FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 64

Originally posted by: Kp26

This one is beyond my thinking.. SOO REAL.. i wish iska 5% bhi serial mai yeh convo show kar de na.. bahut better ho jayega.. every minute details, the flashbacks, everything! I m so glad i gotta read this update!🥰

Thank you so much dear Kashish! So glad you liked the update! Iska 5% kya yeh topic chhede toh sahi! They don't want to acknowledge that Anupama is an abuse victim. Mukku ke time pe bhi disaster hi hua tha.

Originally posted by: SKCS

Wow that was so deep! Beautiful ❤️

Thank you so much dear SK!🤗Y

Means a lot! ❤️

Originally posted by: DJ_3

I like how you write their conversations and how they both ponder on it. It makes these as not simply talks, but an actual application. Thank you so much dear DJ! ❤️You are always very generous your praise for the dialogues and monologues! 🤗

As talks are cheap and its the action of the person that matters. 🤗 Absolutely! 👍🏼

Please let there be no tragedy with Anu's ending thoughts 😔 No there won't be. Relax.

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Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This is beautiful Noorie... My new favorite chapter ❤️ Wow! Makes me so happy! Thank you dear tia! ❤️

The last bit brought tears to my eyes *sigh*. Really really beautiful ❤️Oh soo beautiful...❤️ Her realizing the toxicity was necessary for her to move on completely with Anuj❤️ Yes. Unless she closes that door she won't be able to move ahead fully and more importantly, without guilt.

Thank you for this part Noorie🤗For tearing the faces of so called saints of the show.... Pleasure is all mine! Worshipped like saints for no reason.

I felt overwhelmed at the end❤️I will re read this multiple times definitely ❤️ specially the last part... it was so poetic, beautifully painful💔 Thank you so much dear! So glad you liked it enough to read it again even though it's a very sad and painful chapter!❤️

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Originally posted by: name2saakshi

For update n tagging me

Thank you so much dear Sakshi! 🤗So glad you liked this part! ❤️

Originally posted by: isyhm

I hope anu doesn't take a wrong step

Absolutely loved your take

Way you described the trauma

No. She won't.

Thank you so much dear! So glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Peppss

Ya the generalisation of every issue is such a mood killer...they have been ruining the maan moments with the Ted talks... Ikr! Ruins the whole romantic vibe of the scene. Most of the time it's like RG talking and GK nodding. I seriously hope the Ted talks will stop now that they're married!

I only reason I could come up with for the prequel is that they were simply trying to cash in on the popularity of the show and RG... otherwise it doesn't make sense... Yes that and they wanted to satisfy the ego of a certain someone because (fingers crossed) his screen space will be reduced after MaAn wedding.

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Originally posted by: tanu90

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback dear Mitu! 🤗Always helps the writer. Means a lot! ❤️❤️❤️Last line ⭐️Finally!

Always a joy to read your story! And especially the shayari. Though I missed it in this one. But given the nature of the update I understand. Waiting to read next part.

Originally posted by: Km181

Part 25

Hey Noorie, hey Komal! 🤗So glad to read your comment here! ⭐️

yaar ye kya kiya tune.

ye taar kuch aur hi the,

jazbaat kuch alag se the,

alfaz naye, andaaz naye,

dil ko choo gaye, saaz aese the,

hamesha yaad rahe, aghaaz aesa hai

Wow! Amazing! Zarra navazi ke liye bohot bohot bohot shukriya! 🤗

This was way too emotional, somehow while reading felt gloomy and sad for Anuj. Its no secret that I have had a soft corner for him and probably still do. I understand dear. Character hi aisa hai/tha.

I always wish for happy endings. Honestly, we all know this would never happen in serial because ITV FL are Mahaan Perfect Sacrosanct. As you said, this reminded me of my OS Chai Pe Charcha. So, i can relate to your thought process to certain extent while writing this piece. Yes that's why I thought you'll be the perfect person to review this one!

I was pleasantly surprised to see you include even Dolly and Sanjay along with Bapuji. Dolly has always been polished emotional manipulator who only cares for her family. For sure, if Sanjay had cheated Dolly, she would not have care about family and Bapuji would have taken her back home. Exactly! The very reason he gave one portion of house to Dolly. Today, if you ask me entire SH is toxic including Kinjal, Pakhi and Samar; who see all wrongs yet ask for their rights. Sad but true. This is sad part people always fight for their rights but no one comes forward for the responsibility. And now Anupama herself has become toxic the way she started using Anuj and made him bend to SH folks. And anuj is more like a yes man. Glad to see at least some where this toxicity ends and makes ways for fresh air, happy endings.

As always, all your dedication and hard work is seen the way you incorporate FlashBacks so well. I always wonder if you go back and watch those episodes again before writing.Yes I do. Thanks for the encouragement as always! I so missed your shayari's dear. Missed your comment! You can go back and read the previous part. You'll find Anupamas shayari for Anuj! Greedy me wants your feedback for college special part also. No rush. Read at your convenience. This was one of my fav FF and i used to wait to read your updates even during mid-nights. Wo bhi kya din the. Same here! Those were good days for MaAn from the show too! Keep the good work going dear and best wishes. Best wishes to you too dear! ❤️Thanks a bunch for the lovely shayari!🤗🤗🤗

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This was surreal and wow.. such truth bombs.. they both healing each other slowly.. how gorgeous is that.. Thank you so much dear Rupsi! ikr. Both of them need to heal. It's so sad to see that Anuj's wounds are not acknowledged in the show. They only talk about his intezar.

thankyou for this Noor.. loved it.. ❤ Pleasure is all mine sweetheart! always always a pleasure reading your work💖❤

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I had wished that they showed his trauma too.. but oh well..high hopes.. thankfully we have you to fill in the voids 🤗❤😘