FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 24

Many apologies for the delayed reply and the update, I was caught up with unexpected workload and had little time to post proper replies. Thank you for giving this story a chance and being patient with me.

@devtaholic, I am already working on the spin-off, I will post it tomorrow or on Sunday.

@mysterymin, @Javeriaa3991, I will update this story next week, hopefully I will get little relief after next week to frequently write and update!

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

@minhasmansi92, I will be adding some drama. Do look forward to the drama.

Oh i will be 😆

Waah meri Sunshine Angel! This is such a fabulous update yaara! Dil khush kar diya! Yeh bilkul bhi filler chapter nahi laga, in fact, I loved the Angad and Sahiba acquainting to one another, this chapter read more like a sneak-peek to AngSa's friendship which will soon bloom into love! I know it's just two chapters left now, but your updates are usually so long, they always make up for the time.

Also, writing myself, I have come to realise, you just can't write for the sake of it... some inspiration is always needed... Even if things are getting better between the leads in the show, it is still so slow, you want to throw pan on the whole production! Well, sorry not sorry about the aggressive rant! But needed because as usual, your story went straight to my heart!

Bahut hie amazing thha, from Sahiba's cold shoulder to Bimbo Barbie, to taking her case in the dining area to Angad subtly threatening her, I was hooked until I read the last word!

Yeh kitna zaruri chapter thha for making further advancement, I can totally understand... I enjoyed the treat of reading more of my two most favourite characters!

Other than Sahiba Seerat showdown, Daarji-Bebe conversation and Angad putting his foot down for Sahiba in front of her family, including supporting Keerat as genuine apology, was such a heartening highlight for me in the story!

Kitni bhi tareef karun kam hai. You truly are a story weaver!

Love you so much, woman. 🤗

Hugs and Kisses,

Radhika

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Bahut hie amazing thha, from Sahiba's cold shoulder to Bimbo Barbie, to taking her case in the dining area to Angad subtly threatening her, I was hooked until I read the last word!

Yeh kitna zaruri chapter thha for making further advancement, I can totally understand... I enjoyed the treat of reading more of my two most favourite characters!

Other than Sahiba Seerat showdown, Daarji-Bebe conversation and Angad putting his foot down for Sahiba in front of her family, including supporting Keerat as genuine apology, was such a heartening highlight for me in the story!

Kitni bhi tareef karun kam hai. You truly are a story weaver!

Love you so much, woman. 🤗

Hugs and Kisses,

Radhika

Hello, I missed you on the forum last week. Even when I was updating the chapter, I was wondering what would you say about this. It is nice to see, this chapter does not look like a filler - I doubted every single word I was writing, and this was too much for me last week. It is a relief to hear that the chapter worked and motivates me to write this week. Two chapters? I do not know right now how much I can write... so here is me hoping that it works this time as well.

Yes, you are right, sometimes, we all need inspiration to write each word. The show is something else, I rely on Az07's updates and episode discussion thread before diving into the show. Some of the scenes are getting good, though not the entire episodes. For me, they had just overdone, over-slowed the hate part on Angad's side and underdone on Sahiba's part, which messed up the show. So, rant is valid. Your ''as usual, your story went straight to my heart!'' cheers me a lot!

I sooooo wanted to do a scene where Sahiba and Angad get angry for each other, the conversation between daarji-bebe and the newlywed couple was the only thing that I felt confident about. I felt it would make more sense since arrange marriages, partition, uprooting - all the lemons made the older couple wise and supportive of all despite their differences with the family members. Also, Angad in the story got the chance to see how Sahiba's family treated her before marriage that allowed him to put her family in place.

Ye chibi kitna cute hai. Dil ko chuuuuu gaya!! I might sound like a baby, seeking attention, but your review cheered me a lot. 😊

LOVE YOU 'Mwuh'

Wow! Just wow.

See there is this gripe I have with love stories, even though they are like my biggest guilty pleasure - they are unrealistic in pace, presentation etc. I have rarely seen authors exploring the small moments between couples, the conversations that deepens bonds and the adjustments couples make around themselves to start building a life together . I love reading such things - these have sense of intimacy, a feel of love that is vastly different from overtly sexual encounters yet equally passionate.

I absolutely enjoyed this filler because you have laid a very solid foundation what I am sure will be a fascinating love story.

Waiting for more ❤️

Hey Lizzyn Darcy

How are u ?

When are u gonna update

Originally posted by: NidhaA

Wow! Just wow.

See there is this gripe I have with love stories, even though they are like my biggest guilty pleasure - they are unrealistic in pace, presentation etc. I have rarely seen authors exploring the small moments between couples, the conversations that deepens bonds and the adjustments couples make around themselves to start building a life together . I love reading such things - these have sense of intimacy, a feel of love that is vastly different from overtly sexual encounters yet equally passionate.

I absolutely enjoyed this filler because you have laid a very solid foundation what I am sure will be a fascinating love story.

Waiting for more ❤️

Thanks NidhaA. The comment brings so much comfort to me: partly because I was able to deliver to the readers' exepectations, and partly because it makes me rework on my confidence and get back to doing things I like.

I do not think I am in the headspace to explore passionate sexual encounters in my writings right now. So, there might be more of these simple moments coming up. What I fear most is slowing down the pace of the story by accommodating these moments... Perhaps, more practice would be required to achieve the fine balance.

Hopefully, I wont disappoint you and the rest. Have a cheerful upcoming-week!

Thank you for giving this story a chance. See you in future updates!

Originally posted by: Soldierindia

Hey Lizzyn Darcy

How are u ?

When are u gonna update

Heya,

Thanks for asking and dropping by. I did start writing the first drafts of next chapter (two days ago) but had a difficult day yesterday - had to deal with another shitty news - so, I might take few days to get over that before I can begin writing decent drafts.

All in all, there will be delayed update during mid-week or around the weekend. (Unless life throws more lemons!) I do have a rough outline drafted from two days ago, so I just need to be in a mood long enough to finish writing the chapter. (I hope to get over the crappy mood swings asap for my own sanity.)

Though I have not been regular, please bear with me. Have cheerful days ahead!