ABHIYA - TS | Her wish and her choice | Completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Hum res nahi karenge 🤣🤣

Seedha comment karenge padhne ke baad 🤣

Res..

I have to read this.. Thanks for the tag

--Edit--

I read the first chapter.. I must say I am impressed Nikki.. Looking forward to reading the second one soon..

But this is the same old premise of hypocrisy of all vampire love stories.. I hope there's a good twist or an explanation at the end..😊

--Edit 2--

So I finally completed.. And I can say I felt satisfied Nikki..

I mean this is way better than any plot what the CVs wrote for the show...

Abhay making Piya think of what she has to loose versus what she might gain... As humans we never think about the life we would live if we knew we are here for eternity.. It can be damaging to one's mind.. Especially seeing our loved ones pass away while we are stuck and when Abhay brought that reality infront of her She was speechless.. As the saying goes the Grass is always greener on the other side..

But at the end of the day It still is HER Choice.. Whether she thinks she'll be able to take all the suffering that might come by turning or not!!! So Abhay being panicked and thoughtful about his worries was crrect and she was correct as well..

There is no right or wrong in a relationship.. Its just the determination of the two how they'll mak it work!!

Sorry for the Banter.. In short..

NICE TS Nikki.. I am happy and not disappointed as I feared that it might be cliché😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha066

Res..

I have to read this.. Thanks for the tag

--Edit--

I read the first chapter.. I must say I am impressed Nikki.. Looking forward to reading the second one soon..

But this is the same old premise of hypocrisy of all vampire love stories.. I hope there's a good twist or an explanation at the end..😊

oh u updated i didnt get notification of update 😆 thanku yeshu. 🤗

I dont know about twist cause for me it was simply addressing a boiling issue between the two. So i just tried to put one of the ways how i imagine the conversation could have gone between them. Hope u enjoy second one too 😊

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

oh u updated i didnt get notification of update 😆 thanku yeshu. 🤗

I dont know about twist cause for me it was simply addressing a boiling issue between the two. So i just tried to put one of the ways how i imagine the conversation could have gone between them. Hope u enjoy second one too 😊

Dekha.. Ise bolte hai bina dekhe kuch bhi comment karna..

Okay..

I'll keep my hopes levelled then.. And will try to read the second part in a couple of days!!😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha066

Dekha.. Ise bolte hai bina dekhe kuch bhi comment karna..

Okay..

I'll keep my hopes levelled then.. And will try to read the second part in a couple of days!!😳

Sure. Thanku. Take ur time but do tell how u like or dislike it 😆😳

I read in one only, it like reading two shots story.

I like the os ❤️

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

are pan vo tharki os me tha. Vaha b res kiya he tumne 😆

Sure. Thanku. Take ur time but do tell how u like or dislike it 😆😳

Acha.. Main use bhul gayi thi.. Okay..

Main aaj dono padh lungi I have time today!!😳

Originally posted by: Abhiya_cute

I read in one only, it like reading two shots story.

I like the os ❤️

Originally posted by: Ayesha066

Acha.. Main use bhul gayi thi.. Okay..

Main aaj dono padh lungi I have time today!!😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha066

--Edit 2--

So I finally completed.. And I can say I felt satisfied Nikki..

I mean this is way better than any plot what the CVs wrote for the show...

Abhay making Piya think of what she has to loose versus what she might gain... As humans we never think about the life we would live if we knew we are here for eternity.. It can be damaging to one's mind.. Especially seeing our loved ones pass away while we are stuck and when Abhay brought that reality infront of her She was speechless.. As the saying goes the Grass is always greener on the other side..

But at the end of the day It still is HER Choice.. Whether she thinks she'll be able to take all the suffering that might come by turning or not!!! So Abhay being panicked and thoughtful about his worries was crrect and she was correct as well..

There is no right or wrong in a relationship.. Its just the determination of the two how they'll mak it work!!

Sorry for the Banter.. In short..

NICE TS Nikki.. I am happy and not disappointed as I feared that it might be cliché😳

thanku so much ❤️ Its not banter it was nice to know how it read to u. As a writer my thoughts were there but getting them on pen and paper and conveying exactly same feeling can be difficult. And your reviews gave me very good insights into it. ❤️

Precisely. Expecting that life would be easy just because u changed into something else is short sightedness and abhay who has seen it understands it well. But piya is right on her own that sometimes someMistakes have to be made to know if they would work. Like u rightly put no right or wrong but rather their determination of making it work will get them through. Her choice! Even when things get difficult he only need to remind her of her choice and that would be enough to get them both through. ❤️

Thank you once again for such detailed review it was really really helpful 🤗