Originally posted by: Wandering_mind
Hi there!
So sorry I couldn't unreserve my previous post cuz I had been busy with work this whole week. Just casually ended up opening the forums today and you got a new update! Yay!
Both these chapters have been written soo beautifully. They are such a dreamy mess! ( heart eyes with tears if that was an emoji! ) I loved the progression in their relation and the naturally strengthening bond! I loved how well you wrote Zoya's vulnerability in the last part and how Asad became her rock in that tough moment. And Zoya returned the favour in the end and in this part when he was dealing with the horrid memories of his past.
It was good that the sexual tension, which is almost always floating everytime they aren't close to each other, decided to make itself very evident to the both of them this time making them frustrated out of their minds ! Haha Zoya's plight was kinda funny and Asad had to ofcourse to play with her when her self control was way too out of her pocket!
You really had to end on that note? Whyy :( Albeit small, loved the part! I'm guessing the confession is coming up sooon! Well I hope so! An emotional conversation about just the two of them would be a such a treat to read!
Loved this so far! It's a request to keep updating as soon as you can, we'd probably do with smaller updates as long as they are more frequent!
Brilliant writing as always!
Yess the confession is underway ;)
Also thank you so much for this comment, you have no idea how much motivation this gave me to keep writing ❤️✨
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