Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

90

Views

8.4k

Users

19

Likes

153

Frequent Posters

Geeta06 thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Shinika

HAKIKAT : ViDev; Few shots :Part 6


Continuation from last part

Dev warden ki bathon ke baare me soch raha tha our yeh yaad karne ki koshish kiya ki kahi kuch galat hua baal ghar me , vo aaj pura din yaha raha tho usne socha main yaha Hu tho kuch galat hua tho mujhe patha chalega na.

Tabhi usse yaad aya bachon se khelne ke vaqt vo balghar ke baahar kuch log idhar udhar ghumna dekha jaisa vo balghar pe nazar rakh raha hai. Our vo peeche gate per Jake check Kia tho usko kuch chappal ka nishan dekha.

Yeh sab kya ho raha hai vo log andar ghusakar kuch karne ki koshish kee ya kuch bada karne ka koshish kar raha hai.kahin vo Vikram ne kuch naya saajish to plan Kar Raha hai kyonki aaj mein leave lekar yaha ruka Hu . Agar yaha kuch hogaya tho vo aasani se mujh par ilzam laga sakte hain. Kuch tho jaroor gadbad ho raha hai.

Dev ne kisi ko call kiya our kuch der baath karke bachon ko bye bolkar chala gaya .

Dev directly went to the hospital. Bimla ne dev ko dekha our bola ki thank you dev ji agar aap nahi ho to pata nahi ham iss mushkil ko kaise saamna Karpatha. Aap ne vidhi ko sambhala our saare kharcha bhi aap ne hi uthaya

Dev: iss vakt yeh sab baath.. our kharch ki baare me tho main ne kuch nahi kiya Bimla ji . Vidhi ke salary se har mahina kuch paise cut hojayegi bas. Aapki beti ka mehnat hai yeh …

Vidhi came and said sir aap yaha

Dev: ha Vidhi main bas Hariprasad ji ko dekhne aaya Hu

All went to Hp room dev ko dekhte huye hi hp ko sab bathe yaad aagaya jo mohalle valon ne discuss kia.

Suddenly hp’s BP got raised and he was shivering.

Dev yeh sab dekhkar doctor ko bulaya our bahar chala gaya.

Vidhi hp ke saath ruk gaya. Doctor aakar injection dia our hp so gaya.

Doctor said kuch baath tho hp ko bahut pareshan kar rahe hai . Agar yeh aise hi baar baar vo hi sochega tho main bhi kuch nahi kar sakta. Ek our din usse yahi rahane dijiye .mujhe usko observe karna hai . So we will think about the discharge tomorrow.

Dev consoled Vidhi and returned back to raichand house.

Dev sat in the car and socha ki kahi hp ki halat mujhe dekh ne ke vajah se nahi bigad gaya

Usne yaad kiya kaisa hp usko dekha vo USs raat vidhi ki nashe ke baad bas vahi nazar Kahi usse mere our Vidhi ke bare me…. No no no ….yeh sab usse kaise patha chalega ….no…

Pehle mujhe yeh pata karna hai ki heart attack aane se pehle kya hua hain. Kal mohalle jakar pata lagane ki koshish karunga.

Subah subah dev ko phone aaya tha . He lift the call and said

Kya Ruhi gayab hogayi balaghar se.

Immediately he rushed to baalghar.

Security Aakar kaha ki : Saab maine har jagah dekh lia Ruhi kahi pe bhi nahi mil rahi hain. Dev ko chod ke sab log Ruhi ko dundh raha hai.

Usi vakt achanak ek police jeep baalghar me aagay . Police came to dev and said

Police: Mr raichand we have to arrest ms Vidhi sharma in child trafficking case.

Dev : officer kya bol rahe hain aap

Aap ke paas kya proof hain

Police: mujhe vidhi Sharma naam ki ladki ki sign se yeh contract paper mila hai . Iss paper ke mutabik ms vidhi Sharma ko trafficking gang ke sath contract hai ko Ruhi ke badle usko paisa milegi.

Our hame complaint bhi mila ki Ruhi yaha se gaayab hai

Mr raichand bathyiye yeh proof kaafi hain….

Dev: vidhi ke khilaf kis ne complaint kia aapko

Police: vo sab confidential hai sir our pocso act pe detailes bathana jaroori nahi hai

Aap bathyiye ms vidhi Sharma kaha par hai

Vo na office main hai our na uska ghar me bathayi ye. Vo apka NGO ka volunteer hai na..

Dev: pocso act ? Why

Police: mr raichand ms Vidhi ne Ruhi ko gayab kiya our trafficking gang ke sath hath milaya is liye

Dev: par Ruhi tho gayab nahi huyi hai

And smirked..

Police: kya ( Color drained out from his face)… …(cause yeh police bhi Vikram se mila huva hain)

Commissioner: yes officer Ruhi yaha hai mere paas … kal raat se under my protection.

Police saluted commissioner and said sorry sir…

Comm: agali baar aisa kuch karne se pehle ache se enquiry karke aao.

Pol: sorry sir

Commissioner said thank you mr raichand aapki help se ham ek dangerous gang ko pakad liya.

Dev: thankyou commissioner for helping me out and he recalled what happened at night.

Kal raat baalghar:

Dev called the commissioner told about his suspicion that how like last time some goons are stalking balghar. then dev discussed about his plan and commissioner agreed to help him.

Dev wantedly left from baalghar taaki vo goons apna plan implement Kar sake. As per goons plan vo kidnapped Ruhi and they called Vikram and informed that they have the kid so you can implement your plan.

Vikram asked them to don’t call him till Vidhi get arrested.

Then the commissioner men came and arrested them and gave security to Ruhi.

So….this was Pre planned by smart Mr Dev Raichand…

Tabhi dev ne notice kiya ki vidhi bhi vaha hai our vo sab kuch sunliya .

Dev ko patha hai police ko dekh ke hi vidhi ko dar lagta hai.

Dev: commissioner Saab pls hold this as confidential. Ek choti bachi ki jindagi ke baare me sab aisa vaisa baath karega our jise sach me iss NGO is jaroorat hai vo dar ke yaha nahi aa payega .

Comm: Mr raichand yeh baat bas yehi pe khatam yeh news kahi pe bhi nahi aayega na paper na media…

Trust me and thank you mr raichand.


He send off the commissioner and sent Ruhi to the room and increased the security.

Then he came to vidhi and said chalo office chalte hain..

Vidhi: sir.. abhi… abhi…yaha kya hua …our mera naam… police …..ne kyun kaha.

Dev: vidhi relax kuch nahi hua hai chalo pehle office chal the hain our mai sab tumhe bataunga.


To be continued….


Precap: dev got to know the reason behind hp’s heart attack and take a firm decision.


If you like this track in my perspective comment karke bathyiye jaroor.


Shinika


Aapne to pura jail track hi badal diya... This is typical dev raichand... Smart.. Intelligent... Loving it....

sumaishu thumbnail
Deal or No Deal Thumbnail Fashion Feud Participant Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#52


Awesome writing. 👌 ❤ waiting for next part. Thank you for tagging me dear. 🤗

plmzaq thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Awesome

Love it

Cont soon

Nany thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Hey shinika first of all sorry for being late n thank you darling for tagging me ...

It's amazing story...

love ur write ups🤗

Loving this dev...he is amazing

Continue soon n don't forget to tag me🙈

Shinika thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#55

HAKIKAT:ViDev : Few shots: part 7

Continuation from last part

Dev and Vidhi went to office from baalghar. Vidhi was silent and looks dull and still in the effect of the incident.

Dev felt so angry on himself that he gave the chance to Amba to behave this much henious with vidhi and Because of him vidhi is facing all these problems and she has to deal with Amba ‘s pagalpan.

Both lost in their own thoughts. They reached the office and dev asked Vidhi to come to his cabin immediately that now she is not in the state to work.

Vidhi nodded little and both went inside the cabin.

He made her sit in the chair and gave water . He tried to console her that nothing big happened and no need to afraid about police. When she felt relaxed she asked him to say the truth.

Dev: vidhi ghabrane ke liye kuch bhi nahi hain . Bas ek inspection keliye aaya hai police.

Vidhi: sir pls… sach bathayiye.. police mera naam kyun liya our vaha Ruhi ki baare me vo log kya baath kar rahe the.

Dev: sighed and narrated the whole incident how he handled the matter silently.

Vidhi: sir. Yeh sab kuch kisne Kia our mere saath kyun karega aisa…

Dev: voh Amba our Vikram vo dono milakar Kia hai yeh. He said with anger yet maintained low voice.

Both are silent for few minutes

Vidhi: sir.. main chal thi hu kaam hai …

She about to leave when dev called and said vidhiii , mere vajah se tumhe yeh sab kuch sehna pad raha hain…

Vo Amba jan bujkar tumhe takleef de rahi hain our main kuch nahi kar pa raha hu ..

I am sorry vidhi ….

I am sorry…

Vidhi: nahi nahi sir .. aap kyon sorry .. aapki koyi galathi nahi hai sir… our tho our aaj aapne ithni badi museebat se bachaya mujhe . Agar aap nahi ho to patha nahi kya kya ho sakta tha mera saath. Per aapne bachaya na aaj mujhe. Mujhe aap par pura bharosa hai kuch galat nahi hone denge aap mere saath.

Dev: nahi vidhi tum situation ko nahi samajh rahi ho. Agar aaj main aham vakt par baath ko nahi sambhalta tho tum andaza bhi nahi laga sakthi thi ki kithna bada scandal ho chuka hota . Tumhe iss museebat se bahar nikalna bahut mushkil hota. Shayad main bhi kuch nahi karpatha . News paper , media sab jagah faila hua hota tumhare baare me . Socho agar aisa hota tho tumhare parents ka kya haal hota.

Vidhi become silent but replied aisa kuch nahi hua na .. jaane dijiye sir iss baath ko aage se main dhyan rakhungi. Dev is in so much pain ,Angry , frustrated and concerned (not in the state to control all emotions)

Dev: nahi vidhi tumhe Amba ke baare me kuch bhi nahi patha hai . Vo jaisa dikhta haina usse bhi dangerous hain.our upar se Sagayi ki fiasco ke baad vo Amba paagal ho chuki hain.

Vo kithna obssessed hain ki vo aage kya kya karne ka plan Kia hain ham soch bhi nahi sakte hain… iss sab ki vajah se agar tumhe kuch ho jatha tho … main apne aap ko kabhi nahi maf kar paunga….

Vidhi with tears about to hold his hand he moved back and said

Isiliye maine tumhe kaha ki koi ummeed mat rakhna . Main tumhe inn sab mushkilon me nahi daal sakta . Isiliye maine kaha tha aage ke baare me nahi sochna hai… par tum our ma kaha sunte ho mera baath….tumhe mujhse door rahna padega… door …. Bahut door…. Ha .. ha ..(he was in pain and keep on talking) kal hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua baal ghar me uska koi matla……

Vidhi interrupted him sirrrr …with anger and said aage bolne ki sochna bhi math kijiye kahi baad me khud ki nazron me girna jaaye…..

Vidhi left the room with anger and pain..

Dev couldn’t handle himself and banged his hand on the table .because of the force something fell down and shattered into n number of pieces just like his heart When he realised it was lens of objectitivity mirror object he recalled Vidhi saying

“aapki jindagi me bhi koi aaye

jo khud se aage aapko rakhe

jo khud se jyada aapka khayal kare

jo aapki jindagi khushiyon se bharde

Jab aisi koyi ladki aapki jindagi me aayegi na to pls vo lens of objectivity uthakar pekhdena kam se kam usse apni dil ki baat khulke kahna our usse aapse door math hone dena”……

He couldn’t handle the inner battle any more and closed his eyes with pain….


Outside cabin in the office washroom Vidhi is shivering with anger and pain but soon burst into pool of tears….


Oh rabba ve….

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan

ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila


kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka

na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka

dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein

saansein saansein tooti bandishein

kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai

kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar


ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

ho o o o ho o o o

na poocho dard bandon se

hansi kaisi khushi kaisi

musibat sar pe rehati hain

kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi

ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho

rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba


Song plays in background while showing their best moments.
To be continued……


Tried to keep the emotions very lite and delicate . Nahi dekha ja sakta dev ko dard me kuch aisa vaisa karna per story has to move on . So lik dia. Agar I didn’t meet your expectation sorry all. I will try to give next update nice.


Shinika.


part 8:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162305251

Edited by Shinika - 3 years ago
Revutty thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#56

Rula Diya yaar. Abhi abhi episode dekha nahi jaata mujhse kee jiss tarah se court mein Vidhi par ilzam lagi hein aur Dev aaye khud saare kasoor liye apne upar , uske baad aake seedhe yeh pad rahi hoon . Dev's pain, his concern towards Vidhi is expressed so well and the way Dev was telling her to maintain distance from him and she was feeling heavy from heart , her burning tears and the breaking of lense of objectivity it bought tears to my eyes. I am dumbstruck with words now. Till now this is the most emotional and realistic portrait of ViDev in this story Hakikat. Hakikat ke aage hum sab toh katputhli kee tarah ban jaate hain. Chahkar bhi ek dusre ke dard ko mita nahi sakte. This is what I felt in ViDev today. This was so heart touching and thanks a lot for tagging me, so that I could feel my ViDev here, Shinika.

Shinika thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Tag

My take on videv. This story has the separation phase of ViDev also. If you are free then try to read it.

Suvika. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Shinika

Tag

My take on videv. This story has the separation phase of ViDev also. If you are free then try to read it.


Off to read right away. Thank you for the tag, Shinika. 🤗

Shinika thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Glad you liked it revutty. I don’t know I did justise to dev character or not .but he is also a human and while being emotional one will do mistakes. Dev also will do many mistakes but to protects whom he love . He did mistake of Abhi and Priya marriage for Abhi sake . Chitra marriage also for her he accepted that rishta he didn’t bother to enquire about vikram.same like to protect Vidhi he will do many mistakes. This is the first mistake that we don’t have the future , aage badho and all . Much more to follow to protect her from the evil world. He is in so much pain that ki he is not even bother to curse their first precious moment to send her away for her own good. This is my small observation on dev character.

Likhne vakt bahut emotional hogayi Hu.
yaar writers I don’t know how you guys will write so many stories. It’s really tough to control the emotions.

Kudos to you all.

Revutty thumbnail
Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Yeh har writer ke sath hote hein. Kabhi kabhi samajh hee nahi aata kee kya likhun? Bas ho jaati hein kuch toh. Tum sab toh kaafi acche se portray karte ho ViDev ko, meri har baar likhne ke baad feeling aati hein kya likh Dee maine , padkar kya sochenge sab ke sab?

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".