*~Love in Calii~* PART 28!pg30!PARTY& intro of AR

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Aaliyah

@indigal07

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Posted: 17 years ago

Love in Calii

Hey everyone! My name is Aaliyah. I know how much many of you love this fanfic, I really love it too! So i talked to Sabrina, who's my cousin btw, and she told me i can continue it as she won't be able to. I don't know if i can write as good as her😳 but i love making stories so i'll give this my best shot. Feel free to criticize, i'm always up for a bit of constructive criticism, and plz do comment!

Here's the link to Love in Calii that Sabrina started: (it contains the character sketch and all the parts of the story she wrote😊)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/548865/loveincalii-madzz-close-please

The characters, btw, are the same:

Kavya & Anjali Laksh & Kt

Angad & Kripa Prem & Mukti

Sujal & Kashish

This is my first fanfic btw, so wish me luck! I will update soon!

~Aaliyah~

Part Update Part 23......page 2 Part 24.......page 4 Part 25.......page 8 Part 26........page 12 Part 27..........page 22 Part 28.............page 30

Edited by indigal07 - 16 years ago

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zinny.xo

@zinny.xo

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Posted: 17 years ago

Aww can't wait dear. Continue soon! 🤗 :)

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Ria

@BabyGirl0828

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Posted: 17 years ago

LOve your fanfic for a sec thought it finished thank god it didnt..

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Aaliyah

@indigal07

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks Zinu!!! 🤗
Thanks Anaskhaa! no the ff isn't finished, i'll finish but don't worry, its got a long way to go! glad u love it, so do i! 😃

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esha

@**esha**

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Posted: 17 years ago

cont soon plz
w8in patiently lol
good luck
i am sure i will be good

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mandy

@mandy07

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Posted: 17 years ago

omg i luved dis ff it was 1 of my favs good 2 no dat sum1z willin 2 continue it 😳 can't wait 4 da next part will be waitin 4 it 😛

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Sabrina

@sabrinaa.

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Posted: 17 years ago

I'm glad you're continuing, and people still want to read it! Good luck with it, wish you all the best!
Yours now! :D

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Aaliyah

@indigal07

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks everyone! I'll try to post up the part soon. hopefully it will be up on the weekened, or earlier if i get a chance...
Thanks Sabrinaa, coming from you that means alot 🤗

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Aaliyah

@indigal07

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

Recap: (from part 22b where sabrina left off) Sujal bought Kashish an extremely large burrito that she couldn't finish 😆. Kavya bought Anjali a teddy bear and chocolates to make up for being a jerk by driving too fast. Plus, there a was nice hug between K-A, tho K was getting a bit far... 😆

And Now........
Part 23

At Night
There's a paper due the next day in the class that both the guys and the girls share. Angad's room:

Kavya: "Angad!" **says loudly** "Angad!"

Angad is sleeping peacefully, his unfinished paper under his resting head. Prem smiles at Kavya's attempt to wake his lazy brother and motions for him to be quiet. All the guys are sitting around a little brown round table in Angad's room, since his is the most spacious what with his knack for music, the guy needs a large room to put his instruments.

Since Prem is sitting closest to Angad, he leans closer to him and next to Angad's ear he screams: "ANGAAAAAAAAAAAAADD!!!!" And shoves him hard, a sinister grin playing on his lips.

A: (Knowing his brother was just playing with him) "Wth man! What did you do that for? Do you have any idea who I was dreaming about?" He exclaimed angrily.
P: "Who?" (still grinning)
A: "Uh uh I I meant what. What I was dreaming about. Do you know what I was dreaming about?"
L: "Knowing who you were dreaming about doesn't even wanna make me ask what you were dreaming about!" (Laughing hysterically) All the brothers soon join in, leaving Angad to turn red and glare at them furiously.
K: "I tried waking you up man….but you seemed so peaceful…so happy….it didn't look like you wanted to come back to reality!"
S: "Of course not! And why would he? With a dream like that…" (breaking into new fits of laughter)
A: "Just shut up ok? It's nothing like that! Mind your own business!"
L: "But you're our brother, of course you're our business" (grinning)
A: "Whatever! Can we just get this stupid thing over with?"
K: "Angad, you've only written 3 sentences! And it's 9:30 pm!!! Did you even do the research?"
A: "No!" (giving off a livid attitude)
L: "Dude cool it, I didn't do research either! Just this one sheet of info I got from Saniya (sry LKT fans I kno u don't like her but I couldn't think of anyone else) and that too I had to bribe her!"
P: "With what?" (chuckling)
L: "stupid dinner…." (crossing his arms looking frustrated)
P: "Why bhaiyya u love going out with girls, what happened now? All of a sudden….?"
L: "Man mind your own business!"
P: "Ok ok just chill bro, chill"
S: "Seriously yaar lets get to work! I really don't know how to do this! Ugh…I shouldnt've waited till the end…."
A: "hmmmm….reminds me…do you think the girls waited till the end?"
K: "Idk….Anjali didn't mention anything…"
A: "Lets check!"

All the boys scrambled up, straightening their clothes, their hair, quick mirror check – it's all good! They give each other a nod and leave for the girls' rooms.

Meanwhile in Kripa's room:

All the girls are sitting around a small round table, identical to the one in Angad's room. Mukti is writing furiously while Kt is reading from a textbook. Kashish is leaning over her paper, thinking, hand on her forehead. Anjali is playing with her necklace also thinking, looking at her half-finished paper and Kripa is daydreaming – again!

A: (smiling suddenly, looking at everyone) "OMG I have the GREATEST IDEA!"
M: "Wait a sec. Let me finish this sentence!"
Kt and Kashish look up while Kripa is still staring at the night sky absentmindedly.
A: (noticing Kripa) (clears her throat) "ahem ahem"….doesn't work…."ahem ahem"….still not working) "Kripa?" (shaking her slightly) "Kripa?!!!" (shouting)
K: "huh? Wh what? What is it? What did you do that for?"
A: "Madam, its 9:30, you have only one paragraph written and you're asking me wut? Now stop thinking of your Romeo and get to work! Well actually, listen to me first!"
K: (blushing, trying to defend herself) "Romeo? What Romeo?"
Kt: "ummmm hmmmm. It's okay, hume mat bolo, hum to jan the hi hai…"
K: "Kya ja-"
M: "Offo guys, stop bickering na! Okay Anjali, what is it you want 2 say?"
K: "hmph!" (crossing her arms and looking the other way)
A: "Well…. (glancing at K, then everyone else who was staring intently at her) I was thinking…. Don't you guys think that the boys have had enough of their fun?" (Kripa turns to look at her curiously)
M: (sighing) "Not now Anjali… I don't want to hear about them right now…."
Ks: "I do! Go on Go on!"
A: "Well since they made us get up early today, we should make them get up early tomorrow, obviously they had no problem getting up" ( says this sarcastically)
Kt: "How're we going to that?"
A: "Simple! Change the setting on their alarm clocks to 4 am. I'm sure they don't check the time their alarm rings. I mean, why would u if you're the one who set it?"
K: "What if they do though?"
A: "Hmmmm, we'll turn the alarm clocks around to face the other way, that way they can't see the time!"
Ks: (starts laughing) "I love it!"
Kt: "Omg we should seriously do that!"
M: (grinning) "I'm in"
K: (Thinking bak to the incident with Angad in the morning and smiling) "I like it…."
All the girls high-five each other and plan to set the guys' alarm clocks soon.

Precap: The guys come into the girls room to ask the girls for help. There's a little "closeness" ahem ahem between A-K, and the girls set the alarm clocks.

Yay i finally posted!! Hope you guys like it. I think this part may have been a little boring. But I think the next part should be more interesting..since the guys and girls interact... I'll post it when i have a chance. Till then plz do comment! 😃

Edited by indigal07 - 17 years ago

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Roshni

@lilindiangurl13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#10

it wasnt boring at all it was so sweet how kripa and angad where thinking about eachother.
anyways i love it hope the next one is longer.
cont...soon cant wait for the next part.