•MaAn - Soul's Connection• part11| pg36

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Posted: 3 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Nysha11
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Zarur Kyu nahi le abhi 1 minute mein upload karti hu next part 😍😍....apka hukm sar ankhoon par.......

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Posted: 3 years ago

#152

Done with the update......you can check dear .......and remarks de Dena......😁

Bata denta papu pass hai ya fail,.....😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Wwwwmm
Done with the update......you can check dear .......and remarks de Dena......😁
Bata denta papu pass hai ya fail,.....😅😅

ek dum passsssss🤣

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PK_MaAnlover

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Posted: 3 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Nysha11
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Thanks for the tag nysha🙂

I had not read this FF earlier. Did it now n story is interesting 👍 would love to see how it unfolds.

U have written it pretty well 👌

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Posted: 3 years ago

#155

Hey Nash!🤗

Finally caught up with the last 3 updates. Thank you so much for tagging me without fail! I truely appreciate it my dear! Kya kahun? Sab ek se badhkar ek zabardast the! I love fighting karnewala AK! His concern for Anu, his injuring himseld and holding himself responsible for her miseries, his conversations with Bunty where he poured his heart out, the childhood flashback especially the twist uff! Awesome! Loved it thoroughly! Do update soon.

Love,

Noorie

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Angel_nk11

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Posted: 3 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: PK_MaAnlover

Thanks for the tag nysha🙂
I had not read this FF earlier. Did it now n story is interesting 👍 would love to see how it unfolds.

U have written it pretty well 👌

thank you so much 💓 glad u liked it 💗..

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Angel_nk11

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Posted: 3 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Noorie17
Hey Nash!🤗
Finally caught up with the last 3 updates. Thank you so much for tagging me without fail! I truely appreciate it my dear! Kya kahun? Sab ek se badhkar ek zabardast the! I love fighting karnewala AK! His concern for Anu, his injuring himseld and holding himself responsible for her miseries, his conversations with Bunty where he poured his heart out, the childhood flashback especially the twist uff! Awesome! Loved it thoroughly! Do update soon.
Love,
Noorie

hey noor 👋

Glad u liked them all and thank you so much for the detailed review 😊 🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

#158

▪︎PAST KNOCKS IN?▪︎

Anuj and anupama walked around the class collecting names for solo competitions..where as devika sat glaring Vikram..Vikram sat confused and at the end thought anuj should clear everything to devika not him..while kavya fumed looking at anuj and anupama discussing things and smiling through out

The duo (maan) went to staff submitting the list of students..they were informed that tomorrow early morning couples selection will happen..keeping that in mind one of the teacher said them to bring sheets and charts to make simple posters and to write students name

The duo nodded while anuj marched in the store room & anupama went to devika to inform her about staying in college for a while

The day had come to an end it was 4:00pm..when finally anupama entered the store room unaware that kavya followed her and as soon as she went in kavya locked the door from outside with an evil smirk

K - ab pata chalega tumhe anupama ke jo cheez mujhe chahiye hoti hai wo mae hasil karke hee rehti hun..jald hee mae anuj ki girlfriend bhi ban jaungi aur class representator bhi

Where as anuj was standing on stool searching for plain sheets..anuj looked at anu who was collecting card boards while she muttered being annoyed when the bulb turned off

Anu - yaahan ki bulb ki kya problem hai.. aur na hee koyi window hai

Saying she walked upto door..she tried opening the door but was unable to..anuj got down and asked

Anuj - kya huwa

Anu - pata nahi door open hee nahi hora hai

Anuj - ruko mae try karta hun

Anu nodded while Anuj tried opening it but it didn't open..he banged the door while looking at the watch

Anuj - abhi toh sab ja chuke hongae aur staff room bhi 3rd floor pe hai toh humari awaz unn tak nahi pahunchegi..

Sweat formed around anupama's face..there was no source of light..anuj searched for his phone only to find it completely dead

Anuj held her shoulder while she pressed her eyes tightly

Anuj - anu tumhara mobile kahan hai?

Anu - wo maine devika ko diya tha

She fumbled while replying & anuj turned worried..he banged the door again knowing their voice won't reach out but still

That's when something grazed Anupama's feet..she opened her eyes and looked down to find a mice..in nano seconds she jumped on anuj while anuj wrapped his hands around her waist in shock

Anjaane ho tum, jo begaane ho tum

Jo pehchaane lagte ho kyun

Tum gehri neendon me jab soye soye ho

Toh mujhme jagte ho kyun

He smiled while she held on to him tightly and whispered

Jab tujhko paata hai

Dil muskurata hai

Anu - anuj please kuch karo mujhe andhere se daar lagta hai aur yaahan toh rat bhi ha

In a flow he exclaimed

Anuj - janta hoon tumhe andhere se daar lagta hai..but please calm down mae kuch karta hun

Kya tujh se hai waasta

Kya tujh me dhoondu main

Kya tujh se chaahu main

Kya kya hai tujhme mera

She snuggled in his embrace while he patted her back..he kept banging on the door but none responded

Jaanu na main tujhme mera hissa hai kya

Par ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagaa..

After a while they sat leaning on the door while anupama was still in his embrace & the rat roamed around the room making anupama afraid while Anuj's condition was no less

He being claustrophobic wasn't able to breath but he tried hard to act normal to make anupama comfortable but alas he couldn't act more and started trembling and sweat beads formed around his forehead

When his trembling increased anupama looked up..he closed his eyes when he felt tightness in his chest..he wasn't able to breath

Anupama patted his cheeks whispering his name..his hold on her waist tightened while his mouth turned dry

Aankhon ne aankhon se kahi daastaan

Tumko banake raazdaan

He revealed breathing rapidly- I'm claustrophobic anu

Her eyes turned wide she rubbed his hand on his chest to calm his breath but it didn't help

Baahon me jannat aa gayi khushnumaa

Tum jo huye ho mehrbaan

She wiped his face from her duppata and blew air around his face

Anu - anuj please ankhien maat baand karo..tum aisa socho ke tum garden mae ho aur bohat windy mausam hai

Anuj heaved with a smile

Anuj - kya..tum..mere..saath ho

Anupama nodded as he was responding thats what was required now

Anu - haan tum aur mae garden mae hain tumne yellow colour ki t shirt peheni hai aur maine

But stopped when she felt him not responding..she gulped and moved forward and whispered with teary eyes

Anu - I'M SORRY

Jism se jism ka yun taaruf huaa

Ho gaye hum sanam rooh tak aashna

she cupped his face and attached her lips to his passing him the necessary air..he heaved rapidly while she rubbed his back pressing her lips on his

She had never been close to anybody as she was today..she is helping him out in the most beautiful manner..she had never thought of loving a guy then kissing was obviously out of her dictionary

She scolded her mind saying it wasn't a kiss but mouth to mouth resuscitation to save him..but she felt good why?

He started opening his eyes feeling better only to find the love of his life completely worried but stiffed at the moment he felt their faces so close and the movement of her soft lips against his rough lips

Anupama looked at him and moved away looking everywhere

Anu - tum theek ho

He gave a slight nod while she stood up..he tried getting up but felt drained out..anupama forwarded her hand and he held it..he stood up

They felt someone opening the door and gazed at the door happily it was the peon who had come to check on a teachers order

They looked at peon and thanked him stating about how they were stuck..the peon smiled and said

Peon - shayad ismae bhi koyi bhalayi ho tum dono ke liye

Anupama looked up at anuj only to find him already gazing at her..she gulped and looked away..

They started walking out and kavya fumed at the thought that she had locked them together where as she wanted the opposite of it

Ek zara jo chale do kadam saath me

Mill gaya hai hume zindagi ka pata

They climbed down the stairs when anuj trembled at the mean time anupama held him by the elbow and they walked together

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Anupama entered her room to find devika sleeping on the bed she gazed at the mirror..she looked disheveled..she closed her eyes when an image played slightly blurred..the image she is seeing every day from past 15 years..she feels incomplete..there is a part which has not got a completion

The image had a boy talking to her infact asking for friendship..the image some where resembled to the afternoon cafeteria incident when she asked out anuj for friendship

The image also resembles to the story she always feels connected with "childhood diaries" its not that she is imagining it..she had read the story for around 2 years but she gets those flashes for almost 15 years why?

Tujhse taalluk jo nahi kuch mera

Kyun tu lage hai apana saa

Why does every damn thing connects with you anuj?

Dekhu jo tujhko ik nazar

Jaaye bhar mujhme hai mera jo khala

Why does he complete her? How come he so lovingly fill her voidness

Zindagi me khushi tere aane se hai

Warna jeene mein gham, har bahane se hai

Why him again?..everytime she is afraid, everytime her past memories embrace her why does she always find him at the right place right time available for her

Hai yeh alag baat hai hum mile aaj hain

Dil tujhe jaanata ik zamaane se hai

Kya wo shayar lekhak ye bachpan ka ladka aur anuj koyi ek hee hain..ya bas ek itefaaq?

She closed her eyes tightly and held her head

Jaanu na main tujhme mera hissa hai kya

Par ajnabi apna mujhe tu laga

Jaanu na main tujhse mera rishta hai kya

Par ajnabi apna mujhe tu laga

She traced her lips and whispered - Anuj

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As usual the trio (devika vikram & anuj) had went out late night leaving anupama in her room but this time it wasn't a casual outing..they sat on the bench of a bus stop near by and the frustrated devika yelled

D - koyi mujhe batayega kal raath kya huwa tha..tere haath mae chot aur gehri hogayi hai.. phirse apne room mae Jakar bhi tune apne apko takleef pahunchayi hai?

She asked anuj and turned to vikram

D - aur tum kahan thae subha college kyun nahi aye

Vikram looked at anuj eyeing him to speak and anuj started, holding her hands

Anuj - devu please shant hoja..sab bataunga tum dono ko .. bas itna wada karo ke ye Baath kisi aur ko nahi pata chalegi

Vikram nodded and devika said nonchalantly

D - siwae anu ke kisi ko na....

But anuj cuts her in middle

Anuj - anu ko toh hargiz nahi

Devika raised her eyebrow questioning

Anuj closed his eyes and said - I..wo..wo..I

Devika rolled her eyes in annoyance

D - agae bolega

A - I LOVE ANUPAMA

Devika spoke - haan I know u have a girl friend
But when his words registered her mind her eyes turned wide..she glanced at Vikram and he nodded

D - tu anu se pyaar karta hai..humari anupama se?

Anuj nodded

D - tu mazak kar raha hai na

V - nahi devika ye sachmae anu se humari anu se pyaar karta hai

D - phir wo girlfriend

Vikram narrated the whole incident which took place last night and why he had not attended the morning class

Devika slapped Anuj's shoulder and cupped her mouth

D - you love anu..anuj loves anupama

She jumped in happiness but stopped when questions popped up in her mind

D - ek second toh tu ne usse bataya kyun nahi

Anuj turned around and said

A - tujhe kya lagta hai anu jaisi ladki kissi se pyaar kar sakti hai kisi se shaadi karne ke liye taayar hosakti hai..

D - kya matlab I mean Haan anu ko pyar shadi inn sab pe koyi bharosa nahi hai par iska ye matlab nahi hai na ke uski zindagi mae ye stage kabhi nahi ayega..

V - exactly ayega kya aa chuka hai

Anuj in irritation exclaimed

A - ayaa par sirf meri zindagi mae anu ki zindagi mae nahi aur jo kuch dino se ho raha hai.. mujhe nahi lagta ke ye stage anu ki zindagi mae kabhi ayega

Devika and Vikram stood confused while anuj continued

A - mae anu ko bachpan se janta hun

This came as an shock to the duo

V - tu anu ko kaise jan sakta hai tu toh mere saath US mae tha..hum ek saath rahe hain

Anuj looked at the sky and exclaimed

A - maine tere saath apna bachpan bitaya hai par jab mae 7 sal ka tha tab se..par usse phele mae anu se mila tha

D - par kab kaisey tu US mae tha aur anu US toh kya Ahmedabad se tak bahar nahi gayi

A - anaath ashram mae mila tha

V - tu anath ashram mae kya kar raha tha..seedhe se batana

Anuj sighed and gathered all of his courage and stated

Anuj - mae aur anu ek hee ashram mae rahe thae..mae orphan tha

Devika & Vikram's jaw dropped at the revelation

A - mere hisse mae toh maa papa agaye as angels par anu ke hisse mae aj bhi akela pan hee likha hai

They gulped

A - anu ke saath bachpan se bohat sari problems huwi hain bohat saare zakham uske hisse aye hain jis pe aj tak malham nahi lag paya hai..usse apne aap se apne hone se nafrat hai..nafrat hai usse apne anjaan maa baap se..yehi major wajah hai ke wo kabhi rishton pe pyaar pe aur shaadi pe bharosa nahi karegi..par ab ek hope hai jab wo seminar mae love ke baare mae bol rahi thi toh uska point of view samjh aya par wahi baath agar usse connect karke bolien toh wo nahi manegi..bharosa hai thoda sa par karne ki baari ayegi toh nahi karegi

D - par anuj tu usse ek baar Baath toh kar kya pata maan jaye

A - Baath..Baath toh mae har roz karta hun apni shayari aur kahaniyon ki thorough usse aur tune Jane anjane mae anu ko phone deke mera kaam asaan kardiya hai

D - kya

V - par anuj anu ko uska bachpan kyun yaad nahi hai aur tujhe kaise pata ke bachpan wali ladki aur humari anu ek hee hain

A - memory ka toh mujhe bhi nahi samjh araha aur rahi Baath pechan ne ki toh uske submitted documents jo college mae hain uski details se confirmation mila tha par usse bhi badi Baath jisse maine usko pehchaana tha wo tha ehsaas..jisse bachpan se pyar kiya ho usse mae na pehchanu aisa kaisey ho sakta hai aur mae India aya hee usi ke liya tha warna kya US mae colleges nahi hain

D - jab itna pyaar karta hai toh bata kyun nahi deta

A - bataunga jab wo apne apse aur mujhse pyaar karne lagegi

V - aur wo kab hoga..jo 2 saalon mae nahi huwa wo ek saal mae kaise hoga..ye humara last year hai anuj

A - janta hun..aur anu tak meri feeling pahunche isiliye maine likhna shuru kiya tha aur chilhood dairies padke bhi agar usse samjh nahi aya ke wo meri aur uski kahaani hai toh its sure usse kuch yaad nahi hai

Devika turned completely shocked

D - tu likhta hai aur wo kahaani wo childhood diaries teri likhi huwi hai..jo anu 2 salon mae itni baar padh chuki hai jo ab ki trending book hai market mae

Anuj nodded..Vikram held Anuj's shoulder

V - aur kya kya chupaya hai mere majnu

Anuj chuckled

A - bas itna hee

Vikram punched on his stomach

V - acha ye itna hee toh tera Kitna toh na jaane Kitna ho

Devika slapped Anuj's shoulder

D - anu se chupaya samjh ata hai par hum se kyun chupaya

A - kya karta jab mae khud sure nahi tha toh tum logon ko kya bata ta..waisey har waqt mere saath rehne ke liye khaskar ke kal saath rehne ke liye thank you

D - itna senti kyun ho raha hai

A - aaj maut ko itne khareeb se dekha toh logon aur waqt ki qadar samjh ayi

Vikram asked shocked

V - tujhe claustrophobic attack aya tha

Anuj nodded

D - kab? tu kahan tha

Anuj narrated how they were locked and how anupama saved him being fully flushed

Devika and Vikram kept their elbows on Anuj's shoulder simultaneously

D - ohho isiliye jab mae so ke uthi toh anu apne apko mirror mae dekhe ja rahi thi

Anuj asked confused

A - really?

Devika nodded while Vikram said