Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1 - Page 7

Vidhi's thoughts and words are very poignant. Also, she comes across as both calm and confident... despite her obvious heartbreak. This is the Vidhi who has made her unconventional love her strength - at least that's what I felt. Wonder how long since she's been away from him!!

And why do I get the feeling that P2 in the precap is Aman??

Waiting for the next part. Do tag me please.

Yes now Vidhi and s confidant ,calm and most importantly she is strong. She took her life decision herself and what may come she will stand by that.

Already 7 parts are up if you have time read it and comment me about it.

And the precap is twisted. You will get to know in coming parts.

This is my first ever write up so eager to know the review from a professional writer😊

You can find my other OS and other NUKSH writers beautiful works in NUKSH writers paradise thread.

Originally posted by: Shinika

Yes now Vidhi and s confidant ,calm and most importantly she is strong. She took her life decision herself and what may come she will stand by that.

Already 7 parts are up if you have time read it and comment me about it.

And the precap is twisted. You will get to know in coming parts.

This is my first ever write up so eager to know the review from a professional writer😊

You can find my other OS and other NUKSH writers beautiful works in NUKSH writers paradise thread.

7 parts - in this same thread or separate threads? I stopped with the first part because I assumed you'd posted only the first one. Didn't find the links for the next one.

Will definitely go to the paradise :)

Same thread and this is the first time I am involving this much in forum so basically I don’t know how to add all links at same place. Trying to figure out how to do.

I can give you the pg nos 1 2 3 4 6 7 8

Hey shinika,

Thanks for the tag.

Finally got some time today and read all my of them at once.

Too good.

It's amazing how you weaved the scenes from serial into your story in a positive way.

It gave their relation an altogether different meaning.

HAKIKAT:ViDev;Few shots;Part 8

continuation from last part
Dev’s cabin:

Sangeetha nocked and came with the coffee and asked sir kya hua…. yeh sab kaise..

Dev sat silent for few seconds and asked vo .. Vidhi kaha hai usse kuch kaam hai.

Sang: sirr vidhi ne aapko coffee dene ke liye bola tha.

Dev: he just smiled and about to sip the coffee.

Sang: sir vidhi office me nahi hai sir … Abhi Abhi usko bahar jate huye dekha maine.

Dev: he choked on coffee( he got afraid that she left him really) and said sorry…per mujhe tho kisi ne bathaya nahi. Main Kanika se baath Kartha Hu . Aap ye saaf kijiye.

Dev called Kanika and asked about Vidhi.

Kan: ha dev Vidhi ne aaj half day ka leave request kia. Our Maine accept Kia. (He felt relaxed a bit) Vo bahut pareshaan thi hp ki attack ki vajah se .shayad kal pura din roya hoga na mujhe uski tabiyat bhi theek nahi laga.isiliye leave accept Kia .agar kuch kaam hai to kaho main vo kaam finish kar thi Hu.

Dev: ok thank you main baad me baath kar tha Hu.

Tab tak Sangeetha pura cabin saaf ka dia our bina mirror ke Lens of objectivity Object table par rakh ke chala gaya.

Dev kept the phone on table and saw that and vidhi’s words started to linger in his mind..

Uske baad ma ke saath baal ghar jo bhi bath Kia USs sab ke bare me ek our baar socha.

Dev talking to himself

Dev tune kya Kia . Bahut gusse me hai vo maine usse aaj tak gusse me kabhi nahi dekha. Gusse se jyada hurt hua vo bhi bahut… his inner self mocked him.

Yaha se gayi per iss vakt vo kaha jaa sakta hai baalghar no aaj ki kaand ki vajah se voh nahi.. hospital no … usse patha hai iss haal me use uski ma dekhogi tho usse doubt aayega. To kaha chali gayi hogi… ghar ha ..ghar chala gaya hoga ab vaha koi bhi nahi haina. Kanika ne kaha ki tabiyat bhi teek nahi hain .. kya karu.. kahi vo ro roke our bura haal me ho tho…

Dev tum bhi na kya sochke bola vo sab ab bhugtho …nahi uske pass ja sakoge or na door raha sakoge.

Are yaar kaise manaoon usse… kaise javu uske paas pehle hi vo ek ummed main hai ki main is rishte ko ek chance doo par kaise doo .. kaise … pehle hi uski papa ka yeh haal hai ab yeh sab kuch pata chala tho kaise handle karega vo…

Mujhe patha hai koi bhi parents aisi rishte ko nahi maanega. Ma our Vidhi kaha rahe hai ki shayad ho payega .par sach yeh hai ki iss rishte ka koi bhavishya nahi hai..par aisa kitne din chalega his inner self mocked. Tumhe kya lagta hai tum tho aise hi rahogi par vidhi .. vo kab tak aise akele rahegi , tumhe bhoolkar vo kisi our ko apna paayegi. Agar vo kisi ke saath shadi karke chale gaye tho tumhara .. kya …

Kya tum jee payega bina usse dekhe, ?

Ab tum har roj usse dekhte ho , vo din bhar tumhara aas pas hi rahte hai. Par vo achanak yeh sab chodkar yaha se door chali gayi tho kya tumhe bura nahi lagega, won’t you miss her. Won’t you die without her. Ek baar bas ek baar selfish ho jao dev sirf tumhare liye nahi tum donon keliye. Sach sach bataao tumne ek baar bhi vidhi ko nahi chaha ..ek baar bhi tum khudko uske saath iss rishte ki nahi imagine Kia…

Ek baar bhi tum nahi aas Kia vidhi tumhari kismat me rahe…

Bolo ek baar bhi tumhari man me ek choti ummed bhi nahi hai tum donon ek rishte me ho sakthe hai . Ek baar bhi tumne ummed nahi Kia…. Bas ek baar koshish karo dev bas ek baar…

He just reminded vidhi’s words , breaking off the lens ,Satya wathi’s words,his own confrontation and decided to meet vidhi .

He went to her house and saw her in a very painful position . She sat infront of milapini ma mandir with her head resting on her knees and her hands clutched her dupatta tightly with closed fists. He can’t see her like that and he got very angry on himself for making her go through all this.

He just called her slowly vidhi

She just lifted her head and by seeing side she wiped the tears and looked at him.

Sirr aap yaha..

Tum theek ho …our tumhare paapa ka discharge

Ha sir BAs aaj hi discharge hone vala hai chacha chachi gaye unhe ghar laane keliye.

Bas raat tak aayenge vo.

Dev: Vidhiii I am…

Sir.. aap .. aap na jayiye sir ab jayiye paapa ke aane ke baad main aap ko inform kar dungi. Pakka..

Dev: Vidhiii mujhe..

Pls sirr… mujhe bahut kaam hain.. mandir ka safai karni hai our pooja ka tayyari bhi karni hai . Papa ko aarthi dena hai na bas isiliye..

She just blabbered without seeing into his face.

He sighed and said teek hai tum apna kaam karlo our main yahi tumhari paapa ki intezar karta hu..

Dev sat on the bed near temple. She started to clean with dropping things in nervous ness. Dev said ok tum aaram se karo main bas ghar ghoom ke aatha hu .. he smiled and left from there. She didn’t smiled back but It brought a relief to her.

When he is roaming in home he saw some Color papers and thought to write a sorry note to her cause she is not ready to listen his apology.

He remembered

How she made him realised the child in him and encouraged him to erase his darkness and let the child over power him some times.

how she made him feel peace after his confession in his difficult time.

How she made him laugh wholehertedly with her innocence.

He felt relieved after placing the letters in the room.

He is very happy and smiled to himself and said tum kya ho vidhi!!! Tum kisi se bhi kuch bhi karva sakti ho..

When he came back to mandir Vidhi finished all her work.

Dev: Vidhi tumhari parents kab aa rahe hain . Ek baar phone karke poocho .

Vidhi: ok sir my phone…

Dev: tumhari kamre me jakar dundho shayad vahi hoga phone, hand bag .. tumhara kamra haina..

Vidhi got confused with his behaviour and went to her room.

She find her phone on her bed and she noticed a Color paper under it.

She got surprised and opened it.

Mere zindagi ki andhere ko Roshini se mitane vali chamakta ankon ko

I am sorry

Ithna rulane keliye

She was shocked ,happy,and felt emotional.

When she just saw all the room she found one more letter near her handbag

Mere dil ko sukoon dene vali bholi muskurahat ko

i am sorry

Tumhare peeche hazar dard ko chupane keliye

She found one more near side table.

Mere udaseen chehre pe bhi khul ke hasi lane vali iss masoom dil ko I am sorry

Badle me tumhe udaas karne keliye.

She read all the letters again and again..

She felt like crying,happy,and dev ki confession ke baad ek our baar usse laga ki vo iss duniya ki sab se lucky girl hai. She came to mandir and saw he is praying to milapini ma . She also went there and joined him.

Dev: he just noticed she is coming there and he went there and folded hands infront of ma but observing her. Finally he felt relieved after seeing her smiling naughtily with twinkling eyes. He thought to go out for some time to escape from her teasing eyes.

When she opened her eyes he is not beside her but she found one more letter near milapini ma .

She opened and read.

Agar tum ne mere mafi accept Kia tho kal subah beach pe milenge . Time our address msg Kar dunga.Main intazar Kartha rahunga tumhara…

Dev went outside and thought to enquire about the reason behind hp’s attack. He was about to meet kalumal he got a call ,he attended and left from there without informing Vidhi hurriedly.

To be continued…

SHINIKA

Part 9:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162355593

Dev & his unique way of saying sorry.. ❤️❤️

Nice update.. continue soon ❤️❤️

🥰🥰 Awwwww the way he said sorry to her, it's too good. Shinika zyada likh nahi paa rahi hun, kyunki episode dekhne ke baad abhi tak aansu ruk nahi rahi hein. Yeh chapter bhi emotional thi thodi see, thanks

Thank you yaaar . Why you are taking this and all to heart. feel proud that you faced this everything bravely and finally you got what you fighted for. And now you are happy in your life. Control your emotions and cherish the time with your baby. Your baby is the sweet fruit you got from your struggle. Leave everything and think about your baby and hubby and your beautiful life.

Sorry if I take more liberty to say this but can’t able to see you sad in this phase of your life . Your baby is your first priority. Take care. Be happy. A wonderful future ahead you.

I know, but believe me ViDev is just like showing me and my hubby again through the hardships which we faced. Chahkar bhi aansu rukte nahi, I am very happy that God gifted me love, lovely husband and now I am going to be a proud mom. But kuch lamhe yaad dilate hain khaas kar jiss tarah se episode mein joh ho rahe the and Chaachi ke behaviour dekhke bahut hurt huyi. Yahan aayi toh aapki update bhi thodi emotional thi . Toh bas ro padi. Baaki I am fine 😊.