Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 15

Amazing update! Completely worth the wait 😊

You did such a fab job with Priya's pov and you've knocked it out of the park with Ram's. I keep repeating this, Ram and Pri are complex. Their monologues and back stories extremely essential to comprehend what drives their behaviour. At IF, we're lucky to have a bunch of people decoding things, analysing and providing perspective to dialogues and scenes that have at times been even unwatchable.

How I wish all this was a part of the show! Reading your work makes me wonder how amazing the show would have been had they chosen to take their time with the story and characters.

Thank you for penning this SB! ❤️

Originally posted by: Nashathebest

Hi!

Please update this chapter on Wattpad too!

Thanks

Also i am new to India forums. So kindly ignore if i made a mistake in replying to your post. Thanks

Cara🤗

I read it , it feels immensely great to read posted versions, even though I read the draft pieces…

Baki you know how much I love the povs you put up… ❤️

And yes! Next wala likh ke yehi bej dena , editing easy hoyegi and you can post it up easily too😆

Waiting for the next part.😊

Waiting for the update ❤️

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Cara🤗

I read it , it feels immensely great to read posted versions, even though I read the draft pieces…

Baki you know how much I love the povs you put up… ❤️

And yes! Next wala likh ke yehi bej dena , editing easy hoyegi and you can post it up easily too😆

Yes .. waiting for the next one yaar.

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Yes .. waiting for the next one yaar.

Originally posted by: SummerBorn

Will send you both the rough draft by Monday night or tonight🤣

NOTE: The story has been moved to WattPad! Readers move to the platform to read ahead.