his lonely life…


Dadi wants Maan to have a family, for Maan unfortunately lost his family in his childhood itself…


Maan has lived on his own and is so much used to his own company that he is not ready to let go of what he has got, he doesn’t want to take a risk and lose his peaceful life for anyone….


Why are these people desperate to become a slave of someone in the name of a relationship?


Why is Maan thinking about relationships when he is allergic to one?


It’s because his secretary Ms. Geet Handa is once again on leave because some stupid boy is coming to see her for an alliance….


It's only this bad habit of Geet that Maan hates, otherwise he has no complaints about his sincere hardworking secretary….


Maan calls Adi…


Adi is scared…. He is going to have a tough day, he doesn’t know how bad it would be…


Maan’s mood goes off whenever Geet takes a leave…


Maybe it’s the black coffee that he is missing…


Adi: ha ha ha, good morning sir


Maan: Adi, where’s my secretary?


Adi: ha ha ha ha sir, Geet ko aaj koi dekhne aaraha hai


Maan gets even more angry hearing that…


Adi doesn’t know that Maan is upset because of that only..


Maan: why are you telling me that?


Adi: you only asked me about Geet sir?


Maan: what? I asked you “where’s my coffee?”, go get my coffee


Adi: ji sir


Adi escapes…


Adi: Pinky, please, you take the coffee


Pinky: no no Adi, I can’t, Maan sir only asked you


Adi: only Geet can handle her boss


Pinky: don’t know how she does it, we can’t do it for even a day


Adi: Geet, you are great


Pinky: Adi, the coffee is getting cold, Maan sir didn’t ask for cold coffee


Adi: ha ha ha ha ha


Adi runs with the coffee…


Maan is walking left and right in his cabin frustrated….


Adi rushes in and spills the coffee over Maan…


Maan is reminded of the first time when Geet made coffee for him…


It was a week after she joined as Maan’s secretary after Dadi’s strong recommendation…


Geet is in a way related to one of Dadi’s friend…


Maan didn’t like Dadi interfering with his business, specially in the selection of his personal secretary..


But Maan had no other go…


No interview, nothing, Geet was directly appointed as Maan’s secretary without Maan’s knowledge…


Geet came with the coffee…


Geet: sir coffee


Maan: hmm


Maan is busy looking into his lap top…


Geet: sirrrrr coffee


Geet shouts..


Maan gets angry…


Maan: what are you doing?


Geet: coffee sir


Maan: I know, keep it on the table and go


Geet thought that Maan would get it from her …


Geet: babaji, mein secretary hoon ya butler?


Maan: what?


Geet: kuch nahi, how is the coffee?


Maan sips and it’s too salty…


Maan: what’s this?


Geet: coffee, does it taste like tea?


Maan: Geeeeet


Geet: I put only one spoon sugar sir


Maan: did you?


Geet: yes sir, I swear


Maan: you put a spoonful of salt Geet


Geet: oh no sir, give it to me


Geet tries to get it from Maan and the coffee spills on his shirt…


Maan: Geeeeet


Geet: what Geet? I am not the coffee master and you didn’t hire me for that


Maan: what?


Geet: is the secretary’s job making coffee for the boss? I don’t think so sir


Maan: youuuuuu


Geet leaves… but she came back with the perfect black coffee in a couple of minutes…


She quietly came and kept it on the table and left that time…


Maan stared the cup for a moment…


Geet called…


Maan answers the call…


Geet: sir, don’t worry, this time it’s only sugar, see here


Geet opens the window panes…


Maan looks at her enjoying her coffee….


Geet: it’s the same sir, it’s good, go ahead, drink it, cheers


From that day Geet gets the coffee everyday for both of them, she tastes it first and approves it for Maan’s consumption everytime…


And doesn’t miss the cheers too…


Maan is used to having coffee with his secretary, that’s whe is missing most…


Adi: sorry sir


Maan comes back to from his thoughts….


Maan keeps thinking about Geet the whole day…


Next day…


Geet is back….


Maan: so, you wasted another day Geet?


Geet: not this time sir, I’m getting married


Maan doesn’t like it…


He keeps looking at Geet in disbelief…


Geet: won’t you wish me


Maan: Haan, congrats


From then on Geet is irregular to work and Maan starts missing Geet ..


Dev Khanna is a real estate don..


He is good looking and well educated…


He is also one of the most eligible bachelors of Delhi..


Darji’s close relative Sumanth came with this alliance for Geet ..


Sumanth’s son and Dev are college mates…


Dev is down to earth, polite and respectful to elders…


Sumanth said he would have made Dev his son in law if only he had a daughter…


Dev is the suitable boy for any Indian family…


Their marriage is fixed…


The Handa family is very happy…..


Then Geet comes with the invitation card…


Geet: sir, you should come to my wedding without fail, I have already scheduled it for you


Maan: hmm


Geet gives another envelope…


Maan: what’s this?


Geet: it’s my resignation


Maan: what?


Geet: I am resigning my job, get a better secretary sir who doesn’t give you trouble like me


Maan doesn’t want any other secretary, he is happy with his troublesome secretary…


Maan: but why? You are going to stay in Delhi only after marriage


Geet: yes sir, but Dev doesn’t want me to work after marriage


Maan can’t believe that Geet is happy with that, yet another stupid girl happy to enter the enslaved life!!


But it’s not Maan’s business to stop everyone…. He should mind his own business and limit his concerns about his work only…


Maan: you can work till then Geet


Geet: but sir


Maan: it’s my order Geet


After that Geet kept coming to office but she was on leave most of the time…


Maan is angry that his work is affected by her absence..


Maybe Maan should have accepted her resignation and hired another secretary…


Is Maan that much dependent on his secretary?


Can’t he survive without a secretary?


No, he can’t survive without Geet it seems….


Maan’s life messed up not just at KC but on the whole without Geet Handa…


It’s the big day…


Maan is staring the wedding card itself…


Dadi is ready…


Time for the Haldi ceremony…


Dadi: Maan, are you coming?


Maan: no Dadima, I’ll come for the wedding


Dadi: ok, I am going


Dadi goes…


Maan keeps thinking about Geet Handa…


He can think about Geet Handa only tonight, tomorrow she will be Geet Khanna, then Maan has no rights to think about her….


But that’s not right… yes, Maan can’t do that, he can’t stop thinking about Geet…


Maan knows that something is wrong, it should not happen…


Maan then goes to see Geet, he has to see Geet Handa once…


He needs to put an end to this…


Maan is at the Mandap looking for Geet..


Dadi is shocked to see Maan…


Dadi: Maan, I knew you would come


Maan: Dadi, Geet Kahan hai?


Dadi: she is in her room


Maan goes to the bride’s room…


Geet is getting ready for the function…


Maan asks the girls to leave…


Geet: sir, what are you doing?


Maan: exactly, what are you doing Geet?


Geet: I’m getting married sir


Maan: do you really want this Geet?


Geet is silent….


Maan: you can’t do this Geet


Geet: why sir? Everyone is not like you


Maan: that’s why Geet


Geet: sir


Geet looks into his eyes doubtfully…


Maan is not going to let Geet ruin her life…


Maan: Dev is not the right person Geet


Geet: no one is perfect sir


Maan: don’t be stupid Geet, you can’t marry Dev


Geet: if I keep looking for the right person I will be like you sir, alone


Maan: better to be alone than in bad company Geet


Geet: but my family will not leave me alone sir


Maan: it’s your life Geet damn it , take control of it before it’s too late


Maan is looking into her with determination….


Geet: same to you sir


Maan: Geeet? It’s not the time for jokes, I won’t let you do this


Geet: I have to sir


Maan: I know everything Geet, I wouldn’t want any girl to marry him, how can I let you marry him Geet?


Geet did come to office every other day because of Maan’s compulsion…


Geet avoided Maan mostly for Maan reads her mind easily any day… .


Maan would find out even when Geet gets a simple headache or in any pain…


Geet goes silent at those times…


Maan would not give her work at those times…


Once they were coming from a official meeting…


The client offered them dinner after the meeting..


But Maan doesn’t eat dinner and so he rejected the offer and they were returning..


Geet is very hungry…


She gets angry when she is hungry…


Geet: are you driving a bullock cart sir?


Maan: what?


Geet: why are you driving slow?


Maan is going fast only…


Maan: Geet, this is not a F1 track


Geet: it’s 8 pm, I’m getting late sir, everyone will be worried


Maan: I’ll drop you home Geet, tell them


Geet: i will die of hunger before you drop me


Geet is ranting.....


Maan: what?


Geet: sir, normal people eat dinner everyday


Maan: I know


Geet: I am not Maan Singh Khurana, I am an ordinary girl


Maan understands that and takes her to a dabha…


Maan is astonished to see her eat her simple food like she is having a Michelin star dinner… she enjoys everything like it’s the best thing in her life…


From that time Maan makes sure Geet gets her meals on time everytime they are on official outings even if Maan doesn’t eat ..


Maan even started eating dinner to give Geet company…


Geet: I can’t eat with you just watching me and not eat


Maan: it’s not a problem Geet


Geet: it’s a problem for me sir, I am taught to share my meal and not to eat selfishly


Maan: ok, I will get a salad


Geet: you are in a dabha sir


Maan: ok, you order something


Geet: chotu, ek tandoori chicken, sir, won’t hurt your diet, enjoy it


That’s how Maan started cheating his diet whenever he was with Geet…


Geet couldn’t escape Maan’s hawk eyes…


Maan’s eyes are always on her when she is at KC…


Maan noticed that Geet was not so happy…


Maan got worried and he uses his powers and finds out about that Dev Khanna…


Dev rejected the proposal initially as the Handas are not wealthy enough for him…


Maan found out that Geet’s family has already agreed to give their farmland in dowry..


The Dev shamelessly demanded a car, Rolex watch, a honeymoon trip to Europe, his list is never ending….


Now Maan looks at Geet for an answer…


Why is she marrying Dev?


Geet is helpless…


Geet tries to leave from there… .


Maan catches hold of her dupatta and stops her…


Geet turns and pleads him to let her go…


Maan is unstoppable…


He pulls her closer…


Maan: you can’t do it when I am here Geet


Geet: what do you want sir?


Maan: you can’t marry that Dev Geet, stop this wedding


Geet: I can stop but my family won’t stop sir, they will find another boy, what if he is worse?


Maan: what do you mean?


Geet: can you guarantee me to find the right person?


Maan: I can’t but you will find a better one Geet


Geet: sir, it’s too late, we can’t stop the wedding now


Maan: it’s never too late Geet, you can if you don’t want this wedding, I will stop it


Geet gives up…


Geet: yes, I don’t want it sir, I will stop it, but on one condition


Maan: what’s it Geet?


Geet: you promise me to get me married to the man I think is right for me


Maan: I promise Geet


Maan is ready to do anything to stop this wedding…


Geet: I know that person


Maan is disappointed… she has a lot of options….


Why not? She is Geet Handa…


Maan: who is it Geet?



Geet: it’s Maan Singh Khurana


Maan pulls her into a hug…


Maan: I am not perfect too Geet


Geet: but you are the one for me sir, Geet ka Maan


Maan: no Geet, tum meri ho, Maan ki Geet, how could I let you marry someone else?


Geet: what if Dev was a good guy like you?


Maan: no one dares to marry Geet except for Maan Singh Khurana himself, samjhi tum?


Maan lifts Geet and takes her with him….


Maan marries his Geet and their mahi continues at KC and KM ..

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beautiful story

enjoy reading very much

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Thanks for the pm


Ye Raatein Ye Mausam

Amazing OS.... wonderfully written

so Maan and Geet forced Geet to marry him

Maan's thoughts understandable

at least he knows everything is in their hands

well Maan's fiancée ditched him at the engagement

and Geet helped her leave with her lover

Maan was indeed angry

that's how he forcefully made Geet get engaged to him

great that dadima fixed their marriage

liked this confident, brave and sassy Geet

wonderful that she was determined not to let Maan win

oh she married him to punish him

glad that Maan was impressed with Geet

hmm Maan is pulled towards Geet

Gosh Maan could not get Geet out of his mind

finally they talked

good that she confronted him about his actions

loved that he asked if she is happy

pleased with her response

she certainly bowled Maan over

nice that she also likes him

now they are both ready to explore their relationship

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Yeh Dil Hai Mushkil

Fabulous OS….amazingly written

so Maan does not believe in relationships

well he only bonds with his dadima

of cos she wants Maan to find love and have a family

sad that he lost his family in his childhood

liked that Maan is thinking of his secretary

hmm she is on leave cos there is an alliance for her

as expected Maan was upset hearing about the alliance

agree with Adi that only Geet can handle Maan

Maan was lost in the past and when he met Geet for the first time

great that she was not scared of Maan

oh Maan and Geet have coffee together

sad that Geet's alliance is fixed

Maan was shocked

now her wedding is soon

upset that she resigned

not surprised that Maan was affected Geet's absence

its Geet's wedding day

at least Maan went

loved their past moments

good that Maan noticed that Geet was sad

Dev is so demanding

dismayed that the Handas gave in to his demands

nice that Maan confronted Geet

Gosh he is willing to stop the wedding if she wants

she agrees provided she finds the right man for him

and its him

glad that she knows he is for her

finally they got married

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Posted: 2 years ago
#6

Both OS is Beautiful

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Posted: 2 years ago
#7

Ye Raatein Ye Mausam

Geet covering her face and asking him who he was. The missing bride. And then the replacement bride.


What made him take that step?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#8

She married him to punish him. Isn't she punishing herself too?

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Posted: 2 years ago
#9

Both took it as a challenge. Both appreciated the other's attitude. Now both will make a lovely pair.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#10

Ye Dil hai Mushkil….

Maan hates it that Geet keeps leaving to see the guys, or he hates that she sees the guys?

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