FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 51

Originally posted by: ektag06

I have loved the song halka halka suroor and each line gets to me everytime I listen to that song. Yesterday it hit different as I remembered your story. I mean…🥹😍🥰

Thank you so much dear Ekta! I love that song!❤️❤️❤️Yeh mera nahi MaAn ka jadoo hai ki har gana un par sunne ke bad bas unki hi yaad dilata hai! ☺️

Congratulations Noorie for the 25th! 🤗🤗I love your poetry as that is what drew me to your story!❤️This update had everything from fun, banter, comedy to romance! Thanks for including Devika! The canteen portion was amazing the best was the last! ☺️☺️

Nooooriieeeee ❤️❤️❤️

No more words to say how beautiful and wholesome this part was. I slept off reading this and I slept happy. I just have one ask - mujhe Mera AK chahiye 🥹🥹🥹💙 and tumhari aur bhi shayaris chahiye. 🧡🧡

Enjoyed it dear!! 🤩🤩🤩

Your shayari's are always beautiful...they have my heart❤️... congratulations on 25th part...its a treat to read your story...

This was sooooo beautiful💕💕💕

The poems were so apt and loved their friendship and of course romance

I think the makers have been stalking your ff.. They're sending maan to a college date on a bike😍

Loved it as usual!!! Was waiting impatiently the entire sunday!!

Can't wait for Wednesday now❤

P.S. congratulations on your 25th part!!🥳

Originally posted by: tanu90

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👏..many more to come..💘

saprona matlab spelling theek hai?..wo kya haina mujhe Gujarati ati nahi hai jst tumahare translations se samjhti hun aur hindi bhi bas upar upar se aati hai..😔

OMG, it was magical, how I wish to explore their college life more and more and you make it alive by ur writing, ❤❤❤ the best part is this story that there is not unnecessary Shah family involvement, shaayari was once again ❤❤❤, waiting for next phase of their life.

Wonderful noorie, I always appreciate how you translate the dialogues from gujrati tot hindi or english for all readers.

I always feel like I watching a play on MaaN story as I read each section and how well you link the story to each characters past. 🤗👏🙌

Macchar uthakar le jaaenge🤣This one broke me😆

I will say this again but you are so so thorough. And you are thorough becoz you have clarity of thoughts and you know how to express them- something I really want to learn from you- this impeccable detailing because I 🥱am super lacklustre at writing these.

Lastly, your shayari as always was mind-blowing❤️. Full on mahol banane wali🤣

(Lowkey was expecting more😳...you know what😉)