Pihu OS:" Sleepover with Papa" - Page 2

This was so well-connected

We see PriRa through Pihu's perspective & that gives so much insight into Them as Parents & also individuals through the broken snippets of conversations we hear❤️

A really good peace where you also already state how Pihu becomes a medium for her parents to heal ... would love to continue to read further too

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Heart wrenchingly beautiful! ❤️ Ram & Priya have their own baggage to deal with, but it's refreshing to see them work as a unit for the sake of their child 😊 And that's how it should be!

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked the OS 😊. Yeah I tend to not like kids being dragged down by parents separation in ITV for no fault of them. Hence this two OS from Pihu perspective.

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

May be write one in which pihu gets injure because of Nandini and then she breaks down and gives back to everyone pointing what all they did and how ram and priya has to suffer.... Just a request :)

I haven't watched the show yet. So writing on what the characters suffered would be not possible as I have no idea what they went through because of Nandini.

But Pihu getting injured might work. Let me see if I can write something on it. If I got an idea.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Beautiful part

Thank you . Glad you liked it ❤️

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

It’s beautiful and loved the way you write about children. Pihu’s perspective was spot on yet again 👏 you say you donno RaYa but yet u have written so beautifully about them that u would think u had seen the show. Please continue writing 😊 and do tag me or send me a DM when u post something.

Thank you for the lovely feedback. ❤️ Happy to know you liked the one shot and Pihu's perspective. Yeah I haven't watched the show yet and given the current disappointing track I am not sure if I will ever start but maybe if they did this track justice by making a good reunion track I might watch.

Will tag you if or when I write anything more on this show 👍🏼

Beautiful OS ❤️ I loved how you portrayed a little girl's difficulty in coping with the circumstances of changing relationships between her parents. Yet Pihu embraces it all, and her love for her parents and her family made her so brave. Your RaYa also have a beautiful bond. Loved it!

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

This is so sweet..please write more parts..honestly I love this story series more than the show.

Thank you for the lovely feedback. I am glad you liked the series ❤️.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

This was so well-connected

We see PriRa through Pihu's perspective & that gives so much insight into Them as Parents & also individuals through the broken snippets of conversations we hear❤️

A really good peace where you also already state how Pihu becomes a medium for her parents to heal ... would love to continue to read further too

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Glad you liked this OS ❤️.

Yeah a third person perspective sometimes gives a clear picture too . I have no plans for more at the moment but I do have an idea. Not sure if I would right on it as of now.

Originally posted by: tournesol

Beautiful OS ❤️ I loved how you portrayed a little girl's difficulty in coping with the circumstances of changing relationships between her parents. Yet Pihu embraces it all, and her love for her parents and her family made her so brave. Your RaYa also have a beautiful bond. Loved it!

Thanks Tia ❤️. I am so glad you liked it ☺️. Yeah I like writing from Kids Perspective more 😆. Well I don't know how my RaYa would shape up now that I watched the show 🤪

res😭 missed so many stories due to not visiting this forum😭