FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 62

Originally posted by: rupsii

Nooorrr.. khub khub abhar.. 🤗 ❤ for the tags and sharing your story. Its always refreshing. Thank you so much for all the love dear! ❤️🤗

Didnt mean to put pressure on you for the update babe.. hope i dint sound rude 🙈Not at all! Jalsa karo ne! I completely understand the eagerness and excitement as I am also a reader!😊

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Originally posted by: tanu90

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🤗🤗 you are a sweetheart ❤❤❤

This was the best part till date.. partly may be bcoz I wanted this convo between MaAn. But can never happen in the show. Thank you for including it that too with sheer &blunt truth..


PS. I read your FF in one go from yesterday & it is fantastic! Main quality being very logical, sensible, unbiased story. Also your dialouge writing is great.. feels like they r actually conversing in front of my eyes.
keep writing pls.. can u update frequently plssss? I am too greeedy for good content!

Noorie

I loved this part.

Such a heartfelt conversation, and was much needed. Your writing was so beautiful Noorie that it didn't feel even once that I am not reading steamy romance☺️. Beautifully written just like Maan.

Lovely ,thanks for sharing ❤️ dear.

Perfect update Noorie dear! Starting to ending each part was fabulous! Somebody needed to drill the hard hitting truths in Anupama's mahaan head! I loved the way Anuj compared her situation with Kinjal. That was the real eye opener for her. Each step of her realization was very nicely done. The college flashback was amazing as usual! You always rock with Bunty Anuj scenes! It added a nice touch of comedy to the otherwise serious part! The last paragraph won my heart. Anupama finally realized what strength it requires to be "the Anuj Kapadia!"

This one is beyond my thinking.. SOO REAL.. i wish iska 5% bhi serial mai yeh convo show kar de na.. bahut better ho jayega.. every minute details, the flashbacks, everything! I m so glad i gotta read this update!🥰

Wow that was so deep! Beautiful ❤️

Thank you for tagging me✨🙌🏽✨

I like how you write their conversations and how they both ponder on it. It makes these as not simply talks, but an actual application. As talks are cheap and its the action of the person that matters. 🤗

Please let there be no tragedy with Anu's ending thoughts 😔

This is beautiful Noorie... My new favorite chapter ❤️ The last bit brought tears to my eyes *sigh*. Really really beautiful ❤️Oh soo beautiful...❤️ Her realizing the toxicity was necessary for her to move on completely with Anuj❤️

Thank you for this part Noorie🤗For tearing the faces of so called saints of the show....

I felt overwhelmed at the end❤️I will re read this multiple times definitely ❤️ specially the last part... it was so poetic, beautifully painful💔