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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sacrifice: Worth it or not!


Today she was watching netflix away from her daily routine while enjoying popcorn together , break is important..

Interfering with her 'me-time' her phone rings, strange..

Santosh name was flashing on phone screen,Santosh's call at 1 o'clock in the night was indicating an emergency...

She picked up the phone, without any delay...

Hello Ms , Jai hind..

Jai Hind santosh, bolo itni raat ko phone kyu kiya...

Madam sir.. karishma madam ka accident ho gaya hai ... said Santu who was almost at the verge of crying.

Accident, a mishap! How can she deal with it ...for her , her Karishma singh is her life ...

Kya...a shocked voice heard by Santu ...followed by ..Abhi kaha pe hai aaplog...

City Hospital...

Theek hai hum aate hai , tum Pushpa ji ka dhyaan rakhna....

The one who itself get broken after the news is worrying for others, this is Ms who always keep others before her .

She left for Hospital informing her mother that she is going for case , how can she tell truth to her Ammi , Ammi has two daughters.....

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She reached at hospital almost in ten minutes...

For us it might look like 10 minutes, but for Haseena it is her longest journey that she has taken, it's very difficult for her to keep bad thought away ...Bad thoughts are like Capricorns who make their webs in the house, without permission, sometime difficult to get rid off...

Karishma singh naam ki patient kon se room me hai...She asked to receptionist, impatiently

Second floor, OT , Receptionist informed her , after seeing the impatient nature of Other ..

The scene in front of her is enough to tell that, something big has happened, her karishma is indeed in bad condition,which she is hoping to be false.....

Even after hearing the news of accident, even after finding that Ks is in OT section, even after seeing the condition of Others who are crying on their beloved condition, she wants everything to be false...

"Dil ko manane ka ghalib khyaal accha hai "

She somehow managed herself and sit beside Pj who is sobing, keeping her head under her palm , Santosh is calming her by stroking her back, Santosh knows very well that where to show massumiat and where to show matureness...

Kya hua hai , Hm asked in hope of getting not something big mishap , hope

Madam sir unke sar pe bhut bara cut aya hai...

Kya...par ye sab hua kaise ...Hm asked whilst she is in bad condition but how can she forget her investigation skill...

Maddam sir Tonight at around 11:30 am, a girl's call came on the landline of Thane , we picked it up and got to know that some goons are chasing her,Me and Karishma madam were on night duty, as soon as she gave her address, Karishma madam left to save her, I insisted on accompanying her but she refused..... Cheetah said

After sometime when Karishma Madam didn't returned, we decided to reach there...Billu continued..

Then Cheetah called me and told everything, after that while tracing the phone of Karishma madam, we reached there and found that Karishma was lying unconscious with deep cut on her head... Santosh bursted out....

Aaplogo ne hume phone kyu nahi kiya ...

Karishma Madam ne order diya tha aapko tang na kiya jaye ...

Before Hm can say something, Doctor comes out of Ot, which diverted the attention of everyone toward him..

Doctor sahab kaise hai meri bacchi..

Dekhiye unke sar pe jo cut aya tha usko stitch kar diya gya hai , wo kuch der me hosh me bhi aa jayengi , ghbarane ka baat nahi hai...

Hum unse mil sakte hai, asked by Hm who is in rush to meet her life

Ha .. Doctor answered

Hm rushed toward room followed by everyone...

Ks is lying on bed with open eyes, bandages on head and one bandage on her left hand ,

Pj makes her sit in half lying position, while others surrounded her and Haseena Mallik is standing beside her ..

Kaisa lag raha hai ab aapko...pj asked

Ab theek hai amma , dekhiye jyada chot Thore hi aya tha...

Aap waha akele kyu gaye thi..Hm questioned her all of sudden which is neither expected by Ks nor by others..

Kya...

Aap waha kyu gyee thi...Hm asked in stern voice.

Ms humara farz hai nagrikon ki raksha karna isilye gye the ...

Aap kisi ko to saath le jaa skti thi na , ya phir hume bhi to call kar sakti thi..

Ms hum in sab ke jaan ko khatra me nahi daal skte the aur aapko isiliye nahi bataya kyuki hum aapko disturb nahi karna chahte the , aapke me-time me ...

Aapne back-up force kyu nhi bulaye,jante hai kitna darr gye the hum , jaan nikal gyee thi humari ...Hm asked, this time in angry tone ,anger..

Anger that Ks didn't informed her that she was going in abyss of death..

Aapne bhi to back-up nahi bulaya tha Ms ..Ks answered and removed her bandages from head and hand...

A shock , a releif, a realisation, an understanding of ploy played by her team ... strikes Ms ...

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Ms Nalapar bhut khatarnak jagah hai, aap waha nhi jayeye..

Santu farz ke saamne kuch bhi nhi , apni jaan bhi nahi...

Ms humlog bhi chalenge aapke sath..

Hum tumlog ke jaan ko khatre me nahi daal sakte ...

Ms hum insab ke jaan ko khtre me nhi daal sakte the...

She reached there without any back-up..

Aapne back-up kyu nhi bulaye...

Everything is now clear for her ...

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Ks read the facial expressions of Hm , she understands that Ms get the clear view of everything...

Ms jaisa aaj aapko mahsoos hua waisa hume bhi hota tha jab bhi aap apne aap ko khtre me daalti thi...aur Ms aise apne jaan ko khtre me daalne se kya fayda jisse apno ko dukh aur dard ke siva kuch na mile ...

Every Sacrifice Must Have worth

...KS finished her sentence with a msg

Ms is still there numb not getting what her SI wants to tell her ...

If you died that day in Nalpar area, would your sacrifice be worth it for the society?

Madam sir is silent at her question..

No , because neither we would have benefited nor society would have benefited and after that we would probably never get Nafisa. People were afraid to go what they were afraid of earlier, but now their fear increases because you are an example in the police force and your death is the ashes of everyone... Santosh answered her own question..

Ya she is right my sacrifice will not worth it there , I should have gone there with good and solid planning, one lesson learnt..

Would your sacrifice be worth it if you were killed by that writer?No, because he would have run away by putting a traitor's marks on you, I know Karishma Madam has reached there at time , what if she not... Cheetah asked...

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Najdik ke police department ko phone karke bolo ki tum sucide kar rhi ho ,tumhe aapne galtiyon ka pachtawa ho gya hai...

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I should have discussed about my plan with my team member before taking action on it (The writer had planned to make me guilty of all his dark exploits).........

What If That Bomb Was Real That Day Would Your Sacrifice Be Worth It?No because you were trying to save the life of an inanimate, that place was deserted...Pj said...

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Ms aap kya kar rhi hai..

Hum bomb diffuse karne ki koshish kar rhe hai...

Ms agar wo phat gya to ...

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Sometime it's better to let it go...

Madam sir, we know your passion for your country, dedication to your duty is everything but your life has no value in front of it.what is the matter of life Maddam sir,who can't be useful for the country...Ms you...

I have to value my life and before sacrificing it I have to rethink whether my sacrifice will worth it or not...hum samajh gye Karishma singh aap kya samjhane ka koshish kar rhi hai...Hm ended the sentence of her beloved SI Shahiba...

Dhyanabaad aap sab ka aur sorry bhi aaplogo ko kayee baar aise dubhida me daala hai humne ...Hm said..

Sorry ki koi jarurat nahi hai Maddam sir bas promise kijiye ki aap agli baar aise kadam uthane se pahle sochenge..

Ha hum promise karte hai...

Haseena open her arm for hug..

A hug is important, it can make you releif from many problems...

Waise ye sab karne ka kya jarurat tha...

Maddam sir aapko aapke hi tarike se samjha sakte the na ...

Accha..Hm said in playful manner...

Scene cut with their laughter...

A realisation is important....

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Every Sacrifice should have significance..









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Posted: 3 years ago
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My first OS related to show

Do read the story

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow! Great concept and I totally agree with the tagline! I wish we got to see this on the show.

I'll admit I didn't see the twist coming, I thought it would be a story where KS gets hurt and HM finally expresses her love/care/concern.


So we have one more person on the list of replacement writers for MS, after Rinki and Di.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks, I think realisation is important for her


Love/ concern ye sab purana ho gya hai ab wo karishma Singh ko minor heart attack dena chor de wahi kafi hai.....🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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wow, bohot accha likha hai.


but KS is HM's life, sach me?

KS ki life Rama hai bhaiii

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhimanyu2

Thanks, I think realisation is important for her


Love/ concern ye sab purana ho gya hai ab wo karishma Singh ko mini heart attack dena chor de wahi kafi hai.....🤣


aap log jab itna accha likhte ho toh Kinnari ma'am ko tag karo naa, unko ye sab batao, bohot zaroorat hai show ko revamp ki, jazbaat kaa tagline change karna chahiye. Now they are giving overdose of jazbaat.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hareesh_fan

wow, bohot accha likha hai.


but KS is HM's life, sach me?

KS ki life Rama hai bhaiii


Wo to do-tin epsd ke liye na uske baad Rama kon hai kisko yaad rahega jaise Cheeta ke papa kabhi baadh ke waqt mare hi nahi the waise hi Rama kabhi ayee bhi thi life me yaad nahi rahega...


Waise ks ki life Rama hai but Hm ki to Ks hi hai na 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhimanyu2


Wo to do-tin epsd ke liye na uske baad Rama kon hai kisko yaad rahega jaise Cheeta ke papa kabhi baadh ke waqt mare hi nahi the waise hi Rama kabhi ayee bhi thi life me yaad nahi rahega...


Waise ks ki life Rama hai but Hm ki to Ks hi hai na 😉


Rama kaun hai, baap rey, ye kya bol diya, KS ki jaan hai Rama😂😂

I think jis bhi word ke last me "ND" aata hai vo HM ko milne hi nahi wale kabhi, dekho husband nahi hai, boyfriend nahi hai, best friend nahi hai, in sab ke last me "ND" aata hai naa.

wow, RIP my logic, I think CVs kaa asar hai

😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hareesh_fan


Rama kaun hai, baap rey, ye kya bol diya, KS ki jaan hai Rama😂😂

I think jis bhi word ke last me "ND" aata hai vo HM ko milne hi nahi wale kabhi, dekho husband nahi hai, boyfriend nahi hai, best friend nahi hai, in sab ke last me "ND" aata hai naa.

wow, RIP my logic, I think CVs kaa asar hai

😂😂


Seriously 😂🤣😆


Your logic is still much better than Cv 😂😂🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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When I was reading this I was getting worried the end is KarEena romance or something but super thankful for the plot twist. This was so nice. I wish something like this happens and HM learns her lesson.

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