OS- The Reality Check

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Friends.. 🤗


How are you. Just wanted this random story a very small one. This is the first writing here. Hope you like it.


After watching Shahs at KM, Barkha fumes in anger and decides to talk to Anupama.

Anupama, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai. Ji Babhi, boliye. Yaha nahi, hum kahi aur jaake baat karni hai. Par babhi, ghar pe itina saara kaam hai. Baa baapuji ka khaana dekhna bohot bohot kaam hai. Suri suri baad mein baat karenge.

Anupama.... // with that raised voice Anupama senses some seriousness// Hum 1hr ke baad saamne wale coffee shop mein mil rahi hai. // saying this Barkha left from there//


After reaching the coffee shop Anupama finds Barkha there and wishes her


Boliye babhi, aap ko kya baat karni hai aur yaha kyu buliya? Dekh mujhe uss circus mein freely baat nahi kar sakti. Isiliye tujhe yaha bulaya. Mujhe tumse ek sawaal poochni hai. Tum kabse Vanraj bann rahe ho? // with this question Anu is taken back//

Kyu aise dekh rahi ho. 26 years jo Vanraj je kiya abhi tum wahi Anuj ke saath kar rahi ho. Jaise Vanraj ne tujhe doormat banayi, tujhse bina pooche bina bataaye kuch bhi karte, tum bhi wahi kar rahi ho. Ek baat batao, poori Shah family ko Baa ki kahne pe lekar aayi, ek baar bhi kya yu ek baar bhi Anuj se poocha? Wo bechara mana nahi karega par usse poochna chahiye na. Par tumne nahi kiya, grantedly liya uss ki acchai ko.

Uss choti se bacchi ki galti kya thi? Usse chod kar hamesha Shah house bhaag thi rah ti ho. Maanti hu itini saal ka pyaar aur parivar hai. Jab teri sasuraal mein jaroorat pade tho kyu tum waha nahi khade hote? Ek baat batao, jab tumne Choti ko Kinjal ke saath akele codh kar aaya tab ek baar bhi poocha woh ghar paunchi ya nahi? Itini indifference kyu? Tumne usse janam nahi diya bass isiliye? Tujhe andaaja bhi hai kal raat kya hua, woh kitna darr gayi, bechari tumhari liye tadap rahi thi. Par tum waha nahi. Usko jo Orphanage mein nahi mili wahi yaha expect kar rahi thi, par mili nahi. Jab itini saari jimmedaari ko sabhal hai nahi sakte thi liya hi kyu? Kaam share bhi kar sakte hai? Tum koi super hero nahi sab kuch akele karna hai. Dekh Anupama, acchai aur bewakoofi mein faraakh hai. Jo tum kar rahe ho woh bewakoofi hai. Meina ye sab kuch Anuj ki babhi ke haq se nahi bol rahi hu ek aurat ki naate kah rahi kyu. Anuj ko dekh kar bura lagta hai. Usko saalo se jaanti hu. Meri selfishness aur sab ek taraff aur Anuj ke liye meri affection ek taraf. Dekh Anupama, sab ke liye ek breaking point hoti hai. Uske baare mein tujhse accha aur kaun jaanta. Tum na itina bhi maat keech aur Anuj ka patience ki itna faida math uthao woh bechara bhi toote. Aur mein hone bhi nahi doongi.


Ye sab sunne ke baad tum realize hogi ya nahi, I don't know. But if not and tum dono ki rishte mein daraar aayi tho uska poori wajah tum hi ho. Jab naav doob gayi na, tum tumhare so called parivar kuch nahi kar sakte. Get a grip and draw a line or else you will be left alone.


Saying this she left Anupama.


Tadaaaa.. I am done. Please ignore spell or grammatical mistakes.


Joothe aur chappal are most welcome. Joothe aur tamatar purane fashion hai. Christmas season hai. Will adjust with Cakes and chocolate🤣

Love,

Mickey.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I love this! But even after all the sensible things told to her Anupama would still not care 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haina.... I was so frustrated and thought lets enjoy atleast in the forum. 😆😆thinking this might happen..

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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Haina.... I was so frustrated and thought lets enjoy atleast in the forum. 😆😆thinking this might happen..

I wish this would happen in the show but it just requires too much logic and common sense which the characters in this show don’t really have🤪😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Can you do a continuation of this OS where Anupama or Anuj finally take a stand for Anu and kick Shah family members out? It would offer some sort of peace for me 😳🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sure, will continue and write one more part.. thanks for encouraging 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yaar common sense mushkil hai woh sab mahaan hai. Hum jaise common log ke paas common sense hoti. Woh tho alagi duniya se hai..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Joote and chappal...... Never..... Mujhe to apko pyar ki jhappi dene ka man kar ra.. Dil ki baat likh di apne🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it.

Kahi to koi anupama ko akal de raha hai. OS mein hi sahi par kahi to akal de hi raha hai koi.

I liked you chose barkha here to put some sense in anuapama's head. In this show every member of shah house have given second, third, fourth chances to redeem themselves and still none of them have changed. But barkha ankush have been made as villains unnecessarily. Comparison in shahs, BarAnk's crime is just petty and yet they are labelled as real villains. I want to see this positive side of Barkha and you gave it here.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Sure, will continue and write one more part.. thanks for encouraging 🤗



Of course 😳

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