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Posted: 3 years ago
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I think they focused more on ASR character and to some extent on his sister and mother. The other side characters they just add for trp and to take the story forward.

Initially when BM and BD came to Rathore mansion she didn't have mile long sindoor. It was after a couple of episodes they showed she is married but no mention of her family, only focused on BD.

I want to know why she wants the money of ASR....are Rathore's rich by family or just Aryan 's father was rich like self made billionaire.

I agree the storyline or the characterizations is not well written but that maybe because they can have the freedom to add or remove. As like I have read in comments even Tripathi house few characters just disappeared into thin air. The production house will have many challenges and no individual can predict what's gonna happen in their personal life or what situation arises.

So yeah creative liberty and all ....the audience gets served with this half baked storyline. Everything can't be perfect in real and ITV is known for this. Like we didn't know Narmada was working, Arpi was topper and she was working, they will just let us know through some dialogues here and there. Budget constraints will also be there, so i take everything with a pinch of salt....if you don't like it then we can always be on and off the serial. But in general we fall in love with one character and build up too much expectations and feel let down when they creatives for the sake of trp show us anything, case in being Narmada becoming dumb...and nowadays for past month or so Imlie tracks are being shown at super sonic speed.


At the end of the day it's all a business not some serious content show which is giving a social message, for everyone its job for which they are paid.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vienna

Please could anybody explain it to me why Aryan is considered progressive? I haven’t watched last weeks episodes but from few clips here I gathered Aryan and Imlie did the deed after their tree house date and Aryan didn’t use protection. Aryan asked Imlie if she was alright with pregnancy after declaring the said pregnancy to the whole family! Didn’t he marry Imlie to save her from T family’s burden? Didn’t he promise Arpita that he will not let anyone take advantage of Imlie because of her young age? I mean everyone agrees that Aryan is the mature one in their relationship then why can’t he make sure to plan their pregnancy considering her young age? After all he wanted Imlie to fulfil her dream of becoming the top journalist.

I am sorry don’t mean to be rude but I kind of blame Aryan for being irresponsible and that is not popular opinion here so I was wondering am I missing something from the story?


Hey Vienna, I understand your concern. Now this is where I agree and disagree with you.

Don't know about the rest, but I speak for myself when I say that I was (still am) miffed at Aryan. I had voiced that ever since. Cuz I expected more of him regarding this. Now, why is this not being discussed by the majority? I am guessing the jet speed of the events which took place last week has everyone reeling. Lol..you still have many firmly believing that all this is a plan! Like one episode you have the confession and the very next, you have a hint of a pregnancy..with a vague timeline of 1 week provided by BD! People are still debating if they even did the deed! 😆 I have realized there isn't any point in staying annoyed and have moved on to wanting to know what happens next.

My guess is both of them got carried away. Consequence wasn't on their minds. Both are not clearly ready to have children. (Hint: both of them shying away from the topic..and their shocked & dazed expression on seeing the result) Yeah..one shot is all it takes 😆 but honestly tell me, what is the success rate for this to happen? (1 in 20 chance even on the right days) And they are legally wed,were in their senses and consent was sought (important point)

A valid point was raised by Blue here ..one, that I didn't think of earlier. Maybe they took necessary precautions but still things happened!

As to where I disagree with you, are we going to wipe out all his 'progressive' thoughts just cuz he effed up this time? Lol..didn't the entire fam wait outside the bathroom to hear the result (who does that?) It wasn't as if Imlie spoke to Aryan in private then he openly declared the preg..and afterwards gave Imlie the choice. Even if the family did know about it.. and Aryan specifically mentions it, that the final choice would be only Imlie's. And what makes us think that Aryan wouldn't support her or speak up about it? (Lol..truth be told, isn't Imlie also responsible for her body? Afterall she saw the consequences of a night of no protection did to Adi and Malini ) And it isn't just for his pro choice statement that ppl are terming him progressive, it's the result of many of his actions and statements. The fact that he even spoke up to highlight her choice! If BM who has a regressive mentality speaks sane for one incident or does the right thing, we are gonna praise her only for that situation and not overlook all her other bad deeds. I feel the same for Aryan. Call him out where we feel he f'ed up..but that doesn't make him not progressive, does it? I maintain that stand for every character.

Edited by _AmyChoco_ - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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I can understand your frustration. Most of us who started watching the show after Aryan's entry got attracted to it for the progressive way they had presented Aryan and how with him Imlie too had started threading the same path. But now, everything is reduced to only social messages and saas-bahu drama; there isn't a balance. And that's really testing our patience.

Having said that, I also am of the opinion that we are still living in a society where we come across lots of incidents daily, that shocks us to the core and we are left unanswered why such cases happen even in highly educated/high class societies. And one such incident that left me really bewildered last year is given in the below link. Both the victims (daughter's) as well the culprits (parents) were well qualified and in no way one can think that such a superstition will ever creep into their minds. And if it is not the underlying fears, what else could have led to such brutal acts? Hence, more than money, knowledge or anything else, it is a sound mind that think wisely which is needed to overcome such superstitions (I have a special request to those weak-hearted to not read through the link)

https://www.dnaindia.com/india/report-andhra-pradesh-couple-kills-daughters-superstitious-beliefs-2870585

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The serial has a fixed format

100+ Aditya-Imlie episodes good

200+ fillers

100+ Aryan + Imlie episodes good

200+ fillers

if anyone has patience...

Story format will not change.

Reasons:- the story is contrived right from beginning... forced marriage

So the basic theme cannot change else serial has to end.

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Now Aryan is supposed to be infertile maybe because universe decided that misunderstandings can lead to seperation.. Again some half baked few episodes till folks realize that too was false note..

For drastic changes... some one from Imlie or Aryan have to turn crooked or ambitious... or they have to just get seperated for story to move on.

Arylie if all love to see... the makers get into problem of story telling

This was also for Adlie.. and thankfully Malini volunteered to be core main vamp... for story to push till it became just hamming.

Same mode it is moving forward..

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Time for some dashing new hero's entry

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Narmada's face looks thoroughly bored in last few episodes as if she is just following master's instructions where there is no logic left.

Similar type of bored expressions were seen earlier mid last year on wards..

Aryan, Imlie, Sundar and Arpita look excited

Doll, Blue and Universe super charged

but script is so poor that no one can save this mess but the witer's themselves.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Two things i would like to say

1. Education just provides us with worldly knowledge..it doesn't make you wise.

So many educated people still believe in shitty ideology and some illiterate people hold most progressive thoughts. Even on the show Malini and Anu represented the educated but unwise people and SK and Meethi represents the other.


2. Not all billionaires loves to live a lavish lifestyle. Because they know by the fact that money doesn't make you happy.

For example Mark Zuckerberg lives in a small apartment in San Francisco with his family and drives a simple normal car. There's many more examples like him. Warren Buffett is also one of them.

Maybe Rathores are like that and doesn't like to show off 😂


P.s BM's BG is established through her language. She belongs to a village around PD and that's how she knows Meethi. Sometimes they don't show BG explicitly but built through the dialogues and characters behavior.

Edited by Wilddreams - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_


Hey Vienna, I understand your concern. Now this is where I agree and disagree with you.

Don't know about the rest, but I speak for myself when I say that I was (still am) miffed at Aryan. I had voiced that ever since. Cuz I expected more of him regarding this. Now, why is this not being discussed by the majority? I am guessing the jet speed of the events which took place last week has everyone reeling. Lol..you still have many firmly believing that all this is a plan! Like one episode you have the confession and the very next, you have a hint of a pregnancy..with a vague timeline of 1 week provided by BD! People are still debating if they even did the deed! 😆 I have realized there isn't any point in staying annoyed and have moved on to wanting to know what happens next.

My guess is both of them got carried away. Consequence wasn't on their minds. Both are not clearly ready to have children. (Hint: both of them shying away from the topic..and their shocked & dazed expression on seeing the result) Yeah..one shot is all it takes 😆 but honestly tell me, what is the success rate for this to happen? (1 in 20 chance even on the right days) And they are legally wed,were in their senses and consent was sought (important point)

A valid point was raised by Blue here ..one, that I didn't think of earlier. Maybe they took necessary precautions but still things happened!

As to where I disagree with you, are we going to wipe out all his 'progressive' thoughts just cuz he effed up this time? Lol..didn't the entire fam wait outside the bathroom to hear the result (who does that?) It wasn't as if Imlie spoke to Aryan in private then he openly declared the preg..and afterwards gave Imlie the choice. Even if the family did know about it.. and Aryan specifically mentions it, that the final choice would be only Imlie's. And what makes us think that Aryan wouldn't support her or speak up about it? (Lol..truth be told, isn't Imlie also responsible for her body? Afterall she saw the consequences of a night of no protection did to Adi and Malini ) And it isn't just for his pro choice statement that ppl are terming him progressive, it's the result of many of his actions and statements. The fact that he even spoke up to highlight her choice! If BM who has a regressive mentality speaks sane for one incident or does the right thing, we are gonna praise her only for that situation and not overlook all her other bad deeds. I feel the same for Aryan. Call him out where we feel he f'ed up..but that doesn't make him not progressive, does it? I maintain that stand for every character.

Bold: Lol even I am hoping against hope that this is a plan! I will laugh out loud at the ridiculousness if this was a plan.

Anyways, I have personal reasons to be offended with this pregnancy track so I will let Aryan Singh Rathore take the brunt from my side. I am like that gogglebox audience who would take out their frustration on the tv with some choice words 😆 My point was I enjoyed the old Aryan from mirchi bazaar where I couldn’t fault him whereas now I have to give him pass if I still want to like him. Of course All makers doing and my concern is I can’t enjoy this water down version of Aryan.

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