Late-night text part 4

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Shot 4

He had been looking at her beautiful face. Her cute little nose, soft and supple lips, deep soulful eyes staring at the tiffin box. Upar wale ne kya khoob banaya hai " aur iss nacheez ne kya click kiya"

He sat on the sofa in the living room. His leg stretched on the table, crossed at ankles while he relished the visual treat.

"Bro kuch pata chala?" Vicky asked and sat with a thump beside him.

The soft sofa had plunged deep with Vicky's weight and the mobile Maan had been staring at staggart in his hand. With a thumping heart and quick reflex he managed to land the mobile phone on his lap.

He whacked at vicky's head and the

Kya bhai pata chala! Abhi mera phone gir jata.

Tiffin ka" Vicky responded grumpily.

"Tiffin ka" Maan repeated his words, teasing him. "Fasto kam khaya kar weight dekha hain apna sau ke upar hoga"

Beep!

His mobile bells, the WhatsApp bell.

"Parathe bahot bahot tasty the" he seeing the message on the notification bar forgetting vicky who was standing on his head.

Kya yeh wahi maan bro hain jo mere naraz hone pe mujhe meri favourite recipe banate the.

Maan looked at his brother irritated. " what?"

"Bro I think you seek my apology and that's the reason you made those Paratha"

Vicky was serious. Really serious.

His round face had been turning red and the little brother in him was not little any more. Maan could see it with a side glance.

Still!

He couldn't take his eye off the face of another foodie on his mobile.

DADIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

P. S. This part had been written long back but due lack of interest i didn't post it....but now on demand of heycookie iam posting this.... enjoy it dear.

hello

thank you so much for continuing...

I couldnt comment on the last thread as it got locked but I really love the concept of the story....geet stealing maans tifin to fill her homemade food craving is totally relatable....i loved their meeting under the tree...maan couldnt keep his eyes off her n she being all shy shy was cute...liked this little part too

maan drooling the pic he took he seems smitten already...

seems like everybody at maans home r foodie ..vicky is cute btw...cant wait to read more n more

thanks for the update

Short 4

Superb update.... nicely written

ahh Maan admiring Geet

Gosh Vicky has perfect timing lol

liked Maan teasing Vicky

ahh so Geet messaged Maan praising the paratha

Vicky's question was reasonable

Maan is indeed irritated

update soon

Kindly update your other Maaneet stories, thanks

Part 4

Firstly thanks for continuing

I love Maan drooling at his phone's picture

he certainly is mesmerized by Geet

wow Vickt another foodie

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thanks for continuing

lovely update

He is drooling over a picture. How well does he know her?

Hi there!

please post next update

thanks

Hi hope you are fine

can we expect an update??

really hope you come back and update this one

May we please have an update?