REVENGE- Thread II (Part-B10 Page 55) : Update!!! - Page 38

Het. Thanks for your concern yaar. You made me feel so special. I was busy with my work n studies plus my mom was visiting me & i am house hunting so all this stuff taking up time. But will try and update aa soon as i can

Lots of love

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Het. Thanks for your concern yaar. You made me feel so special. I was busy with my work n studies plus my mom was visiting me & i am house hunting so all this stuff taking up time. But will try and update aa soon as i can

Lots of love

Hi, no need to say thanks! 

no worries... do understand, will wait for an update

take care 

Part B

Chapter 8

It would be like whenever Geet and Maan act close at home like snuggle or make out they would be interrupted 8 out if 10times.. not always by sis.. but they would be

Ghar par it felt like they can't get privacy

Since Geet started suspecting sis and started observing sis and noticed that most of these interruptions are directly by sis or instigated by sis; like maid knocking, things falling, phone ringing, TV blaring, business calls, Nanu saying it's not right before marriage

Pehle Geet to laga ki she is trying to break us up toh isiliye lekin she noticed sis ka expression and it seemed wrong once again

Whenever sis knows Geet and Maan had spent night together next day sis would look sick or fall sick or throw up the breakfast

Sis (Charu) thinks if she can keep others away toh wo akeli Maan ke paas bachi

Sis ka anger and vindictiveness against Geet increases as much she sees him being closer to him physically... like holding hands...hugging etc.

Geet also notices Grandfather ka behaviour changing towards her

Initially Grandpa thought ki ab shaadi hone wali hai thoda bahut theek hai but they shouldn't cross final line or have kids outside marriage. And initially he is pro Geet. But due to sis meddling he is not so pro about her but not against either cos he can see we how much she means to Maan.. and he knows she is not a bad person...So he is lukewarm. Not supporting but not opposing. But still gets involuntarily pulled into sis ka schemes to keep Maan and Geet separate. H would just make disapproving noises and glances if Maan and Geet do PDA in front of him.

Geet ko bhi sharam aati hai toh she stops Maan

He thinks what is wrong with hugging or sitting close this way... isme kya problem hai?

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Maan ko hamesha laga ki sis is helping him with business and handling things well at home too

G- Maan. Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

Geet enters the room and shuts the door

Maan looks up from his laptop

Geet walks and sits beside him holding his hand warmly

She takes a deep breath

M- kya hua? Bolo

G-woh…

She is hesitating

G- Maan…I think….your sister does not like us being together

M- Huh?

G- She said to me that you have not asked me for marriage since so many years…it just means that you don’t want to marry me

M-What? You know I….

G- I know. I know what we didn’t get married earlier and it doesn’t matter to me when we actually get married. Bjut way she put this in front of me…was…

M- Why could you think that? She is just concerned about you. Don’t think about all this rubbish stuff

He pulls her in his arms

Geet realizes Maan ko kuch kehne ka koi fayda nahi. He is so used to it uske liye red flag bhi green dikh rahe hain behen ke pyaar mein

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Geet decides to investigate on the Sis’s behavior herself

She realizes indeed Sis is trying to sabotage their relationship

Geet wonders why

Shuru mein investigate karne pe laga ki maybe the sis wants to retain the power and money

But Geet ke rehne se the power and money for the sis won’t get hampered, so then why

Then Geet starts to observe her behavior with Maan

She realizes all those years after she had become disable after the accident the is felt her to be unloved romantically, undesirable, Men would not take interest in her

She knew Akhil moved on and didn’t really care about her

Only man who cared about her, loved her and even was ready to destroy everything for her was Maan

She started seeing Maan in new light

Sis ne khud ko bhi ye nahi realize kiya that how she was behaving is how any jelous girlfriend would behave instead of a sister

She saw Geet as a threat who has arrived to snatch even the love she had in her life

Sis always thought her to be desirable because of her looks, money, and status. But her disability changed everything

People used to see her differently. She wouldn’t have it.

Sis thought, Geet was meddling too much in her life. She was wanting everything that Sis created for herself

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Geet had sneaked into the Sis’s room

She was going through her cupboard & computer

There were pictures of Maan & some collages with sis and her cupboard had some Maan’s clothes This was weird, but Maan would brush it off

But there was a switch hidden in her closet. Geet tried switching it on & off & nothing happened

What is it?

Geet thought

She accidently switches of the lights of the room

She is stupefied looking what divulges around her

Every corner of the walls in the room is painted in invisible ink which is only visible in Black light

These paintings depict the sister’s mind

The paintings depict the sister’s erotic fantasies she has for Maan & herself

Geet’s heart almost stops seeing around her. She is feeling sick. Everything looks so life like, Geet just can’t

Tabhi, the door barges open

Sister enters and she witnesses Geet there

Sis is also shocked for a moment as she realizes her secret is out

G- Charu…Charu…what..is this?

Geet is struggling to find her voice

Sis- Don’t you dare utter anything to anyone! Or else…

Geet frowns, she did not expect this reaction from the sis

Sis- You don’t know how powerful I am. I can destroy you, Geet. Like I destroyed your Akhil. I always get what I want

G- what do you mean?

Sis- Tumhe kya laga main who bholi bachchi hoon jisse Akhil thug ke chalaga gaya? Tum sab ko maine Shatranj ke pyado ki tarah chalaya hai. Uss raat, Akhil ne mujse break up kiya. Mujse! Main ye kaise hone deti. Jo cheez mujhe chahiye who kisi aur ko mil jaaye! Nah. Maine break fail kar diya uski car ka

G- Par tum bhi toh use car mein…

Sis- Usse pyaar karti thi main! Uska saath jeena chati thi aur marna bhi. Who mere saath jeena nahi chahta tha, kam se kam mar toh sakta tha

G- Phir accident ke baad tumne sabse ye kyun kaha ki Akhil ki galti se sab hua?

Sis- Kyunki Akhil ko toh sazaa milni chahiye hi thin aa. Waise nahi mili toh…

G-Kya??? Tumhare iss jhooth ki wajah se tumhare bhai Maan ki zindagi….saalon tak badle kia aag mein usne khud ko tabah kar liya. Aur…aur uski fiancée bhi toh ussi car mein thin aa…who toh tumhari friend thi….pregnant thi who…

Sis- Who Akhil ko support kar rahi thi on this break up. So aisi useless friend ka kya hi karna. Khair now you get it Geet, tumhare saath kya kya ho sakta hai? Maan ko kuch bataane ke baare mein sochna bhi matt

Loved it dear

Awesome and emotional part👏✊👍

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Chapter 8 Part B

Shocking Chapter 

Geet notices that whenever she and Maan

are together Charu is always disturbing them 

or making others do it 

while now even Grandpa , does not approve of Maan and Geet's closeness

the most disturbing factor is Charu having photos on the wall of Maan

which clearly shows her possessiveness and madness for Maan

surely Maan will not believe Geet if she goes and say anything 

hope Geet can find a way to settle everything 

and still be with Maan

Chaaru is so cheap, hate her she is responsible for everything poor maan geet 

Can't wait to see what geet do now 

Update soon 

Great part 

Omg charu is so dangerous 

Maan needs to know about this soon or will lose Geet

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

My god charu is dam dangerous great update waiting for next

My god the extent to which charu has gone! She is obsessed with her own brother this is so disturbing 🤢 what is Geet going to do to expose this? I hope Maan believes her 

hi thanks for the pm and update

sincerely appreciated

Chapter 8B

Astonishing update... pleasantly written

as expected Charu always interrupts Maaneet when they get close

oh now nanu also objects

Geet's thoughts are reasonable

at least she noticed how Charu behaves when she (Geet) and Maan physically close

well Nanu behavior is also changing towards Geet

so Geet stops Maan and he is confused 

great that Geet told Maan this

of cos he is perplexed

good that Geet spoke to Maan further 

alas Maan thinks Charu is just concerned

liked that Geet decided to investigate further

pleased that she observes Charu 

she realises that Charu sees her as a threat

glad that she went to Charu's room

Gosh she is indeed shocked with what she sees

Charu is disgusting

how can she think of Maan in that manner?

oh no Charu caught Geet

nice that Geet confronted her

Charu is clearly dangerous and threatens Geet

Charu caused the accident 

Geet's reaction was justified

Maan is oblivious to all this

how will Geet handle everything?

update soon