Habs: Feroze Khan*Ushna Shah (ARY drama) DT#3 "Chahat ki Nazron" - Page 69

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Oh my this is the best news ever!!! 🥰 Thank you Twerps ❤️

Also are we going to read another story by Sarcy? I’ve read one of her stories and was blown away! ☺️

Hola, cappa! It's been forever. I remember your comments on the Jaya-Jaidev-Sinhaal story. 😉 Thanks for the kind words, these two girls hype me like no other. 😆 I've just written a short drabble and will post it tomorrow.

Originally posted by: Sarcy

Hola, cappa! It's been forever. I remember your comments on the Jaya-Jaidev-Sinhaal story. 😉 Thanks for the kind words, these two girls hype me like no other. 😆 I've just written a short drabble and will post it tomorrow.

Sarce.. You do know how to build up suspense.. Looking forward to tomorrow then..

Jaya-Jaidev-Sinhaal story ❤️

That was also a treat!

Twerps, this was fan-tas-tic!! 🤩 I loved the detailing in the characters – how Basit wasn't immediately sweet seeing Ayesha unwell but rather channeling the hurt and anger from the previous incident, then later witnessing her predicament and reflecting on it and changing tactics. The soups and sandwiches, juices and more, such a thoughtful guy Mr. Basit Salman is. 😁 And Ayesha, I absolutely loved the angsty turmoil you put her in despite her current state of pain and then having her see Basit for what he truly was. But the girl still thinks of herself as a charity case to him and that broke my heart. The man needs to be a tad vocal in his gestures, I say, but this is a superb beginning of the journey to knowing her better. I'm sure there'll be more from you soon! Loved it!

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

Arre why would I fight over fictional characters? not my style😆... I be on forum just to hv fun nd spend time discussing show with lovely ppl here...

I am more than glad to read pro ayesha views... whether I agree or not that's a later deal, but there's nothing about making it a battle ground and win it anyhow ...lol

So chill 🤗🏳

Hi Fierce Lioness,

I would like to start out with showering you with love for responding so cool and lovely.
Sometimes, written words can be misunderstood in intention and that is most likely not what I want.

So, cool that we are all cool! Here, some love for you:

❤️ ❤️❤️ 🤗 🤗 🤗

Just to avoid long long texts, I have removed the rest in your quote.

You mentioned you like discussing the series with lovely people. Well.. You are in good luck!
Here I am 😆

I agree with you. End goal is Ayet! How their journey will be remains to be seen of course, but I hope it is beautiful and one we will always remember.

The way I see it now, is that we are shown a love story, close to reality, where we write and direct our own stories. Just like we take a wrong turn, messing up more and more at times but still, have no bad intentions. Sometimes you get in a situation in which an event or an action keeps getting worse and worse.

From Ayesha's point of view, she does not want to destroy her marriage. She wants to restore her reputation in his eyes.. Get back the respect that she deserves. It is all that she has.. It is all that she came with.. Without it, there cannot be a marriage.. They would be merely housemates..

She has told lies and held back the truth. Yes, I also believe this was not the most wise thing to do. But I can understand her.. Like Basit, she is no Saint.. In her mind, she is convinced that whatever happens, Basit should not know the truth.. If he finds out, with his background experiences, it will influence his view on her and her family (of only women). Although she lies, she does give big importance to values, self respect. She lies, because she wants to stay in Basit's life and she cares for his opinion about her.

Maybe I have to watch the last 2 episodes again or it could be the language at times, that I am missing something, but the conversation between Fahad and his mom, Fahad and Ayesha, Ayesha and Bano

I found these to be quite natural conversations. There was a sudden escalation between friends and husband-wife. Whatever happened was never the intention. On top of that, aside from the white lies, they are both innocent. They have not done anything bad but are being accused of ultimate betrayal in such relationships.

As viewers, we see all the wrong turns the characters make, and we have clear preferences. In general we tend to side with the underdog. In this case Basit, The Broken One. But his sudden explosion was not OK.. these are not just 2 people who you feel have turned on you and betrayed you.. Not only Ayesha had the chance to see improvements and efforts of Basit. I think this is also the other way around. And that he does not know Ayesha, fine.. But Fahad...? Years of friendship and brotherhood even. A guy who has always been there for him. To accuse him within seconds, without proof but only with assumptions and some truths not adding up. That it would make him suspicious, OK.. But go directly to slapping and accusing.. No..

But all fine.. It is now part of their journey and development..

When I try to put myself in Ayesha's place, I would not have lied, but after such character assassination, I would give Basit the cold shoulder. If I step in the shoes of Fahad, and I would be slapped and thrown out and accused like that, I would say worse things than he said to his mom. Love of course does not vanish just like that.. But I would be pissed at Basit! very offensive!

Basit and Ayesha had a deeper connection after they had the talk regarding Sadia Aunty and how to deal with the unresolved feelings. If this thing with Zoya had not happened, they would have been closer by now. or perhaps not.. perhaps Basit just does not want to share his Fahad with his Ayesha and the other way around..

In that same conversation with Bano, it is also Ayesha who says Basit has given me everything. She is not unhappy being with him in house. But she is also not happy. She craves a simple happy life. To be loved and desired by him. Her husband. She takes her wedding values/promise seriously. Just like Basit does.

That Basit is suffering in the way that he does, is not what she sees. She does not know yet, that he too is bound to her. Used to her presence. And the other way around.. If only Basit could see how helpless and empty Ayesha is feeling.. When he came to drop the phone off, he came by not only to confront her but also to check and see if she is celebrating or if she is just as miserable without him as he is without her. When he did look at her, he really looked at her. She looked very confused..

Perhaps I am repeating myself, but I do not believe that Ayesha has not sensed the differences in him.. she has.. for example: breakfast time, conversations, emotional breakdown, he does listen to her advises, flowers.. There was progress for both.. But, he jumped to conclusions quite rapidly.. and exploded..

Your question/remark:

If a girl who doesn't live with him can see the changes but not the girl for whom he is changing himself...

What if we change it to:

If a guy who has lived for some months with a girl, who have left her whole life behind, gave up her ambition to work, trying to create a place in his life and in his house, is having a good connection with his mom and his best friend and is trying to find out more about him via these two people...Should that not give him a clear message, especially about her character?

What thought(s) come to mind for you then?

Just like you.. I felt the post was getting toooo long.. So here is a part two..

You mentioned trust.. That by the way Ayesha is behaving with telling lies, meeting up with Fahad, how can she expects Basit's trust?

True.. But I think his perception of women and their behaviour is already a setup for failure for both of them. That needs to change. And even if he distrusts women.. why does he not have good faith his best friend, whom he has known for years and years?

Basit has acted like a bull who can only see the red cloth..

Both are bearing the consequences of the choices and actions they have made.. It is Basit who escalated in the way that he did.. There were 2 people trying to reason with him still.. And perhaps the truth would have came out sooner and from Ayesha's mouth.. But now, unless he apologizes she wont tell him perhaps..

Ayesha has heard Basit speak ill of (and to) his mother several times,
Sadia has explained her about Basit, Fahad has mentioned he is been trough a lot. Her decision to not include Basit and to not speak the truth was wrong. I do think this is an action-reaction case. Ayesha felt she could not tell the truth to Basit based on what she has seen and heard.

Fahad got caught between this.. he tried to do good and see now.. Moral of the story? Dont think for someone else, just speak your truth and deal with it.. This will be lesson learned kind of a toast on Bano and Fahad wedding 😆

Basit will have to share Fahad from now on.. He is his best friend, but now also a friend to Ayesha. Men and Women can be just good friends too.

Them meeting aside, but for innocent reasons... I mean that is just good for the story.. more drama, more angst..

i find it very interesting to see, what we see when watching these series.. and why we side with specific characters the way we do..

There is something I like about car talks.. today I saw that scene again when Basit gives Ayesha a ride home. Their conversation was so good!
Many things they could have done differently. All of them.. It is what it is.. Now how will they move forward from here..?

Their hospital scene was good.. I liked Ayesha for praying for him in his room. He will never know.. She prayed for him because she cares.. she stayed because she cares.. and not because a promise made to never leave him alone.

What if Fahad did come home to meet Ayesha? He did that in Basit's villa also.. Staff/Karim was at home.. What if he would comeby, and nobody is home.. she is all alone.. He would have doubted them the same perhaps.. that is also a possibility.

The fact that Fahad and Ayesha want to speak with eachother is fine for me. They are in the same boat and only they know their truth.. which make them bond more.. they want Basit back in their life but he has hurt them too. He has made the pure brother/sister in law relationship look ugly. It is natural to complain right? they will not praise him 😆

These 3 should sit down and talk, apologize and just kiss and make up 😆
I am so excited for the double episode.. Let us see what they will give us..

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

Oh it's absolute love to read the views that are different from my understanding of characters... even when I do not agree , it leaves space to understand other characters better...

I agree on your comment about Zoya, male friends and open mind.. Though.. actions again.. Zoya did show to Ayesha how she handles attention from men and that she accepts gifts.. There lies danger in that.. and for Zoya these male friend(s) are potential boyfriend(s). Fahad is her brother (in law).. I see your point yes.

Ayesha made a big scene for Zoya. I really did not like the way she handled that. She saw, assumed, did not ask anything, did not sit down to talk but just did what she felt was right.. A little bit like what Basit is doing now.. Zoya did invite her sister to come sit.. Missed chance for Ayesha. She is or was also stuck to her values.

I noticed that in series, serials, they show sometimes a moral in stories for the audience.
So, what would be the lesson(s) we could learn together with Basit and Ayesha?

Hmm... I wonder if there are people who would put full blame on Basit. Or on one person for that matter. I think that part the writers and directors did well, to show that we all have a part in the issue.. We are all to blame in that sense. Take your accountability, face your demons and grow up (together)..

Ohh I liked their whole conversation. It was cute, funny and we could feel their emotions..

Mostly, we have been able to see more angles, from different characters. That is quite special.

Thanks for your responses... It was just lovely...

Your mom's health will be in our prayers too my dear.. Hope she recovers really soon. Happy to hear she is home again and family is coming over to visit her. It will cheer her up too I hope.

Originally posted by: Sarcy

Twerps, this was fan-tas-tic!! 🤩 I loved the detailing in the characters – how Basit wasn't immediately sweet seeing Ayesha unwell but rather channeling the hurt and anger from the previous incident, then later witnessing her predicament and reflecting on it and changing tactics. The soups and sandwiches, juices and more, such a thoughtful guy Mr. Basit Salman is. 😁 And Ayesha, I absolutely loved the angsty turmoil you put her in despite her current state of pain and then having her see Basit for what he truly was. But the girl still thinks of herself as a charity case to him and that broke my heart. The man needs to be a tad vocal in his gestures, I say, but this is a superb beginning of the journey to knowing her better. I'm sure there'll be more from you soon! Loved it!

Hi Sarce,
I so agree with your words..! Especially @bold
This gives more scope to write right? (don't say try it.. 😆)

Now, we are waiting for your drabble ❤️

Twerps this was so beautiful!!🥰 I have read it a million times already. Coincidentally I’m PMSing and was in a weepy mood throughout the day, so reading this was such a comfort 🤗 I want a Basit too (albeit a more communicative one) ❤️

Coming to the story, I could picture almost every line especially Basit yelling for Karim, that is so quintessentially him😂 You just captured the essence of the characters so well. Basit wanting Ayesha to have breakfast with him and being ubale to articulate, hence commanding her about maintaining the decorum of the house.I sometimes think that he says these things to get a rise out of Ayesha and when she doesn’t respond adequately, he gets disappointed and somewhat angry. Basit being annoyed that Ayesha preferred sleeping in to keeping him company was so cute.

I loved how you delicately balanced Basit’s sternness with his soft, caring nature. He just couldn’t help himself once he realised that Ayesha was in pain. His blushing was adorable. I loved that once sentence when he says that your husband is here asking you about what you need but you instead prefer calling Zubaida. This was written very well. Basit wants to be the confidante in Ayesha’s life and his hurt and anger at the fact that she chose to trust Fahad was palpable.

Coming to Ayesha, you so aptly described her feelings of awkwardness, insecurity and vulnerability. Poor girl still feels that she’s a mere burden in his life. I wish Basit was slightly more communicative. He’s such a softie, couldn’t even leave for office while wifey was in pain. Also him telling her that his business won’t collapse if he’s late for office for a day deserves a special mention.

I could almost picture Basit ordering helpers around to make her food and ensure she’s in comfort. The scene with Ayesha feeling overwhelmed with Basit’s concern was my most favourite, especially with Basit engulfing her while she cried. 🥰

The last scene with Basit calling out Ayesha’s name softly and then touching her hair was so soothing. Basit realising that genuine care and concern shown are far more valuable to Ayesha than his money and all the luxuries he could bestow on her was lovely. I just wished for the story to never end❤️ Needless to say that I am greedy and would love to read part 2 or any other story on Ayet that you have up your sleeve.

Thank you for giving us this masterpiece!! Lots of love to you Twerps 🤗

Originally posted by: Sarcy

Hola, cappa! It's been forever. I remember your comments on the Jaya-Jaidev-Sinhaal story. 😉 Thanks for the kind words, these two girls hype me like no other. 😆 I've just written a short drabble and will post it tomorrow.

Hey, Sarce! It’s been a while. I especially remember your story on Jaya-Jaidev-Sinhaal. The show did us dirty with JJ but your story seemed to be perfectly paced as regards their relationship. Any chance that we get an update anytime soon? ☺️

I so look forward to your Drabble on Ayet ❤️ You have such a flair for writing. Update soon!

Oh my God twerps , you are amazing 🤗

You finally treated us with Ayet shot and an amazing one ❤️

Loved it and honestly craving to read more now. You know what I mean 😳

This is ayet we want and what we are getting

You wrote the whole scene so well that I could actually imagine basit ayesha while reading it ...

Love to you for giving us this treat❤️

Do write more 🤗