if i were a creative ...updtd prt3 page 4

Armaan, atul and rahul reach lonavala after convincing shubhankar sir to take them with him. On reaching lonavala Shubhankar says to kirti that these are sent by doctor shashank to assist them in any way. Muskaan is doubtful that it is not what it seems. Atul goes to anjali and starts flirting as usual. They spend the day treating the patirnts well the lady doctors treating the patients and the male doctors assisting the ladies. At night they decide to play a game Dumsharads. Riddhima's turn comes and he wispers in her ear ILU in his own voice. She turns around and stares at him and then Armaan starts teasing her in the female voice. For a moment she thinks it was Armann but then she thinks to herself how can Armaan be here. She says there is no such film like this. Armaan insits that there is a film like that. Even rahul and atul tell that they have seen the movie. Then atul asks him which movie did he say and armaan just shrugs him off. Riddhima is confused as to what to do. She says she can't do it. And armaan and his entire gang start booing riddhima. Dr. keerti says to her to just do it as its only a game. And then she remembers the first time she said ILU to Armaan and smiles a bit. Armaan senses what she is thinking and smiles too thinking of the lonavala dance that they had together. Riddhima then does the ILU sign and her team guesses the movie and Armaan smiles thinking to himself yes she did it. Now the time comes for all the kids to go to sleep. So keerti shubhankar; atul anjali; rahul muskaan take the kids to their dorms. Riddhima also takes kids to the dorms and when they go in she stays out there.at the entrance/ Dr keerti tells her to come inside as there is a possibility of rain. And ridz says not to worry as she has an umbrella.

Riddhima goes in the backyard where she and armaan had danced. Armaan follows her. She remember's all the beautiful moments between them and says that she wished that she would have armaan back in her life. Armaan hearing this is so delighted and removes all his getup, becomes the cool armaan, goes behind rihhima and says,

Armaan: itni der kyun lagayi yeh kehne mein ki tum mujhe apni zindagi me vapas chati ho."

Riddhima gets the shock of her life. She's like

Riddhima: armaan what are you doing here. kisine tumhe dekh liya to.

Armaan: riddhima for once bhul jao ki yahan hamare siva aur koi hai. for once mujhse keh do ki tumne holi mein jo kaha tha woh sab sach tha. for once yeh keh do ki tumne in dino yeh sab jo kiya hai woh hamare pyar ki wajah se kiya hai. riddhima just for once......kehdo ki tum meri ho...phir no one can come between us."

Riddhima is scared and worried that is armaan joking or is he serious. And if he is serious and if ridz says no will he go back to the same old depressing armaan. all this while armaan is looking in her eyes.and riddhima wants to hide but can't go away from him.armaan grabs her hand genlty which she tries to take out from his grip but armaan doesn't loosen his grip on her hand. He gently moves his shirt open a little bit to the left and brings riddhima's hand closer and closer to his heart. as her hand touches his heart he says

Armaan: riddhima I did all this for you. No matter what I do I can't get you out of my heart. I can play pranks but it still has to be on you. I torture someone but it still has to be you. do you see how much i have suffered in your love. and now i know that you have done the same too. when i was upset you brought me back. because you wanted me your armaan to be back.i saw the urge with which you wanted me back the urge with which i had tried to get you. Riddhima i will not ask you to tell me whether you love me or not because it is evident that you love me, to me and now also to your friends.

At this riddhima looks up at him as if asking who else knows. and armaan guessing what she is thinking smiles and says he is my friend and he wont tell it to anybody dont worry.

riddhima's hand is still on his chest but she's not trying to move it.

armaan says riddhima i have come all this way upto lonavala facing all the hardships and knowing the fact that i can lose my job, facing all the questions that my collegueas had to ask about why m i going to lonavala just to meet you. just to see this beautiful face without which i cannot live a single day. riddhima ILU more than myself and I no you are hesitant to accept me in front of everyone but I will still love you forever.

Saying this he loosens her hand but her hand is still resting on his chest. seeing this he smiles and seeing him smile ridz realises what she;s doing and

gently removes her hand and armaan turns to leave.

SIMPLY AWESOME..totally loved it 👏

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awwww such a cute prediction 😳 😳 specially loved the dialouges AR share in the second half... haii i just wish they show something like that... 😛 😛 😛

thnaks guys for liking it i wil update some more during the weekend

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Originally posted by: vishlesha

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I loved it too hon...it was really brilliant!😳

luved it!!!
really nice update 😛

Riddzi is confused now. She knows she loves him and can't live without him but she had expressed that there were some differences between her and armaan that led to the break up. She knew that the muskaan fiasco gave it off but what didn't work between them was that they never got into each other's lives they never tried to well she never tried to. That's it she never tried to get to know him well. He always gave his 100 percent but she never did.

It starts to rain.

Armaan was leaving a little sad that riddhima didn't stop him but not worried because he knew she loves him and one day or the other she will have to accept it.
Riddhima is thinking of the times when armaan has tried to clarify. In the muskaan disaster he did tell her that he had to help his friend. After getting to know the truth he even asked whether her trust for him was that weak that anyone could come and rupture it? That's it I should trust him I should have trusted him long before. I should never have questioned his integrity. He was and will always be faithful to me. Suddenly as if waking from a long dream she screams armaan's name.

Armaan obviously is surprised and stops in his walk but the way she screamed she wakes other people as well and they start wondering what happened that riddhima had to scream. Anjali gets tensed and calls up everyone to go and find what happened to ridz. Dr. keerti gets worried because she was the last one to see off riddhima before she left. She had even warned riddhima about the rain and now she gets worried. Seeing keerti worried shubhankar gets worried and tries to console her saying keerti don't worry main senior doctor hu. Atul, muskaan, and rahul com along as well. All of them get out of the house and start to look for riddhima.

Armaan turns back and looks questioningly at riddhima. Riddhima looks lovingly at him and starts walking towards him and says

Armaan main tumse bahut pyar karti hu. Aur yeh sach hai ki main tumhare bina nahin jee sakti. What I said in holi was absolutely true.

Armaan looks at her thinking so that means that you were not completely drunk and u remembered what u had said.
Riddhima: I loved you always armaan. Its just that I couldn't tell you how much I loved you. But you knew, you knew my feelings. You truly knew my feelings.
She comes near him now and holds his hand in hers and armaan sheds a tear seeing this.

Riddhima: Armaan it was me who was mistaken. I should have trusted you. I shouldn't have doubted you feelings. The first official date that we had in the basketball match I was completely yours then and there. But you didn't use me because you loved me you cared for me. When I came to know about my dad you didn't tell me because you didn't want me hurt and yet I misunderstood you.

She starts crying now

Riddhima: When my first patient died you controlled me. When the police officer was dying you helped me. I was weak without you. When you were hurt during the bike race I cried for nights because you got hurt because of me-----

Armaan: that's not true riddhi----

Riddhima: --- No armaan let me say everything today( crying even more and holding his hand more tightly) even then I couldn't tell you how much I loved you. And then I finally said it and believe me it was the happiest day of my life. But then the muskaan's problem came and I lost all the trust that I had on you. How could I armaan. How could I lose my trust on you someone whom I loved more that anyone else. Yes armaan I loved you more than anyone more than my di more than my dad.

Armaan cries happily hearing this and tries to wipe her tears.

Riddhima drops to ground draggin armaan to bend down and then cries on his shoulder.

Armaan: bas riddhima its oky finally u have let yourself out and accepted my love. I am happy. Don't worry now I am always with you—

Riddhima: Armaan nahin …let me tell you everything today. I have realized that the main problem in our relationship is that we never talked together about the incidents that happened in our lives well no … me I never..

Armaan: that's not tru----

Ridhhima: yes armaan this is true. During holi I knew I confessed my feelings but couldn't tell you. When you left sanjivani I wanted to stop you but couldn't. When we met in kasauli and you wanted to kiss me I said no saying that our relationship is not that far. Armaan you should have slapped me then. I confessed to you and then I said that our relationship is not that far

Ridhhima cries her heart out and armaan tries to stop her but she doesn't

Riddhima: Oh armaan1 you have tolerated me so much---

Armaan: No riddhima I have loved you---

Riddhima: Armaan I have been very bad. And I don't deserve a good human being like you but will you forgive me, will you give me one chance to prove that I am capable of your love. Please armaannn---

Armaan: ssshhhhh.. riddhima….tumhare pyar ke kabil toh main nahin tha..i harassed you so much and yet u loved me---

Riddhima: No armaan I harassed you but u tolerated me for our love . you the song you told me to perform I was mad at you for telling me to perform on that but I did because I guess that is the only place that I trusted you that you are not doing this for anything evil. Armaan I should have trusted you long ago ……y didn't/…..

She breaks down crying in armaans arms. And armaan consoling her. They cried for sometime and then armaan drank riddi's tears and riddzi wiped his with her duppata.

Armaan: Riddhima aaj se ek nayi shuruwat karenge hum. We will tell each other everything about each other. We will make this relationship work.deal

Riddhima laughs and then says deal

And then she says armaan we will tell everyone about ourselves. And armaan asks her questioningly u sure. And she says yes I don't want to hide you from anyone now

Armaan says not even sasurjee

Riddhima says not even god

Armaan feels her pain and they both hug each other

And from behind rahul says iski zaroorat nahin hogi we know everything about you two now.

And armaan and riddhima look at each other and smile and them they look at all the others and smile.

i know i have made some mistakes but i was so inc=volved in writing the ar scenes that i forgot everything else but iwill account for all that in the next that i write.