Originally posted by: Sainath-394-cid
I think this whole thing could've been done better.... urmila is shocked with her sudden farewell....as a goodbye speech she inadvertently recreates the video message scene of ep 394 in her mumbaikan language , everyone's transfixed at their spot , frozen as the realisation dawns on to them that Urmi is maddam sir urmi leaves when she sees that no one is moving ( because why wouldn't she?) By the time mpt members get out of thier trance urmi has already left, they try to track her phone....
Urmi visits HM's house and takes her uniform as a final souvenir....she is depressed that she has to leave ( in this AU she feels that she's not worthy of being in HM's shoes that's why she doesn't protest when she's asked to leave) and goes to a bar....bulbul pandey follows her and takes advice of her drunken stupor and turn her against mpt team....ks calls right at that moment...urmi hangs up.....hires a bunch of goons ks reaches that fight sequence place , this time around she pleads with urmi to remember her past....urmi doesn't listen....goons beat ks up....urmi remembers that she is HM....fight scene happens , heartwarming mpt reunion + sincere aplolgies + returning the money + ammi apology scene....
Is this one any good?
XD can you please take over the writer's seat?? you'll do a better job than them at apology scenes!!
 
 
 
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
  
  
  
 
  
 


 
 
  
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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