ShiVi TS -- Revenge Game Gone Wrong (16+) CH2 PG3 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Shiri, its been soo longđŸ€—

First of all, thank you to Love for posting this writing prompt.đŸ€— Your prompt has given us one hot ShiVi update which we could not even dream from the show.😆

Now coming to the update, This was HOTâ˜șâ˜șâ˜ș I really really enjoyed reading this.😳 btw, we will get an update for the other ShiVi stories too, right?đŸ€Ș😆

Waiting for all the updates😆

Thank you for the tag😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Reading this piece reminded me of the song "Khulam khala pyaar karenge hum dono" lol!

I love teenage Shivi! So reading about teenage shivi after so long was pretty nice!

The first scene between Shiva and Raavi had me dead! Shiva got bro zoned 😆 And that too because of Raavi!

When Shiva noted that Raavi was the first person to make him shirtless, I found that kinda hot 😛

Damn I did not expect so many lustful thoughts from Shiva's end lmao

Great update!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Gimmeitt

Woahh! Thoroughly enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next partâ˜ș

Always love to read your stories. ❀

Btw when r u updating "fighting the fate".. It's my favorite story of yours. Do update if possible😊


Thank you so much dear 💕

Will try to update FTF ASAP đŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Pinkbell

Ohh baby!!!

This is super hot đŸ”„đŸ”„


Waiting for more!

Do update soon. ❀


Do tag me in the next parts. Please?!


Thank you ❀

Will update in few hours. Will tag you đŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Ufff this was hot

But ab main continue karne ko nahi boloongi kyunki mujhe pata ha tum nahi karti😡


Thanks 😆

Abhi aayega next chapter 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: lovereading14

Thanks for picking up the prompt! Loved the first part, do continue soon :)


Glad you like it. I hope I do justice to your idea :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Shiri, its been soo longđŸ€—

First of all, thank you to Love for posting this writing prompt.đŸ€— Your prompt has given us one hot ShiVi update which we could not even dream from the show.😆

Now coming to the update, This was HOTâ˜șâ˜șâ˜ș I really really enjoyed reading this.😳 btw, we will get an update for the other ShiVi stories too, right?đŸ€Ș😆

Waiting for all the updates😆

Thank you for the tag😳


Poohhh đŸ€—


So glad you like it 😳

Caught up with work so everything is on hold right now. Trying to update sab thoda thoda jaldi jaldi 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: mandira2

Reading this piece reminded me of the song "Khulam khala pyaar karenge hum dono" lol!

I love teenage Shivi! So reading about teenage shivi after so long was pretty nice!

The first scene between Shiva and Raavi had me dead! Shiva got bro zoned 😆 And that too because of Raavi!

When Shiva noted that Raavi was the first person to make him shirtless, I found that kinda hot 😛

Damn I did not expect so many lustful thoughts from Shiva's end lmao

Great update!


Thank you mandira ❀

Glad you like this version of Shiva 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Chapter 2


Shiva hissed as Raavi slapped his fingers with fidgeted to open the button of her shirt.

“We are in school.” She said to him, her eyes wide with annoyance and a tinge of shyness.

“So, can we do this at home?” He said with a smirk.

"What is happening here?!?"

They heard a scream and stood back on their feet. Principal of the school had caught them.

Raavi and Shiva stood with their heads down outside the principal office as Dhara and Hetal went to talk to him. They looked at each other, unable to form words to speak. The excitement of acknowledging their feelings for each other and making out, and the fear of punishment loomed between them.

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“You are going to your Maasi's place, and that’s final!” Hetal said, and she packed Raavi's clothes.

“But Mummy, what about my studies? It's not even the mid-term. I am sorry. I’ll never do this again. Please don't send me away,” Raavi cried.

“Have you thought about what would happen if your father comes to know about this? You can continue your studies there. It was difficult to convinced your papa. I couldn't tell me the reason, but he somehow agreed. You have to leave. No more discussion on this.”

Raavi looked at her mother helplessly. She was just trying to understand her newfound feelings for Shiva, and now she has to go away from him. What on earth was happening with her?

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“If Gaumbi comes to know about this, he’ll beat you to death. Don’t you dare tell him about this!” Dhara said in a dangerous tone as she prepared dinner. “And listen to me carefully, don't even try to meet Raavi ever again.”

“But Bhabhi...”

“Shiva, this chapter closes here,” she ordered "You two are just teens. This isn't the age to do all this".

"You married Bhai the second you turned eighteen!" He bit back, unable to hide his growing contempt.

"Shiva! Behave! This is strike two." Dhara snapped, her eyes narrowed.

Shiva closed his eyes in exasperation. He and Raavi were just at the threshold of, what felt like, a beautiful relationship. He knew that she was the one for him. He had had crushes before, but what he was feeling for Raavi was different. At the age of just 16, it felt so mature to him. But he couldn’t argue with his Bhabhi. He chose to stay quiet till the situation calmed down.

_____

Shiva tossed and turned on the bed. He couldn't sleep for two reasons – he had had his first kiss with Raavi, and he was not allowed to meet her again. God knows for how long!

Hearing a sound near the door, he jumped off the bed in surprise.

“Is someone outside?” he asked.

Without waiting for any response, he opened it and stepped out cautiously. Raavi was looking back at him with a sheepish grin.

“Raavi!” he exclaimed in shock.

“Shhh!” She put her palm on his mouth and pushed him into his room. She locked the door from inside.

“Raavi what...”

“She’s sending me away,” she said urgently. “I wanted to see you before I go.”

“Where are you going?”

“My mother is sending me to my maasi’s place. We won’t see each other for a long time, Shiva.”

Shiva quickly grasped her hand and pulled her towards him. He hugged her. The thought of not being able to meet Raavi was already a punishment for him, and now he won’t be able to even see her. Why was God so horrible to him?

“I am going, but can we be in a secret relationship?”

“What?” Shiva chuckled, but couldn't wrap his head around whatever plan his chipkali had in her pretty little head.

“Yeah, only you and I know, about us. We’ll not tell anyone.”

“Okay.” He smiled.

Raavi smiled back at him happily.

"Can I kiss you?" His thumbs brushed her cheekbones.

She nodded, closing her eyes. Slowly, he kissed her temple, then along her cheek, and lingered at the corner of her lips.

She opened her eyes to see him waiting, and she realized what he wanted, he wanted her to initiate the kiss.

Raavi tip-toed and kept her lips on his. She sucked in his lower lip first. Shiva moaned her name as he felt himself give in to the kiss. She opened her mouth to welcome his tongue in. Raavi shivered as she felt his tongue glide leisurely inside her mouth. Shiva groaned against her sweet mouth as she kissed him back with equal vigor and passion. Her heart was pounding as they both fought for domination.

Raavi quickly pinned him to the wall, leaning towards him. She lazily crept her fingers under his shirt caressing his body. That was a turn-on for Shiva. He could feel her lips on his neck with an urgent need. Raavi kissed his neck passionately while seductively roaming her hands under his shirt.

Lowering his shirt to reveal his chest, Raavi placed her mouth on his bare skin. She started placing wild kisses on his chest.

“Raavi,” he moaned her name, and she looked intently into his eyes. “I know our relationship is a secret. But maybe, we are rushing into this, we should take thing slow. I have never felt what I felt for you, but we have spent a majority of our lives disguising our feelings for each other as hatred, so maybe it will help us if we get to know each other first."

“Soch le, no calls, no emails, no WhatsApp. All you’ll have to do is wait for me.”

“Soch lia, no calls, no emails, no WhatsApp. All I’ll do is, wait for you.”

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The next morning Raavi left with her mother. Away from Somnath, away from Shiva. The promises they made at a tender age were his life for Shiva. But if only he knew destiny had different plans for them.


to be continued....


BR - oye_nakhrewaali

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Ohh!!

Caught you in a minute.


Well, shiva- raavi getting away from each other.

Their teenage hormones!


Still, they would be in secret relationship with no connection.đŸ„ș


How dreamy it is!


Waiting to see how they will meet each other again and share their feelings.

đŸ€ŽđŸ€Ž


P.s.- I read this part before you could even tag me! 😅

Hehehehe.

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