ff : must read for all rm fans...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok guys thought i'll start wid my hn-rm ff....dnt knw how it'll turn out 2 b...

LOVE..ACTUALLY..

The hatke story of two cute couples




huda n naina were on a drill to rescue injured mates n helping doctors were the adorable rahoool n muskaan..

h : ye drill meri mummyji achha kar sakti....vo kay hai na vo kisika khoon behta hua nahi dekh sakti....
n : par sorry...huda abhi tumhari mummyji ko nahi tumhein drill puri karni hai...so plz concentarte...
h : thik phullan devi(2 himself)ek baar haske baat bhi nahi kar sakti..
n : tune kuchh kaha ?
h : maine ? main kabhi kuchh keh sakta hoon kaam ke waqt..tu hi baat kiye ja rahi hai..chal kaam kar...

ther, rahool n muskaan
......
r :tujhe kitni baar samjhaoon ki mere se panga mat liya kar...
m : oye phitte munh..mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tere saath baat karne ka..ye to us gabaar dr.eeerti ke wajah se maon tere saath yahaan phas gayi...varna mera bas chale to...
r : kya karegi...haan bol na...
just then huda n naina reach ther...
h: oye, jia jawaan jai doctor....aap doctor ho ya kisi saas-bahu serial ke charcters...
r : xcuse me, aap kaun hai....
h : kya lag raha hoon ? tashan ka saif ali khan ?
muskaan gives her weird laugh..
m : oye kankhahure...ye cadets hai jinki mada karni hai...
h : oye kudiye, tu jaat hai kay ? 😉
m : nahi, punjabi....
h : oye haath mila...phir to hamari khoob banegi....
n : achha aapka intorduction khtam ho gaya ho to hum kaam par lage, plz?
h : kyun nahi....zaroor....oye lakdi.....
r : oye lakdi kisko bola re ?
h : tujhe..itna patla hai jiase kitne mahino se khaaya piya nahi ho..meri mummyji ke paas chal....unke parathe khakar thoda tandarust hoga...
m : par yaar..tune apna naam to batay nahi..
h : oji, main huda..amardeep huda...aur ye phullan devi yani naina singh...aur tu ?
m : main hoon muskaan..nahi dr.muskaan chaddha aur ye phitte munh hai...dr. rahoooollllll....
n : bahut achha....AB hum kaam kar sake hai plz...
r : haan plz....
rahul n muskaan start soakin the blood of the patient n naina n huda help dem...

m : waise is bande ko chot kaise lagi..
n : pahad se gir gaya...
r : kaafi gehri chot hai..aur khoon bhi kaafi beh raha hai.
h : oye to tu kya ankhen phaad ke dekh raha hai..kuchh kar..varna hume marks kam milenge...
m : oye hudde, shant ho ja yara...sab thik ho jayega...waise fauji banna bahut maze ka kaam hai na...
h : mazaa ? pure din jab left right left karegi tab pata chalega...peeth pe bhaari basta lekar...kadi dhoop mein...
m: jo bhi ho....atleast us dr. keerti se to bachungi...
n : just a minute..kahin aap dono sanjeevani hospital se to nahi hai ?
r: ji, aapko kiase pata ?
n : woh aap dono ka naam suna tha armaan aur riddhima se..
m : accha to aap hai woh huda aur naina jinhone unki madad ki thi...
h : aur key ? huda to ek hi ha na...
r : haan aisa ek aur piece aa jaye to duniya barbad ho jayegi..
h : oye lakdi, tu apna kaam kyun nahi karta.....varna tod doonga...
muskaan agian laughs...
m : lagta teri aur meri khoob banegi...tu aur armaan ek jaise hai..
h : oye mujhe us angrez se compare mat kar..huda to huda hai....
n : huda plz....apni tareef band kar aur inki madda akr..hume base par pahunchna hai....
naina n rahul were very close to each other..n huda ws feelin uncomfy...

h...uh...mujhe ghav dikhayi nahi de raha main is tarf aa jata hoon..
n he tries 2 push rahul away 4rm naina..
r: arrey, ye aap kya kar rahe hai..
h: mareez ko tujh jaise bimaari se duur rakh raha hoon..
r: ab aap aa gaye hai to uski tabeeyat aur kharab ho jayegi..
huda pushes rahul..n he is pushed against muskaan...muskaan begins 2 get nervous..n rahul luks at her..
huda n naina r tryin 2 soak the blood with cotton wen their hands meet n naina begins to tremble n huda holds her hand....

baaki baad mein...

antara

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-ialwayswill- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice 👏 👏
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh yes antara read ur first part yest and wow its great👏do cont soon!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey antara nice ff
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rahul ladki 😆 muski is very nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thnx all..wil continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please add ur FF to the DMG Media centre thread so gagan can update the main page..

Please add title and link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=793563

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great going ......great and excellent job!!! 👏

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