MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 16

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Some more...

bro tere yeh drabbles life saviour hain mere liye!!

foa tks for the tag..!

and this was amazing... really amazing ride🤗

Aww loved it mann, absolutely adorable😍, hehe thanks for mentioning that stubble one, when i was younger i used to rub my cheeks with my dads for that stubble feeling😝😌

This was so....sexy...I know there was not even a kiss but the way you portrayed them as a couple...those little gestures..

Anuj's "come here"

Anu's "shy smile

"Anuj asking she likes his stubble or not

Anu resting head on his shoulder...

All these are giving couple vibes....these little things are missing in the show.

We know they wont give us any more than hugging but these little things can establish how close they have become and there is no aloofness. They are like normal couple

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

This was so....sexy...I know there was not even a kiss but the way you portrayed them as a couple...those little gestures..

Anuj's "come here"

Anu's "shy smile

"Anuj asking she likes his stubble or not

Anu resting head on his shoulder...

All these are giving couple vibes....these little things are missing in the show.

We know they wont give us any more than hugging but these little things can establish how close they have become and there is no aloofness. They are like normal couple

I feel these simple gestures, phrases enhances the scene and are not too explict either, can be shown on TV. I dont understand why they dont. 🥺

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Anu: nods to indicate she likes it… his eyes hover around her lips and is about to kiss….❤️😳😳

….the taxi comes to a grinding halt, jolting them. He has to get off…🥺💔🤔😳

It was cute as usual Smitha❤️

You are hum gareebo ka sahara😆

Ye anupama makers to audience ko zeher hi de de bcz romantic scenes to in se diye nahi jaa rahe waise bhi🤡

This was miles better than what they showed! Thank you for the tag 🤗😎❤️

This kind of intimacy is normal for a couple. Any couple, but especially those about to get married. Not even talking about the attraction or chemistry, just the couple vibe.

This vibe is somehow missing most of the time. It was only apparent in the dressing room scene.

They have kept them too far, too aloof. For a couple about to be married they need to up the game now.

Thank you for the tag..you are giving the writers a run for money here..bahut serious competition hai.

Wow, this would have been perfect follow up scene after the acceptance.

Makers to confuse hai ek din trp ke liye achcha dete hai, next day hero ke liye aaj ke jaise duh scene dete hai

Thank you very much for tagging me!

Scene: After Anu's wedding anouncement in grand style, Anu & Anuj are in Udaipur.

The lack of continuity in the show has prompted me to write this. What if…

The taxi breaks down few feet from a tourist attraction. They both get off , Anuj makes work related phone calls and asks for the meeting to be postponed/cancelled. He apologizes and offers to have a video conf instead and promises to visit personally sometime soon.🤔

Anu & Anuj walk hand in hand and reach a beautiful lake overlooking a palace. ❤️There are a lot of visitors buzzling around. They look at each other and he understands that she isn’t comfortable around the crowd.

They navigate their way around and find a shaded spot by the lake around the gift shops, where they choose to sit to catch the breathtaking view of the palace.

“kahin dur… din dhal jaaye…. sanjh ki dulhan … “ playing in one of the shops is faintly heard. Anuj chuckles…😊

Anu: kyun hass rahe hai?

Anuj: shakes his head, holds her hands to trace his fingers on her palm and says – “sanjh ki dulhan….” tumhari tarah😳❤️ and continues...

Anu! ye tumhare liye doosri shadi hai, par mere liye…… I don’t know how you feel about this😲

Anu: Sach batao toh, bahut ajeeb lagta hai. Shah parivaar se mera naatha hamesa rahega, mere bacchon ki wajah se. Mr.Shah se mera koi rishta nahi hai, par woh mere bachchon ke pita hamesha rahenge.

Anuj: I can understand. 🤔

Pata hai Anu.... mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi hota hai, ke ye shadi…. I mean, I still cannot believe … woh bhi tumse, jisse mein itne saalon se beintehaa pyaar ….❤️❤️

Anu: She turns around his hands and begins to trace her fingers on his palm like he did …. and says “ jaanti hoon.😳 Issiliye mujhe darr lagta hai ki mein aapko itna pyaar de paaongi…. ? kya mein aapke pyar ke kabil hoon ya nahi, …. mujhe darr hai….😒

Anuj: Grabs her hands and brings it to his lips…😳❤️

Anu: stops abruptly, and asks “aap mujhe itna pyaar kyun karte hai?”

Anuj: shrugs and says… pyaar cheez hi aisi hai jiska jawaab shabdon mein nahi de sakta, ye kaisa hota hai, kyun hota hai…. inn sawalon ka jawab….

Anu: she pushes further ...."phir bhi… batayie ne… aapko mein kyun achchi lagti hoon?”😳

Anuj: I like your simplicity, your presence of mind, woh masoomiyat, tumhari himmat, ….. you know your ‘can do’ attitude…… everything, everything that makes you “you”🤗❤️

He stops and says… “promise me…. tum waada karo ki mein tumhare saath rahoon na rahoon…. “

Anu tightens her grip in his hands and leans on his shoulders….

Anuj continues… “tum aage badogi, apna pehchaa, naam..….…” bends down to meet her eyes and see her eyes have welled up.

Anuj: holds her chin and turns her face to meet his gaze… hey…kya hua?

Anu: kuch nahi.... ..aapko pata hai mein aap se kyun prem karti hoon?😳

Anuj smiles signaling her to continue

Anu: aap mujhe zinda hone ka ehsaas....

Anuj interrupts her midsentence, comes close and kisses her lips oblivious of buzz around them😉😳❤️

------

Just whipped up something to break from boredom. Kahin door jab din.... was playing in my car stereo today, so used it in this piece. 😊 btw, I have no clue of the tourist spots, just imagined something.

They say that - it is not how good the other person is, but how you feel in their presence. Anu's self confidence was killed by her ex, while Anuj makes her feel valued.

I wish they are able to express how they feel about taking a big step like marriage at this point in their lives.

Anyway, aisa hota toh kaisa hota? 😳drop in your comment to let me know..