SCENE REWRITE

My version of Akshara confrontation scene from today's episode:

Whole family heading out, going towards the car......,

Akshara: "ABHIMANYU!!!"

Abhi stops and AbhiRA both walk angrily towards each other....,

Akshara pleadingly: "What did you do? Why did you do that? What you did was wrong, I left the proof about the truth for you, and you went ahead and did this? If you did not understand it, why not ask me, talk to me?"

Abhi: "What proof? What are you talking about? What proof?? There was nothing of the sort."

Akshara looks confusingly at Abhi, then suddenly has a moment of clarity. She shakes her head and smiles slightly, slowly turning and looking at his family. She turns back and looks at Abhi..

Akshara explains: "I came earlier to explain everything, but you weren't home. You gave me 24 hours and I honored this time because what YOU think matters MOST to me. So I left the proof about Kairav Bhaiya's innocence for you in (Mahima starts honking the car horn) your room on your white shirt. (Akshara speaking louder) I wanted you to know first, as this was the issue (Honking still continues) dividing our families. (Fed up Akshara walks over to Mahima, and grabs her hand and takes it off the car horn.) I haven't finished speaking with Abhimanyu."

Mahima shrieks: "Stop lying Akshara!! You didn't do anything of the sort, you only try to manipulate Abhimanyu and his emotions to your advantage to save your criminal brother ONLY!!"

Akshara boldly: "I DO NOT!!!, I came and left the proof for you Abhimanyu."

Abhi: "What---"

Mahima shrieks: "Stop Lying Akshara!! Abhimanyu we have to leave, don't listen to her, she's lying, only using your love to her family's advantage. She has NO PROOF!!!"

(Akshara looking at Abhi)

Akshara calmly: "Really, I'm lying, OK then check the CCTV cameras around your house, you'll see that I was here a few hours ago. (Turning towards Mahima smugly..) "And if by chance the footage has been deleted or missing, then ask the neighbors on this street, because everyone around here has CCTV cameras around their homes in this neighborhood."

(Akshara takes a deep breath, straightens her shoulders, and states clearly) "No matter, I gathered that proof about the truth once and I'll do it again. That's the funny thing about the truth, no matter how hard you try to hide it, it always finds a way and comes out! You did what you wanted Abhimanyu, now I will do whatever I need to free my family."

Akshara starts to walk away, stops and then turns around.....

Akshara fiercely: "And by the way Dr. Abhimanyu Birla ask yourself what happened to that proof, (slowly looking at his family) and how its no longer conveniently in your room??!!!"

Akshara walks away bravely...

End scene

***Pls forgive any grammatical errors...

Originally posted by: Summer400

My version of Akshara confrontation scene from today's episode:

Whole family heading out, going towards the car......,

Akshara: "ABHIMANYU!!!"

Abhi stops and AbhiRA both walk angrily towards each other....,

Akshara pleadingly: "What did you do? Why did you do that? What you did was wrong, I left the proof about the truth for you, and you went ahead and did this? If you did not understand it, why not ask me, talk to me?"

Abhi: "What proof? What are you talking about? What proof?? There was nothing of the sort."

Akshara looks confusingly at Abhi, then suddenly has a moment of clarity. She shakes her head and smiles slightly, slowly turning and looking at his family. She turns back and looks at Abhi..

Akshara explains: "I came earlier to explain everything, but you weren't home. You gave me 24 hours and I honored this time because what YOU think matters MOST to me. So I left the proof about Kairav Bhaiya's innocence for you in (Mahima starts honking the car horn) your room on your white shirt. (Akshara speaking louder) I wanted you to know first, as this was the issue (Honking still continues) dividing our families. (Fed up Akshara walks over to Mahima, and grabs her hand and takes it off the car horn.) I haven't finished speaking with Abhimanyu."

Mahima shrieks: "Stop lying Akshara!! You didn't do anything of the sort, you only try to manipulate Abhimanyu and his emotions to your advantage to save your criminal brother ONLY!!"

Akshara boldly: "I DO NOT!!!, I came and left the proof for you Abhimanyu."

Abhi: "What---"

Mahima shrieks: "Stop Lying Akshara!! Abhimanyu we have to leave, don't listen to her, she's lying, only using your love to her family's advantage. She has NO PROOF!!!"

(Akshara looking at Abhi)

Akshara calmly: "Really, I'm lying, OK then check the CCTV cameras around your house, you'll see that I was here a few hours ago. (Turning towards Mahima smugly..) "And if by chance the footage has been deleted or missing, then ask the neighbors on this street, because everyone around here has CCTV cameras around their homes in this neighborhood."

(Akshara takes a deep breath, straightens her shoulders, and states clearly) "No matter, I gathered that proof about the truth once and I'll do it again. That's the funny thing about the truth, no matter how hard you try to hide it, it always finds a way and comes out! You did what you wanted Abhimanyu, now I will do whatever I need to free my family."

Akshara starts to walk away, stops and then turns around.....

Akshara fiercely: "And by the way Dr. Abhimanyu Birla ask yourself what happened to that proof, (slowly looking at his family) and how its no longer conveniently in your room??!!!"

Akshara walks away bravely...

End scene

***Pls forgive any grammatical errors...

The only way it should have been written.. But alas! Writers ke paas dimaag nahi hai.

It should have been this way

Far better than what was shown . I swear fans can be bette writers than current writers who can’t relate they are writing without any proper sense.