Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Take care and love yourself more❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Very nice Shinika

Interest badhta hi ja raha hai

Pls continue this story 👍🏼

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow super story. Dev is so desperate here. Shayad khud ko saamne nahi rakh sakta Vidhi ke liye..I can totally understand this situation. I loved the buddy bonding of Dev and Aman..... Dev spending his loneliness in her memories near the lake was touching. Jitni parts likhni hein likho. Novel bhi likho koyi problem nahi. Padne ke liye mein ready hoon . I totally loved Dev in this part. Good work yaar . Keep it up Shinika

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Very emotional part yaar... Bahut realistic sa hai sab kuch aapki story mein...i am loving it....continue karo jyada se jyada parts likhna yaar....

Yahi dev dekhna hai hume serial mein bhi jab use pta chalega ki vikram ne vidhi ko hurt kiya...

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hakikat: ViDev: Few shots:Part 4

(Continuation from last part)

Dev’s house:

Next day dev is sitting in his room and he decided to take break from office for today. How much he try baar baar vidhi ki rota huva chehra uski saamne aa rahi hai . dil me bechaini sa ho raha hai. Par vo baar baar sabke saamne hospital nahi ja saktha vaha vidhi ki ma, chachi our vo silver sab log hogi toh. Par kya karu iss bechaini ko kaise khatam karu..tabhi usne socha ha balaghar jaata Hu . Vaha bacchon ke saath thoda der khel tha tho man Behl jaayega mera. He got ready and took some chocolates and gifts to share to the kids.

Bimla and Vidhi are in hospital and hp ko hosh aagaya ab vo pehle se behtar hain. Doctor ne hp ko sham ko ghar lejaneke kaha hai.

Bimla said Vidhi tum ghar jakar freshup hokar papa keliye nashta lekar aajana. Jaldi jaa uske baad tumhe office bhi jaana hai.

Vidhi ghar gayi our mila pani mako dhanyvad kaha uski papa ko bachane keliye kyonki Papa ko khone ki soch se hi usko dar lagta hain.iske baad vo Sabke liye nashta banake thayyar hokar hospital gaya . Vaha vo teeno ek saath milakar sukoon se naastha Kia . Kal Bimla our Vidhi bahut dar gayi per ab vo bahut khush the.

Dev Baal ghar gaya bachchon ko sweets our gifts baata . Our sab bache milakar dev ke saath khelne ka socha hai. Dev bachon ke saath luka chuppi khel rahe hain.

Vidhi Bimla our hp ko bye bolkar hospital se nikli our usne socha ki aaj my bahut khush hu tho thode der bachon ke pass jata Hu. Office ke jane me thoda time hain.

Kuch bache ghar ke maidan me our kuch aangan me kuch baki ki kamaron me chup gaye dev ko koi acha jagah nahi mila tho ma ke kamre ko dekha our socha iss kamre me cupboard ke piche chupjatha tho koyi bhi mujhe nahi pakad payega wow dev… wow ..

Vidhi bachon keliye mithai lekar balghar gaya . Par tab vaha koi bhi nahi hain dev ki maa ka kamra khulla hai par bahut andhera tha vaha.vidhi ne mithai ko baahar rakhkar dhire dhire kamare ki andar chaligayi. Achanak bachon ki aavaj sunkar ghabrake ankhe band ki our vo phisal kar gir gayi. Jab uski aankh khol gayi tho wall our cupboard ke beach me shocked dev sirr ko dekha. Vo thoda neeche dekha tho vidhi ki haath dev ki chest pe,dev ka hath vidhi ki kandon pe usko girne se bachane keliye. Both were shocked by their close proximity . Donon ka chehra bilkul Amana saamna hai vo bhi so close. Vidhi achanak dev pe girne se dev ka weight saara cupboard per Gaya. If they move little cupboard will fell down and dev will fall on downside and Vidhi on top of dev. Vidhi got lost in Dev’s eyes because this is the first time that they are so close to each other. because of proximity she shivered and dev ka balance chut gayi and he fell on the bed and seedha vidhi fell on dev and both shut their eyes with jerk as their lips got brushed ,bodies pressed in to each other and fingers tangled. Both got lost in the moment and didn’t dare to move or open the eyes. When Vidhi realised she opened her eyes but she didn’t moved and waiting for dev to open his eyes. When he opened she quickly gave a peck on his cheek and tried to ran away . Smitten by Vidhi’s boldness dev grabbed her hand and pulled her into his lap.he then circled his right hand on her waist and his other hand wiped her hairs to side and kissed on her crook of the neck. Not able to handle the proximity Vidhi hold his left hand for support and encircled her right with his right hand pressing in to her self more.both got their eyes closed and lost in the moment. Minutes are passing but still they are like in a trance .His lips are on her neck , hand pressing her in to himself , hands tangled , she on his lap ,eyes closed ,breaths in sync just like a perfect fitting puzzle.after some moments they came out of the trance with a jerk when they heard pakad gaya, pakad gaya. Vidhi quickly left him and ran from there after giving him a shy smile. Immediately he rubbed his back of neck ,blushed openly and smiled slightly. Then the next second realisation hit him and he shouted dev tum aise kaise kar Sakthe ho? Vo bhi vidhi ke saath…. Kya galat hai isme ?Do you regret? His inner self questioned ? He literally shouted nahi.. bilkul bhi nahi… agar sach kahu tho yeh mera jindagi ka ek khubsurath pal hai jisko mai sapnon me bhi sochne ki himmat nahi ki.. vahi na tho isme galat kya hai. Nahi… tum nahi samjhogi. Dev started to question himself kaise kiya tumne aisa ? Kaise tum apne aap pe kabu Kho diya? Aaj tak tum kaise khudko sambhala our apni jajbaton ko kabu me rakha toh fir ab kya huva?.

Jab bhi tum mere saamne chair be bhaitke mujhse baath Karthe vakt kabhi tumhari aankhon ki samandar me dubne se, kabhi tumhari hoton ki lalipan me khud ko mit jane se , kabhi tumhari nanhi muskurahat me kho jane ki dar se meri badi ankho ko gol gol ghumakar idhar, udhar dekhte meri bathon ko jaleba ki tarah ghumake tumhe confuse karke mushkil se khud ko rok leta tha.

Jab hum kareeb khade hote tho tumhe chune ka, jab bhi tum meri baath ko seriously lekar confuse hote toh tab tumhari gaal kheenchke awe…. Kahne ka,jab bhi tumhari masumiyt ki jhalak ko our tumhari behad khushi se khila huva chehre ko dekhke ek tight si jhappi dene ki kwahish ko chupane keliye main apne haath,sar ya main pura yaha vaha hilakar khudko our iss nayi jaj bathon ko (jo sirf tumhare liye jaagtha hai) mushkil se rok raha tha .tho aaj aisa kya badal gaya ki main khudko nahi rok paya?

Kuch der pehle jo kuch bhi huva hain vo sab kuch fir sey yaad karne ki koshish karo dev yaad karo…

Yaad Karthe Karthe dev blush Karthe huye USs khubsurath pal me kho gaya..

Dev dev his inner self shouted…

Dev got out of trance and seriously analysed the incident and then he got what made him to cross his self created boundaries…….

To be continued…,

If you sensed the reason behind dev crossing his self made boundaries comment karke bathana jaroor…

SHINIKA


part 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162272054


Edited by Shinika - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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It is really good.

keep it up. emotional but very close to reality.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Tag 1

Part 4 updated

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wowww the kiss was beautiful❤. But ye dev zyada hi sochta hai usko k khi meine boundaries cross krdi to vidhi ki life na khrab ho jaye or jbki vidhi voto khushi se pagal ho jayegi agr aisa kuch hua to🤣

Beautifully written especially hattke👏unique story h ye

Keep it up.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinika

ha yaar story ho raha hai delhi me. mera vali delhi me tho samandar kya aap ko jo chahe voh miltha hain🤣

jokes apart i missed logic and i didnt even realised.i will be careful next time.

thankyou❤️

Ek baar ek artist mein sunset paint kiya. Sun had the colors of rainbow mere jaise logic pasand logon mein question kiya “ what kind of sunset is this? It’s unreal.” The painter replied “ yes it’s surreal the kind of sunset that we want to have.”

So if art and science conformed to reality there will be no new inventions nor any artistic adventure. Tumhari Dilli mere sapno ki Dilli hai❤️

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