Suspicious Partners- MG || (Part 37|Page 88) - Page 17

Lovely part

Glad maan was there for Geet

Cont soon

Maan can’t really go anywhere leaving Geet like this! Granted he isn’t responsible for anything, I know he would still feel bad leaving her in the middle of nowhere!

Part 9

G- emm…koi ghar dhund lungi….itni jaldi kuch nahi mila toh koi hotel ya PG le lungi

She looks at him and realizes that he knows how unrealistic here plan sounds

G- Par acha hi hua. Main apni family ke saath rehke kabhi apne sapne nahi poore kar sakti thi

She realizes she is thinking out loud

G- Waise, I am sorry. Meri wajah se aapki badnaami toh nahi hui naa?

M- Kaisi badnaami, mujhe iss sheher mein koi nahi jaanta aur naa hi main kisi ko jaanta hoon

G- Oh. I mean…aapki wife yaa girlfriend…who kuch…unko bura lagega ki…

M- Main shaadi-shuda nahi hoon. Meri girlfriend bhi nahi hai

G-Oh

She wants to ask kyun but she doesn’t want to pry on someone’s life

G- Toh aap Dubai kab jaa rahe hain?

M- Kal raat ki flight hai

G-Oh

She is staring at the space thinking about what to do next

Maan is looking at her realizing her helplessness, but he also doesn’t know what to do

She comes out of her thoughts realizing Maan is there

She stands up abruptly picking her bag

G- Main chalti hoon. Aapka bohot bohot shukriya

Maan also gets up

M- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Aage ka kya plan hai?

He doesn’t want to pry but he wants to know what Geet is upto

G- PG ya koi hostel dhundna hai naa

M- Ek din mein mil jaayega?

Her heart sinks

G-Hopefully

M- emm…Good. Mian bhi chalta hoon…issi bahane sheher bhi ghum lunga..woh maine kabhi yeh sheher ghuma hi nahi. Pehli baar wapas aa raha hoon.Ab shayad kabhi wapas bhi naa aayun

She notices the sadness in his eyes

G- Chaliye. Aap mujhe PG dekhne mein help kar dijiye, main aapko sheher ghumaa deti hoon

A subtle smile appears on Maan’s lips

Geet also beams

Even if her life is in doldrums right now, somehow, she feels a sense of familiarity & protection when she is with Maan. She doesn’t want to let go of that feeling. She knows beyond that feeling is her sterile realization uncertainity

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1-2 hostel and PG mein jaate hain

Ek ki hygiene ki haalat kharab hai

Dusre mein itni ladkiyan bhari padi hai. Aur who sab Maan ko aise ghur rahi thi jaise bhookha sher apne shikaar ko ghutra hai

Teesre mein toh wahan ki owner ne Geet ko Maan ke saath dekhke kuch kuch sochke dikhaane se hi mana kar diya

Par inn sab ke beech mein dono ne street food khaya har cart mein jaa jaake

They had become quite comfortable

It seemed as if they have known each other for years

Shaam ko thaak ke Seaside ke paas jaake baithte hain, thandi thandi hawa chal rahi hai

Dono chana aur garam garam chai pii rahe hain gazing at vast Ocean

It had been a good day

The sun was setting, and it looked beautiful

Both of them are immersed in whole experience, sitting beside each other on the rocky beach in silence

G- Dubai mein bhi sunset aisa hi lagta hai?

She asks gazing at the beautiful scenery without a thought why she asked this

M- emmm…(He sighs)….dikhta hoga…notice nahi kiya zyada. Office mein busy rehta hoon

G- Dubai mein kya karte ho?

M- Finance mein job karta hoon

She nods

M- Ab kya karogi. Koi hostel toh mila nahi

G- Chali jaungi

M- Kahan?

G- Hyderabad

M- Hyderabad kyun?

G- Yahan rehke kya karna hai? Wahan Private Detective ka business kholungi. Whan durr durr ke bhi koi rishtedaar nahi hai hamare; taanon se toh bach jaaungi.

He nods

M- Koi zarurat ho toh batana mujhe

She looks at him wondering; does that mean they will be in contact even when he goes back to Dubai

She looks down and pushes a strand of her hair behind her ear

He smiles

G- Waise bataya nahi tumne, itne jaasooson mein se mujhe kaise aur kyun choose kiya

M- well…baaki sab detectives were men, you were the only female. Meri do behne hain aur ek bhai jo bachcha hai…I wanted someone jo unki life and sensibilities ko hurt naa kare aur the best thing was that it turned out that you were so capable ki meri umeed se pehle sab kaam poora kar diya tumne

He says gazing at her

She chuckles

G- Aur saath mein aapko family drama mein phasaa bhi diya

He dismisses the notion

M- Aisa nahi hai.

He looks around and then at her

M- This is turning out be best day of my life

He says dreamily

She looks up at him with her huge doe like astonished eyes

Loved it dear😇

Awesome and emotional part 🤗🤗

I don't think that maan is going to leave Geet after the entire drama but still challenges begin here in search of new house

I loved the time they spent together & how Maan helped her in his way

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🤗

wow amazing both had the best days of their lives

seems like both gonna be in contact

but wish this evening could never end

cant wait to read more n more

Aww. Both enjoying each other’s company

Will he actually be in touch? or will he ask her to come with him? Hmm

Let’s see where this goes

Nice they spent quiet day with each other. Want to also know Maan's side of story. Is he all alone, or is he staying with foster family... eager to see how they complete each other.❤️

Hi hope you and your family are well

Part 9

Amazing update…. excellently written

sad that Maan is leaving India

can understand why he does not intend to return

at least he will help her find a a place as a PG and she will show him around the city

glad that she feels protected and familiarity with Maan by her side

well Geet was unable to find a place

liked that Maan and Geet were comfortable with each other

great that they spent the day together

she now knows a bit about him

so she has decided to go to Hyderabad and open a detective business

pleased that Maan said she if she needs anything she can ask him

her question was justified

he choosing her was reasonable

loved when he said that the day turned out to be the best day of his life

she was indeed amazed hearing this

update soon

Part 9

Fabulous and Warm Update

It seems for some reason Maan and Geet

will continue to talk

either she will go back with him or he will stay back

both enjoyed their time together

Nice update

Great day they spent together, can't wait to see what happens next will geet go Dubai with maan or maan stay here with her

Update soon