The 3rd installment of my story!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello and thank you for your very sweet words!!-I lowe u guyz!!😳..well here goes..let me knw what u think!

Armaan finally reaches his destination-his mind feels at ease almost as if what hes looking for will be found here-in Goa itself..he remembers the last time he ventured out for GM and how he'd insulted Jassi in the process,his cute face saddens for a second but he is soon distracted by something unusual..

Armaan: 'Nandu??!'..

..his eyes cant believe what he is seeing,how can nandu be here in Goa and why is he here?-a hundred questions race through his mind,when he turns, Nandu has disappeared..He approaches the reception desk and quickly asks as to who the gentlemen that was here a minute ago was..

Receptionist: Sir,woh Nandan Verma hain-humaare hi hotel mein guest hain,woh Karishma Fashion house ke saath aayen hain..

Armaan: Karishma Fashion House??..hmmmm ok thanks alot..

He gets the keys to his own room and walks away puzzled-

'Is ka mathlab yeh hai ke Nandu Karishma ka head hain..aur woh GM ko haraane ki poori koshish kar raha hai-lekin itni dushmani kyun?!..'

Armaan finds it difficult to comprehend that Nandu could be the sole driving force behind Karishma-a company that has virtually overnight becomes GM's main competitor-he feels something is amiss,how can Nandu possess so much knowledge about the fashion industry-this can only mean one thing-that someone else is involved-and that individual can only be one person..

'Nahin..nahin jassi?,Kya jassi Karishma ke peeche hai?..'

Armaan's heart sinks and he finds himself fighting back the tears..he had changed himself for jassi and not only himself but Gulmohar too..Jassi and GM were always the one and the same-but today..

'Aaj tak mujhe Gulmohar ki har jeet mein jassi ki jeet nazar aati thi,lekin main tho jassi ko haar detha raha..'

-Armaan breaks as he staggers into his room..'

..'Maine apni zindagi ko haradiya!!..'

and he weeps vowing that he'll return everything to her,today jassi hates him but he knew that somewhere down the line he was at fault..Love could never be demanded or conquered and never questioned-he had tried to hold onto his love whilst trying to force respect from it..he had questioned the one person who meant everything to him..and he felt that now it was time that he returned happiness to his love,even if it meant his own loss..

Back in Jassi's hotel room,nandu and jassi are both talking..a phonecall comes in and both are astounded to hear that Gulmohar has withdrawn from the deal completely!..Jassi feels happiness but yet her heart feels something is wrong,she moves towards the open window and looking out senses that someone else is thinking about her..

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Sharmii thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aisah..... 😔 😔 😔

better continue varna.... šŸ˜› !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow pls continue next part pls
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: a4j4ever

aisah..... 😔 😔 😔

better continue varna.... šŸ˜› !

šŸ˜† haan karoogi yaar-but first stop calling me aisahšŸ˜›šŸ˜‰..lolz i dnt know where to take this myself-im still thinking..but this is how i feel TnD should have done it!..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aishah, you really take longgggggggggggggggg break at work. You are only allowed to take 15 minutes break when you are writing a script. Go on and finish your job on time or before the deadline, you will get a big bonus.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aishu dearie pits AMMMMMAZING ..
U would have made JJKN such an amazing show to watch .. Iw ish u were the writer there
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow tht was great Aishah plzzzz continue!!!
-Hera
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowww...aishi excellent.. šŸ‘ keep continue it...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_111

Aishu dearie pits AMMMMMAZING ..
U would have made JJKN such an amazing show to watch .. Iw ish u were the writer there

Awwwwww thanks angel😳..Neelam Di i posted the next part the very next day!-kuch break tho hona chaiyye na?..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishah

Awwwwww thanks angel😳..Neelam Di i posted the next part the very next day!-kuch break tho hona chaiyye na?..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜Š...

Arre! what break? As it is the real JJKN is "BREAK"ing so many hearts! At least keep this story going to keep our hopes alive............warna.... šŸ˜”šŸ˜†

Sorry aishah! just addicted to the new story line! šŸ˜†

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