Lost Without You {AsYa FF} *on hold* - Page 28

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Wandering_mind

Hi there!


So sorry I couldn't unreserve my previous post cuz I had been busy with work this whole week. Just casually ended up opening the forums today and you got a new update! Yay!


Both these chapters have been written soo beautifully. They are such a dreamy mess! ( heart eyes with tears if that was an emoji! ) I loved the progression in their relation and the naturally strengthening bond! I loved how well you wrote Zoya's vulnerability in the last part and how Asad became her rock in that tough moment. And Zoya returned the favour in the end and in this part when he was dealing with the horrid memories of his past.


It was good that the sexual tension, which is almost always floating everytime they aren't close to each other, decided to make itself very evident to the both of them this time making them frustrated out of their minds ! Haha Zoya's plight was kinda funny and Asad had to ofcourse to play with her when her self control was way too out of her pocket!


You really had to end on that note? Whyy :( Albeit small, loved the part! I'm guessing the confession is coming up sooon! Well I hope so! An emotional conversation about just the two of them would be a such a treat to read!


Loved this so far! It's a request to keep updating as soon as you can, we'd probably do with smaller updates as long as they are more frequent!


Brilliant writing as always!

Yess the confession is underway ;)

Also thank you so much for this comment, you have no idea how much motivation this gave me to keep writing ❤️✨

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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh my, that was amazing. This is such a good AU. Keep up the good work. Cant wait for your next update

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Posted: 2 years ago

Damn! your writing just keeps getting better and better ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh my God! This was so great! I love the direction it is going...Love blossoming again


Love how you express the sitory in words..


Can't wait or more

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Posted: 2 years ago

Mind blowing update! I’m so so happy with how Asya are now closer than ever! I hope they stay this way and can fight all the horrid ogres together!

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is so damn good. I mean I've read it all in one go and now this has become one of my most favourite story. It's so well written. I must say you're one hell of a great writer dude. Please update soonish

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi! Sorry for not updating for so long, I was really busy with work and personal stuff :(

The update will most likely be posted on Sunday! :)

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamxr

Hi! Sorry for not updating for so long, I was really busy with work and personal stuff :(

The update will most likely be posted on Sunday! :)

oh that's completely fine.
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Posted: 2 years ago

Okay guys, um a quick but sad update...I lost the chapter😭 I was writing in Word and I gave my nephew my laptop to entertain him for a while and he deleted it 😭😭 Although I will try my best to update by the next two days I'm so sorry :(((((

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Posted: 2 years ago

Take your time, waiting for it

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