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Posted: 17 years ago
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my fanfiction starts with the bike race . armaan wins.the next day at sanjeevani

armaan- hey guys kissi ne rids ko

atul - nahin yaar

then rids cums in she looks kinda sad and tensed .armaan-yo basket tumhe kya huwa???rids.-kya tum mein se kissi ne papa ko race ke baare mein bataya?

everyone shooke their head

announcment is made that rids should go to shashanks office.rahul- guys dont u think hame riddhima ke saath jana chahiye?? i mean hamne tho bike race organise kee thi &nb sp; atul-haan yaar chalo anjali ham bhi jaate hain.

they see rids going inside they hide behind the door &n bsp; muskaan -oye raool thoda darvaaza khol

srry gottogo

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ill try to post at 6:30 india time .thnx fr the nice and sweet replies
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!
congrats for starting an ff!
it sounds interesting so far...
could u PM me when u update?
Thanks!
take care
Priyanka
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 2--( this part is specialy dedicated to the people who appreciated me) 😊
they heard the following conversation
rids-papa please unhe maaf kijiye woh sab tho aek khel tha.
shash -pls riddhima .tum monitor ho .ye sab nahi hona chahiye tha. tumhare 25 marks minus ho jaaenge.u may leave now 😡 😡
rids goes she is kinda sad but she is also happy that armaan called her basket 😳 😳 😃
she doesnt see anyone there .the normal duties go on . during break doctor keerti calls them to her cabin.
keerti .gud morning interns. i must say aap sab ki performance mein improvement aaie hain exspecially doctor armaan 👏 👏
armaan - thnx dt keerti.
keerti- ok interns .there is a gud news .aaj raat hum sab aek camp mein jaeinge woh sanjeevani ka doosra orphanage hain.so aap sab ghar jaakar taiyariyaan kijiye
atul - anjali bohut mazzaa ayegaa na??
anji-yes atul .
rids is still sad that papa cut her 25 marks.she goes to the famous armaan-ridz exit.armaan follows her he felt bad that her marks were deducted.
armaan- hey riddhima
rids- armaan tum yahaan kya kar rehein ho????? 😕 😕
armaan-kyun main yahaan nahin aa sakta kyan??? 😉
rids -nahin aisi koyi baath nahin hain.
armaan - rids hum kab tak aise jaghadte rahainge???he extends his hands and says"friends?"
rids was beaming with happiness
rids- sure
both shake hands .

guys ill update later my heads paining pls reply
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Sabahat!
awww that's a really sweet update!
oh no...you've got a headache? go and get some rest! hope you feel better soon!
update whenever you get the time!
take care
Priyanka
Edited by *believeinlove* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THANK U EVERYONE FR THE NICE REPLIES I WILL UPDATE SOON TODAY I GUESS
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Posted: 17 years ago
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here is a short promo
THEY GO TO CAMP .THEY MEET SUM CUTE KIDS AND SHARE MANY ROMANTIC AND FUNNY SCENES

guys im srry ill try to updat tomorrow if i can i hav high fever im hiding and typing this . by da way my name is sabahat . im 11 years old . u can call me saba or chingi . i prefer chingi . its my pet name. pls pray i hget well soon . i hope i get well soon .
luv , sabahat
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey chingi, i hope u get well soon. u kinda caught me by surprise here. i mean being just 11 yrs old u can write such amazing ff. gr8 job 👏i am still in shock. plzzzz continue soon but first take care 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part..continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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THANX GUYS FR ALL THE WISHES .THIS PART IS SPECIALLY DEDICATED TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO HAV APPRECIATED ME AND ALSO MY BEST FRIENDS -SHRAY AND AYSHA .AND IM ALSO FEELING A BIT WELL. NOW ILL WRITE THE PART.

PART -3
PRECAP- ARMAAN RIDS BECUME GUD FRIENDS .LATER EVERYONE IS ASKED TO GO HOME AND GET THEIR STUFF .RIDS CUMES BAK TO SANJEEVANI AFTER GETTING HER STUFF. SHE CAM IN DA LOCKER ROOM AND SHE SEES ARMAAN TRYING TO TIE HIS SHOELACE 😆 😆 😆 . SHE CULDNT HELP IT SHE BURSTED OUT LAUGHING 😆 😆 😆 .
ARMAAN- HAHA HASLO . 😡 ASIF TUMHE SHOELACE BANDHNA AATA HAI.TUMHE PATA HAI KITNA TOUGH KAAM HAI????TUM BANDH KAR DIKHAO NAA🤪
RIDS -OK FINE PAR AGAR MAINE BAANDH DIYA TO TUM MUJHE KYA DOGE??/?? 😉 😉 😉
ARMAAN- KYA CHAHIYE???
RIDS- TUM MUJHE KUCH DOGE .KYA DOGE WOH MEIN BAADME BATAOONGI.
ARMAAN- ACHA BABA . JALDI BANDHO .SAB AARAHEIN HAIN.

SHE TIES IT FR HIM. AFTER TYING SHE SAW THAT THERE WAS SUPERMAN COMIC BOOK BESIDE HIM 😆 😆 😆

RIDS-(SAYING TO HERSELF- OMG ARMAAN ABH TAK COMICS PADTA HAIN?????? 😲 😲 . I THINK MAIN SABKO BATATHI HOON .AUR SAB USKA MAZAK UDAENGE HEHEHEHE 😈 😈 )
RIDS- ARMAAN PATA HAI KYA????(SMILLING WICKEDY)
ARMAAN- KYA?
RIDS - HEHE MAIN SABKO BATAOONGI KI TUM COMICS PADTE HO!!!!!!!! 😈 😈
ARMAAN IS SO SHOCKED
ARMAAN- RIDDS PLS AESA MATH KARNA MERI REPUTATION KA SAWAAL HAI.
RIDS- NAHI MAIN BATAOONGI. 😉
ARMAAN- NAHI!!!
RIDS- HAAN !!!
ARMAAN - NAHII

SUDDENLY ATUL ANJALI RAHUL MUSKAAN CUM AND ASK KYA HAAN NAHI???????????????

ATUL - HEY GUYS TUMLOGO KAI BEECHMEIN KYA HO RAHA???
RIDS - OK GUYS SUNO MUJHE NAA KUCH ANNOUNCEMENT DAINI HAIN
ARMAAN- NAHIN KUCH NAHIN DAINI HAIN . HE LOOCKS PLEADINGLY AT RIDS
RAHUL - JI RIDHEEEMA JEE( 😆 ) KYA ANNOUNCE MENT HAIN??
MUSKAAN OYE KAAN KHAJURA TU CHUP NAHI REHSAKTA KYA?
RAHUL - OYE MUSKAAN MAINE TUJHSE TO BATH NAHIN KI.
ANJALI - OH PLS GUYS PHIRSE MATH SHURU HO JANA
ATUL. HAAN ANJALI SAHI KEH RAHI HAI 😊
ANJALI - OH SHUT UP ATUL
NOW EVERYONES FIGHTING

RIDS - GUYS ! GUYS!! GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
]RIDS- MAIN KUCH KEHNE WAALI THI KI ARMAAN AEK BABY HAI 😈 😆 WOH ABHI BHI SUPERMAN COMICS PADTA HAIN

EVERYONE BURSTS OUT LAUGHING . HAHAHAHAHAHA HEHEHEHEHEHEHE HOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO 😆 🤣 🤣

ARMAAN- RIDS KI BACCHI MAIN TO TUJHE NAHIN CHODUNGA

BOTH STARRT RUNNING AROUND ARMAAN BEHIND RIDS AND RIDS RUNNING
RIDS GOES BEHING ANJI AND HIDES
ANJALI- GUYS STOP IT
ARMAAN- FINE PAR RIDS KI BACCHI MAIN TO TUJHE NAHIN CHODUNGA
RIDS PUL HER TOUNGE OUT

THE END

SRRY GUYS COULD ONLY RITE THIS MUCH . STILL HAVB A BIT OF FEVER . DO U GUYS WANT ME TO PM U WHEN THE PART IS UPDATED THEN DO TELL . I WILL AND ALSO WITH THE LINK 😊 😊 . HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT . PLS REPLY . I WILL GET MORE ENCOURAGED TOP RITE LONGER PARTS

LUV ,
CHINGI 😊

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