New Beginnings (OS) - Page 19

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Posted: 2 years ago

A family❤️and that's all to it... nothing more beautiful than that


Loved it Pompy

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Will pour my love on this absolutely beautiful series in detail a little later ❤️... But first , I’m so so happy for CA in your story ... Don’t really care for anyone in the show anymore , but it still kinda sucks that CA is stuck between the 3 lunatics .. Thanks to your story I can live in my happy bubble that CA’s getting what she really deserves

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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful. ❤️ I feel blessed to be able to read such a story. It has all sorts of emotions.

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Posted: 2 years ago

This was an amazing write up.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Hakuna_Matata11

This was an amazing write up.

Continue soon.

Heya.. thank you for reading. This OS is done. I have updated all 10 parts.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: strancho

Heya.. thank you for reading. This OS is done. I have updated all 10 parts.

ok actually the index was not updated so I thought it’s still incomplete.Will check out the pages.
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Hakuna_Matata11

ok actually the index was not updated so I thought it’s still incomplete.Will check out the pages.

Apologies, I just wrote my second piece. This is actually a continuation of the previous OS I wrote. I am a newbie in writing so did not add any index. Sorry again.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: strancho

Apologies, I just wrote my second piece. This is actually a continuation of the previous OS I wrote. I am a newbie in writing so did not add any index. Sorry again.

No need to be sorry…your story is amazing. If you can just add one index and update the page numbers along with the chapters it would be easier for the readers to checkout that.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Epilogue


After 8 years, Anuj, Maaya, Choti, and their youngest daughter, Niyati were on their way on a camping trip. Anuj was busy reading some documents, while Maaya was driving the car.

As they drove through the winding roads, Anuj couldn't help but feel nostalgic. It had been a long time since they had gone on a family camping trip. The last time they went, Choti was only 8 years old, and now she was a teenager. Just then he remembered something and got worried.

Anuj: I have something to confess.

Maaya: Don't. It's been less than a year since you got a new laptop for Choti, and six months since you got a new tablet for Niyati.

Anuj: No, it's not that.

Maaya: After a long time we are going camping. But if you suddenly tell me that you want to confess something, wouldn't I be startled? So, what it is?

Anuj: I got the burner and the equipment for the campfire and sleeping bags. I even brought a beam projector so you and the kids could watch movies.

Hearing about movies, Niyati got excited.

Niyati: Maa, I want to watch Frozen.

Choti: Aren't you sick of that? Watching it every day won't turn you into Elsa. And you look like Olaf.

Niyati: Maa, see she is..

Maaya: Niyati, if you cry right now, I won't let you watch it. Choti, if you keep teasing her, I'll deduct 45 minutes from your game time.

Choti: Stop calling me Choti. I am not a kid anymore.

Maaya: Yes you are. (Looked at Anuj) And you, keep talking.

Anuj: I made sure to bring everything but I... forgot the tent.

Maaya: What?

Niyati, Choti: Papa...


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: strancho

Epilogue


After 8 years, Anuj, Maaya, Choti, and their youngest daughter, Niyati were on their way on a camping trip. Anuj was busy reading some documents, while Maaya was driving the car.

As they drove through the winding roads, Anuj couldn't help but feel nostalgic. It had been a long time since they had gone on a family camping trip. The last time they went, Choti was only 8 years old, and now she was a teenager. Just then he remembered something and got worried.

Anuj: I have something to confess.

Maaya: Don't. It's been less than a year since you got a new laptop for Choti, and six months since you got a new tablet for Niyati.

Anuj: No, it's not that.

Maaya: After a long time we are going camping. But if you suddenly tell me that you want to confess something, wouldn't I be startled? So, what it is?

Anuj: I got the burner and the equipment for the campfire and sleeping bags. I even brought a beam projector so you and the kids could watch movies.

Hearing about movies, Niyati got excited.

Niyati: Maa, I want to watch Frozen.

Choti: Aren't you sick of that? Watching it every day won't turn you into Elsa. And you look like Olaf.

Niyati: Maa, see she is..

Maaya: Niyati, if you cry right now, I won't let you watch it. Choti, if you keep teasing her, I'll deduct 45 minutes from your game time.

Choti: Stop calling me Choti. I am not a kid anymore.

Maaya: Yes you are. (Looked at Anuj) And you, keep talking.

Anuj: I made sure to bring everything but I... forgot the tent.

Maaya: What?

Niyati, Choti: Papa...


Beautiful. But just answer one thing: Is Jhula Devi's husband dead?

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